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If you like this then please consider joining my group!
Woke up this morning and saw the giveaway 100+messages! Thanks alot for the Daily Deviation!
If you like this they you might also like my dA Journal Creator!
PLEASE READ THIS GUIDE BEFORE USE!
Behold! My latest invention!
The Critique Creator:
This one lets you critique deviants work in the same way that subscribed members can.
Just enter the critique, rate the deviation out of 5 stars for each aspect, and the Critique Creator generates the code!
Then just paste it into a comment to that deviation and it will be formatted in a similar way to official critiques, including the star-ratings.
The star-ratings are as follows:
Vision
Does the artwork present or reflect a point of view, theme or idea?
Originality
Is the artwork fresh or new in its style, execution or approach? Is it something you haven’t seen before in its particular genre? Does it surprise you?
Technique
Was the artwork skillfully created?
Does the artist exhibit advanced knowledge of the medium and/or bring special focus to the craft of the medium used.
Impact
Does the artwork resonate with you or evoke strong emotions? Does it make you think? Does it blow your mind?
Deviousness
Anautomatically created average rating based on your selections within Vision, Originality, Technique, and Impact.
Rules for the #Critiques-Requested group!
Before submitting your deviation:
Before submitting your deviation to our group, copy the following code and paste it into the end of your deviations description:
:iconcritiques-requested:
Click here to create a critique!
A good example of what this code looks like is here: Friendship by NaturallyLecherous
This lets people know you're looking for critiques, and gives them a link to the groups Critique Creator. It also let's US know that you actually want critiques are aren't just looking for publicity
Before leaving a critique:
Before leaving a critique, please remember that the artist is looking for helpful, useful and well structured critiques!
Only provide critiques if:
You can provide in-depth feedback for the deviation.
You can offer advice or point out areas that can be improved.
If you can't give alot of advice and help, then simply leave a comment instead!
If you'd like to learn how to give critiques then please read our Useful Critique Guide !
Anyone can leave critiques on any deviation in our Critique Gallery using our Critique Creator , even non-subscribed memebers!
Click here to create a critique!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 I think you're missing the point 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 2 agreed. it is awesome 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 Thanks alot! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Umm... I tried to copypaste this code in deviation's description, but the code just stays there as it is. The same. It's not transforming into your colorful link bar. Just a code... Even in preview and even after saving the result of editing. What's wrong? 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Hi! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Oh... But here it is in the description: Friendship by NaturallyLecherous 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Oh I see what you mean. Simply copy this and paste it into your deviation's description! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Woah. Now it works. Thank you very much! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Yes you can, and thanks! 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 It's hard to press the generate button! It's still in a faded color. Am I doing something wrong? I already rated and did the amazing comments! But, no matter how many times I click, it won't do anything. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 The only time it should be faded out is if you've not yet reached the minimum words limit. 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 My pleasure, happy to help! 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Glad you think it's useful! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 More testing than Aperture Science here 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Glad you like it! 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 1 Thanks for the feedback! 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0 👍: 0 ⏩: 0Related content
Comments: 613
This looks like a fantastic tool for non-premium members; a tool that, if used correctly, could help break down that seemingly unibreachable barrier that inevitably forms wherever and whenever users of a public system are divided into normal and higher-class users.
The aforementioned being said, I believe that in terms of Vision, it ranks very high.
As for Originality... well, I haven't exactly seen anyone else do what you've done here, besides DA itself.
Technique: I've yet to test it, but you can be sure I'll put it to good use when the time comes.
And finally... Impact. Honestly, though I think it's both amazing and incredibly generous of you to not only put this together, but to share it with the DA community... it is, all in all, something I've seen before. Although it does not surprise me, it does look exactly like the real thing - therefore, I can't give you anything less in this category.
