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for a school publication.what the hell am i doing.
tell me what you think maybe, i don't know about this.
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thepapermouse [2009-01-14 05:53:59 +0000 UTC]
I really like your use of the ink blots and the cut outs in repetition. For me though, I get lost on the middle panel. It does't have the same over all strength and clarity as the other two(esp. against the first one which I really dig!) If you're looking to make changes, I would work with that one to make more understandable. Even if it feels crudely straightforward to you, I think you'll be safe 'cause your overall aesthetic on this piece is very slick and elegant <3
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thepapermouse In reply to thepapermouse [2009-01-14 05:54:32 +0000 UTC]
ah...i'm sorry! that was way longer than i meant it to be....
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hellokbear In reply to thepapermouse [2009-01-15 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]
HILLLARRYY no man, I really appreciate your input >_< means a lot to me, so thank you!! and yeah, I see what you're saying about the third panel, thinks get muddled on that one ><;;;
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thepapermouse In reply to hellokbear [2009-01-15 02:17:25 +0000 UTC]
oh good! best of luck then with any amendments you make <3
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romanshoubu [2009-01-14 01:35:05 +0000 UTC]
I guess this is more of an experimental piece from you? Somehow it reminds me of 1970s fashion illustration. I don't know about it either, but the parts that are painted(?) with the double image are really nice.
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hellokbear In reply to romanshoubu [2009-01-15 01:42:36 +0000 UTC]
yeah, this was like a "IDK what the shit i'm doing" experiment, hahah (*_*;; the figures are cut outs from a fabric pattern and the double images are inkblots uwahh.
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hellokbear In reply to DeactivatimusPrime [2009-01-15 01:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, KAT!!! >O<
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