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Hello all!
Around 3 years ago (THREE YEARS!? Boy, time is passing quickly for sure), I posted this art . It was a classic scene from comic BLUE with Peter and Gwen but with a little addition of... symbiotes! It is cool? It is creepy? It's up to you to choose. Just remember they love each other and they're totally mad and crazy. Remember, symbiotes make you crazy. That's the rule.
A year ago, I finished a second part of their story - look at that . To be honest, after second look, I wasn't really satisfied with the results. The picture lost the touch from the first work where I tried to recreate the atmosphere from the original comic Blue. So I've sat on my ass and was working hard to refine the picture recently. Now you can see the results. Hope you like it!
What do you think, what is going on? Is Peter trying to stay sane but Venom won't let him? Maybe he is trying to deny Venom and get rid of him? Is Gwen corrupted that much she (or Carnage? Is there even still Gwen in the first place?) is supporting Venom in his ways of taking over Peter's body? How does Pete suppose to oppose even when his Love is whispering sweet but venomous words. Should he sold his soul? Or it is already too late? Maybe he is just an empty shell. Boy, this is harsh. Look at Peter, he got quite a beard already. I think he's kept captured in some kind of evil lair of their. Looks like there is no good ending for him...
NO! Peter is still there! And he is FIGHTING for sure! He needs to overcome Venom's poison and win his life and love again. He must. After all, he is Spider-man. Amazing and Spectacular.
Is Peter going to break? Will he accept Venom as his ally, friend, parasite, saviour? Who knows? You need to wait for next chapter of their story. I hope it will be here quicker than a year or so.
Previous arts:
Peter and Gwen - BLUE - Symbiotes
Peter and Gwen - BLUE - Symbiotes 2
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Oh shit! I can't believe I missed this!! D:
Must say I'm enjoying the more simplified look of the background, & how there's only one light source present (rather than making the webbing & symbiote shiny as well)
Honestly I'm bouncing in my seat awaiting to see what fate may come to the pair (hopefully something involving plenty of symbiotes lol). I mean think of the perks!
Heheh, & atleast they'll be insane together ^^
Awesome work man, can't wait for the continuation of these two. Haha, & hey. Great artwork takes time, I'm sure you'll no doubt have it done when you're well & ready
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I'm glad you had the chance to take a look at the new version.
I see you enjoy my changes, that's great. I found the old version too out-of-place in case of an original atmosphere. I don't know I could be so blind back then.
Are you waiting for them to give birth to human-symbiote hybrid? 
Recently I found my several unfinished pictures and I'm trying to deal with them. One piece is almost finished but I frankly didn't have time to work on it for a week. After that one I'll be working on next episode of Gwen and Peter.
Thank you for your kind words!
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What wonderful artwork. Big Gwen fan and she looks sexy.
This idea of Gwen being a new version of 'Carnage'(or maybe she can gain her own unique codename to be separated from the pack)/alive because of a symbiote/becoming one on another world you made has given me an idea of a possibility and charazation for another symbiote bonded/fused/hybrid Gwen in the Multiverse. One that could be dangerous and chaotic if not in control but not evil.
Fervent: adjective
1.
having or showing great warmth or intensity of spirit, feeling, enthusiasm, etc.; ardent:
a fervent admirer; a fervent plea.
2.
hot; burning; glowing.
On many worlds there exists a Gwen, MJ, and Peter. Their bonds strength across the universe. Now usually Gwen and Mj might be competitive for Peter's affection and heart but there also exists a bond between them that even Peter doesn't share. Now in the Multiverse on the Earth known as 616 the first Gwen Stacy version of that world died after trying to be rescued by Spider-man resulting in her neck snapping. The first alien symbiote known as the "Venom symbiote' would come much later. On another Earth known as 1610 a Gwen Stacy died after becoming the last victim of a scientifically made parisite also known as a symbiote but with vastly different origins of birth and functions. Then Gwen resurrected back but also as a symbiote of 'Carnage'.
Now another world enters and the link of symbiotes, Gwen and Peter of that world begins anew with a new result unseen.