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sure I will use alot after 28th, I am sad about my premium account expiration but this will allow me to give even more quallity even after this( or until a buy a new one, but I dont has resources for any time soon).
many thanks for this. I will put it on my ( maybe using your dA Journal Creator as well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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This is my first ever critique, so...um...yeah.
The picture is simple and basic, and that is great. The background, however, I think should be colored, like a pastel color that doesn't recieve too much attention though doesn't make the user of this absolutely bored. This background is too bland in my opinion. Although the yellow stripes are a nice touch.
It is a very nice piece, if you ask me. It really teaches the user how to make a good critique, not to waste anyone's time and just basically troll.
The technique is good, but you should've been more descriptive in the instructions. I guess you deserve a three-star minimum on that.
Impact is good, but not wonderfully great. It's kind of boring, really, and you should've added a little touches here and there. Otherwise, it's really great.
For a test critique it's pretty good. There's not much to look at however. The background is too simple, and doesn't draw attention to the piece. In fact the only visual appeal this has is the interactive feature. This doesn't hold my interest at all. The part that does hold my interest is the interactive features. Transparent windows might help. As a practice critique it's very well made. The technique is very good, but it doesn't have much impact, if any at all. Kudos to you for making this though, and thanks for making this. Many people will appreciate it.
This was designed to look exactly like dA's own critique creator did at the time, so transparent windows, backgrounds etc wouldn't have made sense it was an exact copy.
I think this flash program is really useful! Just easy to use, just like this normal critique. If people like me haven't got the special Premium Membership, I would just copy the embedding code onto my best artwork! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="
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Vision-Of course, the idea here is awesome. Critiques are awesome. So, you know, good vision. Fuck, I suck at this part. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="21" height="19" alt="
Originality-Help on providing critiques has been done, but I don't think I've ever seen it done this way. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Technique-Obviously, the creator itself is great. The directions could have been better. At first I was like, "Wait, wtf do I do? What's this for?" But the creator itself is the shit.
Impact-Considering the fact that good critiques are, oh, only one of the most important tools for the improving artist, I'd say that giving non-members the opportunity to utilize the critique function makes the impact on this a full 5 stars.
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First off all, this is a totally new idea! I've seen critique help, but this was very original-Write your own critique and generate it. It even looks like the actual box. Besides, considering that programming is quite difficult (or extensive at the least), you really pulled it off.
Second, this is great for a non member or a premium member commenting on a non member: it makes all the programming for you. It really saves time. I always wondered where so many premium members found a way to critique.
Third, to explain the ratings, I put it lower on vision, because I had no idea that I needed to click "yes" or "no". I suggest you add a "click me" sign some where, no matter how small, or some other thing like that. As for impact, it just happens that while this is quite a convenience and a bit of fun, it doesn't really stay with me that much. It isn't extremely memorable to me, except as a little marvel.
This is great. I mean REALLY great. I cannot describe how happy I am to know that I am finally allowed to write some advice that’s actually worth a damn. Instead of, ‘wow I really like this style its cute’, so hopefully one day I’ll be able to actually post a REAL critique on my friend’s artwork. When I actually did try and critique without this hefty tool, I never really did give any good feedback that would help my friend improve.
Now, how about more you?
Like I had said this tool is really great. But your instructions TO ME were a little unclear. I didn’t understand right away that you just have to COPY AND PASTE from a program like Microsoft Word into where you write your critique. I later figured it out but I actually thought you had to download something or copy some code into the critique.
Though, problems are solved now!
This is just a fun tool to use if you have a lot to say about someone’s works. I wish all comments will be a little more than ‘awesome!’ not exactly a critique, but maybe something more than just ‘awesome.’
But…The Critique Creator is… awesome! 8D
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This is the greatest Critique Creator ive ever seen yet.
This is an awesome piece of art . so far so good, i like how it works alot like the original. The only thing i could say is that it seems to lag a little. as i type, but thats probably because i'ts a swf file. also although it is readable because it is an image blown up, the words and such apear a little bit pixelized. either way it is something I can see will be great help to freemium members! lol the button lit up for me that is cool.
