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harmonicaaa — For me.
Published: 2011-05-20 22:14:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1110; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 19
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Description Give me a kiss, my love,
Sending shivers down my spine,
Your arms around my waist,
Let me know you're forever mine.

Pick me a leaf, my love,
Trace the veins with your fingers,
Then leave it to the wind
To keep it safe until it withers.

Tell me your dreams, my love,
And the meanings that they hold.
What corners of your mind
Do I have yet to explore?

Sing me a song, my love,
Close your eyes in that way of yours.
I'll drink the sound of your voice,
And I'll always ask for more.

Now take my hand, my love,
Pull me down and hold me close..
Your love has become my drug
Now let me have my overdose.
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Comments: 17

ExodusCross [2011-05-23 01:59:35 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem

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harmonicaaa In reply to ExodusCross [2011-05-23 09:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. (:

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africanpearl [2011-05-22 06:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. The last two lines don't really fit with the rest of the poem but the rest is pure, well... poetry!

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harmonicaaa In reply to africanpearl [2011-05-22 11:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Pure poetry is a great compliment.

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alittlebitoffaith [2011-05-21 19:17:54 +0000 UTC]

oh this is awesome never heard anything like it i lovfe it love love love it this is amazing nice job

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harmonicaaa In reply to alittlebitoffaith [2011-05-22 11:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!

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alittlebitoffaith In reply to harmonicaaa [2011-05-23 05:10:03 +0000 UTC]

your welcome like the color changing avatar! haha

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harmonicaaa In reply to alittlebitoffaith [2011-05-23 09:18:42 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Un-Far [2011-05-21 05:36:59 +0000 UTC]

It's good. I have changed some of the text in this version.

Kiss me again, my love,
Send shivers down my spine,
Your arms around my waist,
Be forever mine.

Tell me your dreams, my love,
Of faith and hope and more.
In the corners of your mind
In the face that I adore.

Whisper my name, my love,
Close your eyes in that way
I'll drink the sound of your voice,
The night long and often, the day.

Now take my hand, my love,
Pull me down, hold me close.
Your love has become my drug
Serve me my overdose.

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harmonicaaa In reply to Un-Far [2011-05-22 12:01:34 +0000 UTC]

I like your version. It has an image of something more idealistic than in mine, and it sounds softer, I guess. And yet, yours is more of a command, while I'm always asking, wondering, except in the last verse. Thank you for this.

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Un-Far In reply to harmonicaaa [2011-05-24 06:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps this is because I am a middle aged man and you are a young woman.

As an aside it is wonderful that someone so young can write poetry like this in a language that is not your mother tongue.

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harmonicaaa In reply to Un-Far [2011-05-24 08:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps. Although I don't think I'll ever stop wondering.

Well, I did learn english at quite a young age, so it's not very extraordinary. (:

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EmptyBusSeat [2011-05-21 02:21:59 +0000 UTC]

I Love reading this poem! It makes me think of my special someone

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harmonicaaa In reply to EmptyBusSeat [2011-05-22 11:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. Thankies!

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FadingAqueous [2011-05-20 22:34:30 +0000 UTC]

i adore it. it is simply beautiful. And the last two lines make a huge impact on the poem, in my opinion. ^^ Great job

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harmonicaaa In reply to FadingAqueous [2011-05-22 11:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you thank you!!

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FadingAqueous In reply to harmonicaaa [2011-05-22 17:21:05 +0000 UTC]

lol you are welcome my dear

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