Gwens have been vastly different from each other in the Multiverse outside of the bonds between her and Peter and MJ.
On this new Earth presented we have an MJ known as a party gal and extroverted. MJ follows her heart. Peter who has alot of power but also alot of responsibility. Peter follows his soul. Then we have Gwen. Gwen on this world is a beautiful but withdrawn gal making her still an outsider. A gal of reason, science, but contrast to MJ introverted and keeps her emtions in check making her seem unemotional but also distant making her unable to show what she feels. Gwen follows her mind.
Now on this world Peter went thru the whole version of the Venom saga including getting the symbiote from space, denying it, finding Eddie Brock, and loving/hating Spider-man as a scorned lover.
Now on this world Gwen found a companion first with Peter who was kind to her and show Gwen around New York when she moved there from London (like on the Earth of 'Spider-man love Mary Jane') and meet and befriend as her best friend MJ soon after. MJ would invite Gwen to party with her but Gwen to shy and analytical and self doubts to be withdrawn out of her shell.
While her best friend she also her competitor in love for Peter's gaze. MJ had the charisma but Gwen shared Peter's love of sciences and by micule Gwen and Peter became a couple.
Then like on 616 the goblin kidnapped her using her as means to hurt Peter, Peter tried to save her just as she began to regain consciousness, then 'SNAP'...
It is said a person who dies really has 3 minutes of life and consciousness of the mind before heading to the great beyond.
Peter was in anguish and rage. Place Gwen's body down he went after the Gobin.
When he returned he found Gwen's body missing.
Peter couldn't find any sign of Gwen searching for either her body or potentially the Goblin to make him pay dearly. He found the Gobin and by events outside of his doing the Goblin died when his glider struck him when attacking Peter.
Returning to his apartment the grief filled Peter wanted to be alone. However when getting to his door MJ came out surprising him. MJ waited for Peter because of Gwen. MJ normally he happy go lucky gal was distraught and Peter assumed that Gwen's body was found and MJ heard the devastating truth. But a shock of a lifetime happened to him when he open his bedroom door to see Gwen laying on his bed!
MJ told Peter that she was heading over to meet Pete at his place and just as she was finding the keys for the front door she heard and loud thud sound. Turning to the sound MJ saw Gwen laying on the sidewalk. Peter became confused when MJ told him that Gwen was not just unconscious (as dead bodies permanently are) but Gwen was 'burning up'. Dead bodies normally cool not heat up. Peter went to check on Gwen and found she was making sounds. Gwen was alive!
Peter didn't know how as he was sure she was dead in his arms but not Gwen was alive but sounding like she was in pain and burning up in his bed. MJ didn't know what happened or why Gwen was having what she assumed to be a dangerously high fever. However before a doctor was called Gwen started to sound like she wasn't in pain anymore but shifted having some sort of pleasure, adrenerane, and orgasims. Sweat drenching her body and her screams were getting louder and on her loudest moan she woke up with what looked like a glow to her like never before. Gwen panting heavily Peter move in close to make sure Gwen was fine when out of reflex Gwen grabbed Peter close to her and laid a passionate kiss to him. The normal gentle Gwen kissed Peter before but never like that. After a few seconds of bliss Gwen went unconscious again and slept. MJ: Wow! I don't know what virus she's got but I want some!"
Normally Peter might of called for a doctor or maybe somebody more special for this case like Reed Richards but after a emotional long and physically and spiritually challenging and changing day Peter just wanted to rest as well against his better judgment. MJ left but made Peter promise her to call her and make sure Gwen was fine. Peter then got into his small bed that Gwen was now also in and he held her close to his body. He might of considered how her body was much warmer than ever before and even how it was even more 'shapely' than he could recall. But between him being tired and the terror and grief that once was in his heart mintues ago he didn't process any of that. Peter only thoughts was Gwen and what she brought into his life. The fragile nature of life and how he took others like Gwen for granted. A miracle had happened and Peter just wanted to accepted that. Peter only thought of her and never wanted to let her go wishing time would freeze. Gwen woke up a bit herself feel Peter's hold. A bit in a feverish state Gwen smiled at Peter's strong hold on her and using her little energy and even the very sweat on her body to assist her in sliding to face Peter both smiled halfways between consciousness and dreamland both held the other and fell asleep.
