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Prologue
Bluster meets the sky. Then she meets the ground again. Whoever that pony is, he's trying to take her alive. Don't worry, we'll finally get to see Bluster's colours shine in the next pages.
I wanted to convey a fairly potent moment, and cut it short with a small bit of action. Hopefully both of those came across well enough.
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Comments: 17
Heimdal00 In reply to GaruuSpike [2012-07-09 20:35:00 +0000 UTC]
I know, right!
The Side Stories Update post on EQD is a really unfortunate place to get a comic posted up at, but it's better than not getting up on EQD at all. I don't think there's anything I can do about it, either.
Enjoy my comic!
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OLEG778 [2012-06-02 14:19:41 +0000 UTC]
It's a win! It's a very interesting! I translated this into Russian for Russian bronies, they liked, and they are waiting for continue!
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Heimdal00 In reply to OLEG778 [2012-06-06 20:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Can you hit me with a link to the Russian translations? I'd love to see them myself as well!
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OLEG778 In reply to Heimdal00 [2012-06-08 07:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Of course, translations here [link]
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Heimdal00 In reply to OLEG778 [2012-06-08 22:39:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm really impressed! I did not expect to see a translation pop up at all. I'm planning to submit my comic to the big Equestria Daily website once I get the next couple pages done; I think I'll include your translations as well, because they deserve to be included.
Anyways, expect to see the next couple pages along next week. They are in the works, just being a bit difficult.
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Heimdal00 In reply to OLEG778 [2012-06-05 16:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Really? That's awesome!
I apologize for the current delay. New pages are on the way!
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Wisdom-Thumbs [2012-05-17 23:46:41 +0000 UTC]
Effective, but the second panel could have been much better if you'd drawn Bluster much smaller and in some sort of vista shot.
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Heimdal00 In reply to Wisdom-Thumbs [2012-05-17 23:52:00 +0000 UTC]
I considered that, but that's already what the Ch.1 title page was. This one was more focused on her own mind-bogglery. Could always be better though.
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malikvamp [2012-05-17 18:49:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome I am loving this comic sooo much! Can't wait to see where this goes!
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Heimdal00 In reply to malikvamp [2012-05-17 18:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I appreciate the enthusiasm!
I can assure you that where ever this goes, it will involve ponies!
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Heimdal00 In reply to tdog12 [2012-05-17 17:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Had the drop on her, and didn't want to put away the gun just in case.
I'm not entirely sure why a pony-wielded weapon would have a stock at all, but whatever. We understand it.
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tdog12 In reply to Heimdal00 [2012-05-18 03:47:43 +0000 UTC]
I envision a sniper rifle being braced on a pony's shoulder, and supported by the ground on a hill.
A stock is feasible.
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slicerness In reply to Heimdal00 [2012-05-17 21:37:12 +0000 UTC]
it's fine to use human weapons as well, just remember to call them griffon designed. pony weapons would have a mouth piece instead.
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TheLastDefender In reply to Heimdal00 [2012-05-17 18:57:36 +0000 UTC]
They probably would still need a stock to steady there weapons. Probably a bit different then our stocks though.
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