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This critique creator is very unique!Best for non-premium memberships people,They can experience some thing that a premium membership person can do but what a normal member can not do.This deserves a favourite e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="15" height="16" alt="
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Fantasic job!keep the up the hard work and fantastic effot.
I tried to keep it as similar to the original dA critique and I'm glad it's noticable
Thanks for the critique and fave 
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Hello HsnGoneWild ! This artwork makes me Want to Slap myself
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Before I say anything, I'm a tough critc and have high expectations for great artists like yourself...
This is not bad, it's actually pretty good. I usually see deviants try to make types of art like this and fail. you are not one of them.
However, no picture is perfect and there can always be improvments. such as the facial features, there's no cheekline though it still looks good without it, at least a vegue one could make this picture better. the irises have a nice hue, it just needs more darks and lights, patternes, thicker highlights, a semi-shiny feel to it. the dark outlines around the irises sort of throw off that realistic and mythical look to it, shading will work better.
the hair's nice-looking, it really fits. the emotion made by the character is very readable. and if you meant to do this, please ignore this piece of opinion. it looks anime-ish. I think it's the sharp chin-point or the noseline. it's just looks like that type of techinque used.
Other than that, the picture looks really great, I definately recommend faving this. good job!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
It's designed to be pasted as a comment on a deviation to leave a critique (if the artist has requested you do so, that is!).
It won't work as a Deviation's description, only comments.
Hope this helps!
Or isn't it?... I would like to do the same - request critique, not to create it. How can I do that? Or can't I?... 
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I absolutely like this tool because it's amazing for non-subscribed deviants,
can i just randomly word here because i can't find anything to write?
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
If you've crossed the limit, you may simply need to update your Flash player 
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lmao the comment is old but ok
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This is a very useful tool
Very artist should take it in a positive way and try to improve themselves. ...........
Every artist can help each other and improve their skills in with a proper guide and make sure what's wrong and right................
Its really very awesome idea to help speically the young artists to grow better in their drawing skill and passion.. .....
So its a good chances friends, Use it and improve your self and get critiques your artwork and get feedback.... Use it wise, good luck to all
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It's Good
It's great
This is just a critique test
I said this is just a critique test
Just a test
All the five stars given to you
It's Good
It's great
This is just a critique test
I said this is just a critique test
Just a test
All the five stars given to you
It's Good
It's great
This is just a critique test
I said this is just a critique test
Just a test
All the five stars given to you
It's Good
It's great
It's Good
It's great
This is just a critique test
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All the five stars given to you
This is just a critique test
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All the five stars given to you
It's Good
It's great
This is just a critique test
I said this is just a critique test
Just a test
All the five stars given to you
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Really really really really really good X3
I dont care what the others are going to say,but I like it!
Really good!Even that I dont really like critiques,I really like this one!
The critiques I dont like are the bad critiquess...
Like some people say ''THAT SUCKS!''
But they cant even draw a square...
I hate it when people is doing that...
Its stupid ._.
Anyways :3
Good job!Keep the great job and dont stop!
Just ignore people which are hating!When the cant even draw a simple square...
You can do a lot of thing!You can do everight you want to,If you believe in yourself!
Keep the good work!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
And yeah, not everyone really understands how to Critique.
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This is great. I hope you continue making great flashes in the future! H e l l , All I know is that I'll be a fan of your work soon.
Alright.
THE RATINGSSS
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5 Star
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5 Star
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I rate a 4/5.
All the coding must be painful, but you could've added a tiny bit more.
(Preview Button o3o)
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Its great for writing critiques. c:
5 Star.
21 WORDS LEFT?
Uhhh
C R I T I Q U E B Y S P H E A L S T O R M
The Artist thought this was FAIR
Sadly my Flash days are behind me, but I've moved on to developing games and software so all is not lost 
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