Peter was the first to wake up but Gwen was in a deep sleep still. Peter wanted to stay there and just watch his dream girl as even her snores, messy bed hair, and gallons of drool were heavenly to him (and only him as Gwen usually kept others awoke with her 'wind turbines' snores and tongue sticking out drooling mouth). However he had to collect his paycheck from the bugle and life had to continue on. Peter called MJ who quickly asked if Gwen was ok. Peter wanting to believe everything had worked out in the end for Gwen (but also deceive himself of any fear) said she was ok but still sleeping and asked if MJ could play nurse and keep watch over Gwen as he had to head out. MJ agreed.
Peter left as MJ arrived. Peter was gone for about two hours. Went to get his paycheck, got flowers for his special gal, went to the bank to make a deposit, stopping a bank robbery as Spider-man, flowers destroyed while being Spider-man, got new and better flowers from the florist he saved at the bank as Spider-man.
When he got back to his place he saw that Gwen was still sleeping but at the table having a coffee was MJ. When MJ had arrived her hair was skillfully combed. Now it looked a bit messy. MJ told Peter things got a bit wild while he was gone. MJ was watching over Gwen talking softly to the unconscious woman about parties she would like to invite Gwen to when she got better. Then Gwen woke up in an instant. Gwen leap out of the bed and on top of MJ first furious and raging about how MJ was stealing Peter. Then her mood shifted in another direction as Gwen then looked at MJ with passion and kissed her like she did with Peter. Then Gwen fell instantly asleep on top of a shocked MJ. MJ stated that Gwen displayed a strength she never ever had before. Plus the fire inside Gwen was something new as Gwen was always a wallflower. Never a raging inferno of aggressions and passions. The emotional ferocity then instantly unfiltered lust Gwen had for MJ was never shown before.
Gwen continued to act strangely. When MJ asked her if she would like to join her at a party Gwen usually said no or had to be coaxed out but Gwen now felt more lascivious and a level of new assertive, energy, and conference that even Gwen didn't know where it came from. Her fashion which was usually jackets and even sweats that covered her body Gwen didn't feel right in anymore. Tighter fitting outfits that showcased her curvy body even latex got her eyes and now felt right. She felt like a whole new woman reborn. Noramly stuck in a corner she gained the spotlight and made many gaze on her perplexing MJ. Many times she would show up MJ like it was a dance contest then switch and hold MJ close to her wanting MJ in her spotlight dacing wildly and exoticly if not for the crowd then just for MJ. Her emtions that was always cool and collected no longer could be held back. Gwen felt free and love this new rush and fire inside her.
But things wasn't always great for Gwen as when she was awake she had a drive but then found herself at key times when alone blacking out and waking up in bed forgetting what happened. Then came a voice. Sounded young and had a temper. Now Gwen was beginning to worry greatly about her sanity and health. MJ was able to access that part of Gwen who was still scientific, logical, and used her mind to have a check up as blackouts of memory and now voices was something very serious.
Meanwhile a new terror and threat swung in the skies. Looking something like Venom but more of a dark blood red color and liquidity plus wasn't just immune to fire but could become hot enough to burn other's with it's touch. Peter tried to web it up but it was able to melt his webbing and smacked Peter away. Peter was able to get a very small sample of it and gave it to Reed Richards.
Gwen first tried to see a traditional doctor but by chance found a psychologist which Gwen figured possibly somebody of the mind might help her unlock the missing memories and could be just a psychological problem. Having a session with the doctor she began recalling something faint. Darkness but then light. She was up on a bridge. A demon...no some guy in a scary insane green masked was laughing and talking about Spider-man. Then Spider-man showed up. Gwen recalled she couldn't move but heard everything. Then Gwen went quiet no longer talking to the doctor as her mind revealed to next parts.
