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HeartedPixels — Savior x Princess
Published: 2012-06-23 01:53:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 40641; Favourites: 1160; Downloads: 721
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First base done by request
First time I've drawn muscles on a base too, not very good, I know, but I have a less muscular option if you like.
Tell me if I screwed anything up (besides the muscles, unless you can give me advice for the future on those).
Rules: [link]
Original picture: [link]
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Edit:
IF 5 OTHER F*CKING PEOPLE ALREADY POINTED OUT A F*CKING ANATOMY ISSUE, YOU DON'T HAVE TO F*CKING SAY IT AGAIN!
GODDAMN IT I'M FIXING IT! I ALREADY HAVE A F*CKING SMALLER BREAST OPTION AND I FIXED THE DEFORMITY IN HIS FOREHEAD!
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Bases heads are normally pretty big from what I can gather. Either way I don't think I'll be able to fix it.
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alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest. Someone was right pointing out the boy's fingers were behind the sword, so they weren't fully drawn. And the forehead, I'd say it is due to his spiky hair it looks a bit big here.
But most importantly, she asked for ADVICE, not for people making rude comments, you can tell whatever you want about anatomy, but don't be that rude, because you can offend the artist (both, in this case).
Anyway, despite all these amount of negative comments, I thinks it looks pretty good, you did a great job and if there are anatomy faults, IT IS MY FAULT. So sorry for that. By the way, looking at the favorites, it didn't went that bad, I'd say
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Thank you for the defense, I told a few of the commenters what you said regarding this.
No need to apologize, they aren't even anatomy faults anyway, since Orihime is supposed to look that way. I'm glad you think it looks good. ^^
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No prob, I just had to say it ^^
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In response to your description edit: YOU asked for help, for everyone to tell where you went wrong. "Tell me if I screwed anything up (besides the muscles, unless you can give me advice for the future on those)."
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I know I asked, but I didn't want a bunch of different people to say the exact same thing over and over and over again. It just gets repetitive.
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It's a lot better of a base than I've seen many people do
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the (fore)head looks very strange on the guy....like an alien or something.. and the female's boob is also odd-looking
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Hey, you tried your hardest, that's all that matters x
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Does this only have to many views because of how the anatomy is bad?
Every comment is about how bad the anatomy is.
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I agree, her breasts are too large and a bit deformed. And his head looks to be bulging, but that might be because of the gap, which also should not be there. The other half of the fingers on his hand need to be drawn. And maybe it's just me, but her upper lip seems a tad too big.
Anyway, that's just my opinion.
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"alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest. Someone was right pointing out the boy's fingers were behind the sword, so they weren't fully drawn. And the forehead, I'd say it is due to his spiky hair it looks a bit big here."
Just to let you know what the original artist had said about this.
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If someone does a gender reversal of this, I will be extremely entertained.
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The girls arms are too skinny, so is her waist. Her boobs are also too large, unless that's what you're going for. Also the gap in the guys nose shouldn't be there. His fingers are also a bit too short too. ^^
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"alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest. Someone was right pointing out the boy's fingers were behind the sword, so they weren't fully drawn. And the forehead, I'd say it is due to his spiky hair it looks a bit big here."
That's what the original artist said, just to let you know.
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Oh well, that's okay then. She did ask for our thoughts and those were mine so.... yeah :/
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the gap you've drawn on the man's head (between his and the woman's) shouldn't be there. that's the line of his nose, but the rest of his face and his other eye are hidden behind her head. right now it looks like he's got a bit of a bulging forehead, see?
Also, what was mentioned about the fingers. because the original he was holding a sword his fingers are bent over. Once you remove the sword you need to draw the other half of the fingers as they'd be viewed in a relaxed fist.
That's the big things I noticed, but other than that I think it's well done C; Gold star.
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My brain cells died after seeing this. The anatomy is horrible.
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Okay, since you're the only one who didn't give me advice, you're just down right insulting me, this is what the original artist said in a comment below.
"alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest. Someone was right pointing out the boy's fingers were behind the sword, so they weren't fully drawn. And the forehead, I'd say it is due to his spiky hair it looks a bit big here.
But most importantly, she asked for ADVICE, not for people making rude comments, you can tell whatever you want about anatomy, but don't be that rude, because you can offend the artist (both, in this case)."
I realize that base artists should be able to edit anatomy, which I did for a couple of parts, but that's what she said.
Have a nice day! ^^
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...What is the top of her breast doing lol. Their heads look decent, I guess.
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... I don't even... I just... wow.
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The breast is just .... damn, lol.
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The girl's lower body looks a little wide...since that's her waist, her legs would start about right below his arm.
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I know, it's because the girl in the original picture is wearing a dress. I tried fixing it, but it ended up looking worse that way, so I'm just leaving it.
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Ah, that makes sense. Never mind then
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Her arms are awfully thin compared to the rest of her body..
And her breasts are a little too large, unless that's what you were going for.
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"alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest."
That's what the original artist said, but thanks for your advice anyway.
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Hmm.. I would suggest redoing the breast. Looks kind of unnatural. Also, the fingers on the male are a little short.
Other than that, looks good.
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"alright... as a little DEFENSE of this base and MY OWN PIC... let's see, that girl is a manga character that has too big breast, and too skinny arms, that's the way she is and I follow that path. The breasts had that form in the top because they were crushed against the boy's chest. Someone was right pointing out the boy's fingers were behind the sword, so they weren't fully drawn. And the forehead, I'd say it is due to his spiky hair it looks a bit big here."
That's what the original artist said in the latest comment, but thanks for the complement anyway.
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Um... hat to say it, but just take a good look at the top of the hero's forehead where the princess's overlaps...
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Does anyone know what the original photo looks like anyway?
If someone has it I would be interested.
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a link to the original picture is in the description uvu
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Oh I didn't see that, thanks!
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Uh, I'd say not so many lines. The muscles in the actual pic are mostly due to shading and so adding too many makes it look odd. I'd only do the big, main ones.
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I guess so, thanks. I'll remove a few of them tomorrow.
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