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Published: 2015-12-28 03:13:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 757; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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PLEASE VOTE FOR US!   to see a glimpse of Kalverick's and Keymen's relationship when they were younger!

Gwynn is NOT IN THE MOOD, Tia! She ain't havin it! Lolol looks like Momma Gwynn is finally gonna find out what's going on tho (Lord knows Merek only muddled things up more X'D). I do hope you all remember this girl from a few pages ago!

HAY got lots of OCs in this page!! LOTS!
First and foremost we have Tia, created by
Etzel, created by  
Mara and Tael created by
And Rewald and his Lacor, Dinner, created by !!!

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Little bit of extra fact for those of you who are seeing your characters in here for the first time: Rewald is little Tael's best buddy (despite Rewald being an adult and Tael being a little kid XD). He is one of the few people Mara will trust with her son. Mara and Tael are also one very few people Rewald can stand to be around-- I guess that goes for Etzel too. 

I hope you are all okay with my ideas! <33
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Comments: 21

CHatterBOx010 [2016-02-04 00:13:22 +0000 UTC]

OMGGG THIS PAAGEE SERPY 
First of all ETZEL!!!!!! Omygod you don't know the noise I made when I saw him I even got a weird look from my cat that's when you know it's bad. I think I pretty much lost it at the "NOW ARE YOU LYING ABOUT IT?!?!" I was rolling, you really nailed Etzel he's perfect xDD
Second of all TIAAA!! Omg why does this not surprise me x'D Stealin' from good ol' Etzel, tsk tsk, shake my head lD
AND MARA AND TAEL ARE SO PRECIOUS I LOVE THEM BOTH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW
And Rewald and Dinner are hilarious! I especially love Rewald's interactions with Tael, it's so precious x'DD

Overall, beautiful page. I love seeing all the FCs here together and interacting

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HeSerpenty In reply to CHatterBOx010 [2016-02-05 09:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Lolol YAAY I'm so happy you like it!! I was super excited to get to this scene cuz there are SO many FCs in it! LOL yes that little exchange between Etzel and Tia is what I was looking forward to the most <33.. he's so much fun to write! (hahaha someone on Tapastic said there should be a sitcom just about Etzel getting angry XDD.. I just wanted you to know someone said that about him <3 lolol)

And Tia is LUCKY she decided to steal from him and not someone else! As gruff as he tries to be.... he's a big softie deep down, we all know this <33. I pretty much have it in my tiny brain that this particular group of characters will be mingling a lot with one another! I loved what you and Dreamfollower came up with so much about Tia and Charisse being friends that I decided to totez make it canon XD. Hope that's okay!!! Thank you for making such wonderful characters for meeee! :')

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mairlylindor [2016-01-06 16:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Whoo it lokks like an uptown market 

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HeSerpenty In reply to mairlylindor [2016-01-08 21:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha good! Sorta what I was goin' for!!

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mairlylindor In reply to HeSerpenty [2016-02-05 15:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Well mostly unlike those two y should've go on in the first place 

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Sanluris [2015-12-30 20:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Well. They beat up Grandpa. 

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HeSerpenty In reply to Sanluris [2015-12-31 16:25:25 +0000 UTC]

They indeed did :'D
(LOL that kitty tho <33)

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alston123 [2015-12-29 02:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy. Things are about to be said. -_-

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HeSerpenty In reply to alston123 [2015-12-30 00:35:36 +0000 UTC]

YOU KNOW IT lolol

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Chibi-Tohru [2015-12-28 18:31:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm loving all the characters on this page! Gwynn is not going to be happy about all this lol....

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HeSerpenty In reply to Chibi-Tohru [2015-12-30 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! It's really great to have so many personalities to play with <333

Nooo she is not XDD

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PrettyWitchDoremi [2015-12-28 04:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... Adults are pretty crazy. xD

I'm glad that Gwynn is finally finding out about what's going on! I felt terrible that she's been in the dark up until about now; her own son is out there doing who knows what!  I hope that this will lead to her crossing paths with Keymen soon

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HeSerpenty In reply to PrettyWitchDoremi [2015-12-28 06:00:33 +0000 UTC]

I know! She has to rely on  a STRANGER she catches stealing from her friend to tell her what's going on XDDD. Not her own brother or...ANYone for that matter
Aaaah the communication in this family :'D

I mean like.... next chapter is gonna be called "Reunions"................I dunno if that answers anything ;D ;D lolol

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BattlePyramid [2015-12-28 04:41:50 +0000 UTC]

You had nooooooooo idea how I almost got in trouble for screaming inside our house when I saw Rewald in here! :3

It's also refreshing to see that Gwynn still has other people whom she trusts, considering that she can't do the same to Merlock and can even barely manage to do so with Merek.

Also, it's too funny that Gwynn and Mara just started a casual conversation while Etzel was still a few inches away from exploding in a fit of rage while Tia just stood there reflecting on the failure of her plans.

I also laughed when Tael said adults are crazy since the person he told it to was technically an adult. What made it funnier is that Rewald actually agreed with Tael on this, but that is to be expected from someone who tends to ignore others when Tael or Mara aren't around.