Gwen heard the Goblin speak to Spider-man. She heard him call him: PETER! Gwen was in shock and wondering if she was having a illusion or a real memory coming back to her.
Gwen ran out of the office and alone in a dark alley. It continued in her head. She felt on the skin the wind of a fast fall. A web grabbing her leg and in a nano second... "SNAP". Gwen almost wetted herself. She felt her neck. It's didn't feel right yet she was alive.
The movie of the past memories continued. Gwen was in darkness but she felt Peter's arms agian holding her gently and his cries of shock, anguish, and rage to the Goblin. Him stating that the Goblin 'killed the woman I loved'. Gwen wanting to call out to Peter but unable to. Gwen felt a outer body experience happening to her but still was connected by the tiniest thread of moral life that was deteriorating. The outside world fading and a light replacing the darkness.
Gwen felt Peter let go of her putting her on the ground so he could lung after the Goblin. The fading sounds of the battle in Gwen's ears was soon was replaced as Gwen felt something gooey now taking her body. Gwen felt her being lifted and swung away from the site. But it wasn't from Peter. Gwen heard a dark voice. One filled with...venom... talking with hate and twisted intentions. Talking about how he could do what Peter couldn't but more importantly how the woman he love would be his newest child. She would be the monster that would destroy him spiritually and physically. She would be the instrument of his own revenge.
Then Gwen felt her neck (around the area broken) skin pieced and something hot and alive entering her body. It reconnected the bone and merged. It went into her breina and everywhere. The pain was like nothing she could ever described.
She felt her soul tugged back to the living and the light changing to darkness and blood red. She felt her insides twisting and turning changing. She felt like the goo now not just covering her but inside her. Her soul fought but that gooey demon constricted her body and terrifyingly encased her in it's biomass.
Then in the boiling red and blackness she heard a creature crying out like a baby. A new voice. The voice in her head. She also heard in a distance the venomous voice commenting that MJ was coming to see Peter and she would take care of things from there. Gwen felt a thud as her body was tosses to the pavement. Gwen was out of it mostly but recalled MJ's shocked voice. The pain changing into pleasure. In a hot flash Gwen waking up seeing Peter and her unable to control herself.
Then came the rest of the memories in an uncontrollable flash. Being a burning gooey beast with the alien baby in control but was still forming and unable to process things reacting to emtions and instinct only. Her terrorizing others rabbid. Battling Peter. Then as the baby was losing control and became tired went to bed.
Gwen was that very creature the Bugle called 'Carnage'.
(speeding this idea up by making more of a bio profile)
Bio power origins: 'Gwen Stacy/FEVER':
Gwen is the host while the symbiote is the parasite however unlike other Klyntar (the species of the 'symbiotes') and their hosts the bonding of Gwen and the newest Klyntar born from the Venom symbiote and put inside Gwen while at her last 3 minutes of life before total death took hold isn't just a normal bonding between a host and the symbiote. Instead to keep her alive they fused as one making Gwen now a hybrid human/symbiote creature. Made to be used as a weapon against Peter Gwen emtions was amplified by the transformation by the new creature of desires and emtions apart of her. Resculpting her body to her human form but with some additional 'incentives' Gwen became a gal reacting from her deep passions (including her hidden one's for MJ that Gwen before was confused by what she felt). The baby Klyntar was born as a creature of chaos by Venom but also just a baby still. Eddie assumed it would share a deep hatred for Spider-man that he felt for him. He assumed the new spawn would do as it was told by it's 'dad'/Venom when the time was right and it gained enough power.
Eddie assumed it would listen to him as Venom and it would kill Peter with the face of the one he loved. However things didn't go as planned.
Eddie underestimated the host/Gwen. Eddie assumed the creature would have only hate in it's heart for Spider-man but forgotten that the Venom symbiote hated but also loved Spider-man/Peter. Eddie underestimated Gwen and her love for Peter and MJ. He assumed she would be weak. But Gwen was stronger then she appeared. Gwen came to understand the creature was a baby and reacted in tantrums and had little understanding of the world around it. Gwen showed it love and had a strong spirit inside her to keep control of the creature after she gotten help by Peter and MJ convincing her she was strong enough and they believed in her. Gwen allowed it to assess her full memories and emtions of not just negative emtions given to it by Venom but also positive emtions and bonds of friendship and love by Peter, MJ, and her late father. Gwen also showed courage that was inside her when the chips was down and became a stern 'mother' to the baby. In the end Gwen gained full control as it listened to 'MOM' (Gwen) instead of abusive 'DAD' (Venom) and turned against Venom backfiring against him.
Venom tried to kill her by now absorbing Gwen/Carnage into himself but the two fought on from the inside and by force stripped Eddie and his sybite off. The imbalance of dna and the fighting from within made the biomass of symbiotes exploded.
Peter was terrified that Gwen had died but a lump of the biomass changed to red and pink and transformed into Gwen agian. Gwen no longer could feel the voice inside her assuming it had died. Unknown to everybody the different symbiote biomass that made up of Venom and Carnage lived on but was weak and small and needed time to regain strength. The concuness of the baby was gone once more becoming a beast away from Gwen and by chance found a insane killer name Cletus Kasady bonding to him.
Gwen was studied by Richard Reeds and spiritually by Doctor Strange and found she was still a hybrid (as once DNA is altered it's very dangerous to try to alter it agian to a former state) but Gwen now was the only consciousness and had full control. Gwen still found herself a being of passions but with practice and time was able to have control agian over her overemotions and not be controlled. Gwen can do what most symbiotes can do. However can get very hot when passionate or in rage. Has the ability to influence other people's emtions with her biomass based on what she is feeling or has learned to make other's feel. Being a hybrid she has to eat and drink like regular humans but now most also take special pills to give the nutrients the 'Klyntar' side of her needs or else she would have to temporarily bond with a creature to get them. If bonded temporarily to another creature (preferably humanoid) Gwen can enhance the being's abilities and her own. This however is speculation as Gwen has only bonded with one other person (MJ) out of necessity to save Peter from the Sinister Six and needed the boost. The two gals working together to save Peter proved very effective.
While in her symbiote humanoid form she codenamed herself and is referred by the unknown public of her Gwen identity as 'Fever'. Inspired by the running theme of all symbiotes named after an emotion disordered or virus/toxins theme based naming but mostly based on a song Gwen and MJ first danced together to www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGb5Iw… and her new 'fervent' personality.
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Okay, I am speechless.
I cannot believe my art inspire you to create such massive and fantastic story.
That is awesome. Both the fact you've created that and your plot itself.
I am really grateful you share it with us. I was reading it during my journey to work today and I had a fantastic time. I still cannot comprehend how my picture could inspire anybody. Boy, this is new. Really, thank you.
I really like that name, Fever. Sound awesome. And really reflect the attitude of our gal, Gwen. Also, I didn't hear this song in years so it's great to hear it again. Amazing.
I just wonder, do you consider your story as a separate one to what is on the picture? I mean, in your story Peter don't possess Venom at the moment so probably that is the case. But if you ever would like to write part 2 and include some scenes directly from my arts I will be honoured.
Again, thank you for all that.
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Thank You.
Once in a while a topic or a artwork or comic or whatever might activate my imagination. Inspirations might come from that work but also draw upon other aspects or thoughts that came before and put in.
I've written ideas and tales not on my gallery area or a fanfiction site but in youtube comment, forum topics, and comments section found in artworks. Thus extremely low amount of people might ever come across them (and with different usernames adding to the divide). I done this so much here that I went back and located many of such ideas, characterizations, and tales that I put down in such sections on DA and made a favorites folder to store them in (unfortunate where the artworks disappear those comment section holding such stuff goes away also sadly). If you like that many you might like to check out that favorite's folder that not just has other people's artworks but in such sections holds my other tales and ideas and hopefully you might enjoy them. slime-series.deviantart.com/fa… Based on time limits and self motivation, imagination, styles, and drive each work I've written might be different.
This idea and the stuff building it and the characters in how I presented them in this new earth written came to me starting back in the past really because of a few things. First my love of 'Gwen Stacy' but importunity my love of Multiverse Gwen Stays and the power of flexibility she has gained allowing for creativity and differences for her per world and fates.