Though it might not be a good time for Tia to say what she just witnessed. For all we know, Kalverick has eyes and ears at strategic places and all of them might end up just like that bald unnamed man.

Lastly, that panel where Dinner is muzzled by Tael's arms while he's like, "Oh, this girl is being reprimanded by someone, don't mind me while my snout is shut tight by this boy, no worries" is the clear winner. OwO

EDIT: "Mara and Tael are also one very few people Rewald can stand to be around-- I guess that goes for Etzel too." I can confirm, that does go for Etzel, too.

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HeSerpenty In reply to BattlePyramid [2015-12-28 06:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Awww YAY that is how I hoped you would react! I was excited to finish this page lololol I bet you didn't expect to see Rewald and Dinner here!

Yes I definitely want to kind of build a small community that will start to grow around Gwynn and Hizzy, and you guys have all given me characters that can make that happen! And have it be more meaninful than whatever hollow last minute people I would've come up with if it weren't for you guys lolol.

Hahaha yess, Etzel is NOT a happy guy XDD... but Gwynn and Mara just bounce right back lolol-- Tia is not the most skilled thief that's for sure XD.

Yesss Rewald, despite being an adult, strikes me as someone with an almost childlike simpleness that would allow him to get along really well with Tael..and relate to him more than anyone else-- I hope I got that right! . I also imagine that Dinner is also very fond of Tael-- maybe it's his light heartedness and innocence <3. Orrr maybe Dinner just senses how much Rewald likes him and plays off of that <33

Anyways I'm really happy you like the page!! And all my ideas!! I'm excited to draw more of these guys together!

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BattlePyramid In reply to HeSerpenty [2015-12-29 00:46:57 +0000 UTC]

While I expected Rewald to make his appearance sooner or later, I did not expect him to appear this soon, and that completely caught me off-guard.

I may be speaking in behalf of those who made OCs that make life easier for Gwynn (and also Hizruk and Merek for that matter) but since we are given the chance to contribute OCs to your comic, and given the fact that most villagers already choose to treat Hizruk as an outcast, we might as well make people that are exceptions.

Regarding Rewald, his childlike simpleness would be because of his five-year stay in isolation right after being mistreated by his father for fifteen years (thirteen if you don't include the years when he's still an infant). Growing up with the absence of a proper parental figure and still not ending up becoming like his abusive father is already a big achievement in itself. Given that, he also has to lack on other aspects, in his case, being unable to feel complicated emotions, hence, he really does relate to Tael.

Dinner, on the other hand, is not a simple case of Stockholm Syndrome. It was Rewald's decision not to kill him on that fateful night they met that has drawn Dinner closer to Rewald. It actually wasn't the first time Dinner found himself in a similar situation, but during the previous times, he had been able to escape, albeit narrowly. But because of Rewald's decision of not killing Dinner (or it may have been his conscience), Dinner have since seen Rewald, not only as a friend, but also as someone who had rescued him from his previous life of escaping. In that way, Dinner can almost sense Rewald's feelings and, by extension, who it was who Rewald would be comfortable with (or at least, can stand to be with). Since Dinner knows Rewald and Tael are close, Dinner woould indeed play off of that, though in comparison with Rewald, he is actually more sociable.

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Vivocateur [2015-12-28 04:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! interesting plot developments and new characters

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HeSerpenty In reply to Vivocateur [2015-12-28 06:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! lolol LOTS of characters to juggle buuuut.. I dunno... my hope is that it makes things feel a little more realistic XD. I dunno XDD

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Vivocateur In reply to HeSerpenty [2015-12-28 10:50:11 +0000 UTC]

It's working well. 
I really like this page!

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Dreamfollower [2015-12-28 03:37:09 +0000 UTC]

AEFOIHAOIHEOHEGH SO UBELIEVEBLY HAPPY RIGHT NOW! I knew this page would come out great! ^^ hehehe I love Tia's unconvincing "n-noooooo?" XD Hilarious. AND NAUGHTY TIA STEALING FOOD! hahaha
ohohoho but the plot thickens! Time to tell about the old man getting unjustly beaten up by that weasel Kalverick! >X3
Ngaaa its great seeing all these OC's and everyone interact! What way for Tia to make an appearance though X'D not making a good first impression there girl hahaha ooh i cant stop reading this page XD i love it!
I love that lil Tael and Rewald are friends despite being child and adult X3
And Mara seems really nice too!
And It's so nice to see Etzel in the comic again since his last brief appearance : D ^^

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HeSerpenty In reply to Dreamfollower [2015-12-28 06:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Lolol yes those three panels with her and Etzels little exchange is one of my fav parts of the page! Lololol she's not a good thief OR great liar it would seem XDD. SHe's super fun I'm excited to write more of her!

And YES! I figured this would be a great way to introduce the OCs AND fill Gwynn in on what's going on-- ALL she knows is that Hizruk isn't around XD and that he might have left. Literally nothing else X"D
I'm so happy you guys are enjoying your OCs interaction! Still more to come!

I thank all of you guys for helping me build the community that I wanted around Gwynn and eventually Hizruk

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