1610 Gwen Stacy and the limited time she was that world's Carnage but ended so fast and I felt could of offered so much.
Another was the recent Venom series but importantly how many people associated evil/monster/the traditional 'institutionalization' Venom we have seen mutilable times HOWEVER Venom Symbiote recently was a hero character and ask Peter for forgiveness for his past actions. This I found fascinating how the 'mainstream'/616 Venom Symbiote was presently a 'hero' character and so different from the people's outside expectations of him/it. He had gain character developments that transitioned him into a being/character different from expectations in his own series plus also showcased how the Symbiote itself is a separate character with consciousness and a sense of morality of it's own that can be influenced and altered. It also showcase how the partner had such a influence on the Symbiote. Reality is the Symbiote is like a child but also a lover in the best and worst ways. Many times it's not the Symbiote that might be 'the monster' but the host giving negative influence or results. Some had a real partnership and friendship with Venom Symbiote like Flash did with him and helped him be a hero. Other's however do not. Such as Lee Price (who used and abused Venom Symbiote and the Symbiote had to turn to him and acted like a abused spouse and Lee terrified him).
Then recently I've seen some Venom Symbiote/Carnage/any Symbiote she OC characters. Then of course Gwen Stacy + a Symbiote (usually Venom or Carnage Symbiote) to a 'Gwenom' of different fans/artists creations. Being a big fan of Gwen I loved many of them however I also saw how much it was the same for all Symbiote plus a gal art there was. The 'Symbiote'/Klyntar had been lock in this one way of people's thinking and stifling creativity HOWEVER it had been shown in the 616 comics that it could be possible with a concepts of conciseness and from that different takes and expressions and emotions of morality and pleasures (and what each Symbiote gains/gets from the different hosts) that each Symbiote could be it's own character and possibilities of different personalities and desires. It's possible some might be good (Klyntar are born as basic but creatures of good and linked to the grand Universe's soul apparently), might be neutral, might be evil, chaotic, lawful, other. Thus different presentations of that. But usually we only seen them presented in fanarts as dark monsters and evil or corrupting hosts. It's not just one however as it's two beings coming/forming together to work as one and possibility to benefit both characters (thus why Reed named the creature a 'Symbiote' in the first place) or hurt both.
Let me showcase such an idea about institutionalization and the power of mutiverse and the strange yet fascinating story changes and the results on characters and character developments, and character composite. How using creativity and drawing upon ideas of the past can help inspire new things for new worlds and possible new rules and origins in them.
Now here is artwork showing a Gwen and a Venom Symbiote (or at least a Symbiote) from a artist I also respect named Cluedog:
cluedog.deviantart.com/art/The…
then it was followed up with this:
cluedog.deviantart.com/art/Ven…
In those artworks it showcased the Symbiote as a corrupting force making this Gwen Stacy from her normally appearing 616 type of self to a Bad Girl Punk Gwen. Thus the Symbiote getting no influenced by Gwen but making the traditional/institutionalization negative/dark thinking and corrupting views of the Symbiote and ways we normally think of the alien race and characters. HOWEVER let's twist this with some imagination. Let's say you see Gwen Stacy was a Punk Girl before the Symbiote reached her but then transformed into the more tradition acting and looking 616 Gwen variety and lawfully good super hero once getting the Symbiote. How does that come about?
(By the way in 1610 she has a punk like fashion but a good morality so Gwen can have different fashions in the Mutiverse).
Let's say this world the events that happened and some rules are different including characterizations.
The Venom Symbiote gets to earth and gets onto Peter. It learns to love him but also gains from him teachings of 'morality' and learns about responsibility and heroism even if Peter doesn't know the 'suit' he has is alive and has a growing conciseness and personality and desires. Peter makes a huge choice NOT to ruin or at least help Eddie after his very bad day teaching further morality and forgiveness. Later on Peter learns however that the suit is alive and tries to remove it like we usually see. On top of a church the Symbiote's biology and instinct and knee jerk nature clings and takes more from Peter. Peter tried to get it off banging the bell...and fails. Peter's conciseness starts to fade while the Symbiote's individual conciseness fully wakes taking total control.
Then the Symbiote learning heroism, love, and morality from Peter releases it's !killing Peter! by mistake and REMOVES itself off of Peter banging the bell again causing self sacrifice and self pain for it's 'love'. It falls down but Eddie and importantly his own corrupting pain and hate in his heart is not there (Peter helped him thus he is not there as Eddie isn't in pain and asking for God's help). Instead a new young nun who wants to be the best teacher for kids and help stop gang warfare and the poor souls lost to corrupting of gangs is there praying to have the opportunity to help young minds is there. She hears the bell going off and wonder's what is happening. She goes forward and suddenly black biomass goo falls on her and encases the shocked nun.
Months later a girl named Gwen Stacy entered New York. Gwen came from overseas and from divorce parents (which when she was young she thought falsely and damagingly that it was her fault). Gwen since a young age had to move around as her father moved constantly to many locations because of his job. Gwen never had much time with Dad/Captain Stacy as he was always called in for duty and a workaholic. Gwen thought he was avoiding her as she caused the 'break up'. This wasn't the truth as he was just a hard worker and wanted to earn a good pay to help give Gwen to financials to succeed anywhere. Captain Stacy didn't know the psychological damage and self blame Gwen was going thue.
Because also of the constant moves Gwen didn't connect long enough to anybody and when she became a teen and soon developed a punk attitude and rebellious streak particularity to act out against her father's lawfully 'good cop' job that made it difficult to form connections or simply to be seen if just for a short time but yet not make any connections since they never lasted. Soon she and her dad moved to New York.
Gwen carried a knife with her as part of her 'punk' attitude/display she put on but never used it. That was until she saw some bullies picking on some 'nerd'. Gwen told herself not to get involved plus it could ruining her punk vibe she wanted to display of not caring for anybody. But Gwen did get involved and pointed the knife at the bully stopping him from beating up some kid named Peter. Gwen defended him and the bully ran away. Gwen helped Peter up. She found she must of had some sort of 'nerd/geek/dork' preference as Gwen saw him and thought 'He's kind of cute.'
A nun/teacher at the school saw Gwen pointing the knife moments ago from her window after hearing some clamoring outside and she went to check. She grabbed Gwen by the wrist and pulled her to an empty classroom. Gwen was shocked how such a dainty nun was so strong. Alone the nun was ready to call her father and have Gwen gets tossed out. Gwen was in some major trouble. However Peter and MJ rushed in and told the nun how this new gal named Gwen Stacy went to defend Peter who was being assaulted. They stood by Gwen and the nun recanted saving Gwen from being kicked out. However Gwen had to lose her knife and was given a choice: have a lifetime of detention while at that school or see the nun alone after-school for a hour everyday till the nun let her go of her sentence.
The nun mentions she studies some psychology and using it to try and help Gwen and understand her better. They have many talks and Gwen begins to see her as a mother she never had. The nun feels that Gwen is a good person but needs help and guidance. After a few sessions the nun touches a nerve and Gwen angrily leaves instead choosing to go to detention to serve out her dispensary sentence. The nun begins to talk to herself disappointed but telling somebody that we don't see that she feels Gwen still has hope. At detention Gwen meet other 'delinquents' and some were interested in her and invited her to be apart of their gang. Gwen knew better yet still said yes.
The gang lies to Gwen about what they plan to do late at night. Gwen was told that they were going to have some 'harmless rebel fun' to really dangerous and highly deadly warfare while the 'heroes are having a massive battle on the other side of the island. Gwen finds herself caught in the middle of a massive gangs war and she finds herself unprepared and very scared. She defends herself and shows great aptitude and wit in combat disarming a attacking rookee thug and has the opportunity to kill him but doesn't take it knowing it's wrong. The the nun shows up from the shadows. She tells Gwen to run while she handles the gangs. Gwen does so. One of the gang rivals see's Gwen running and chases after her while the nun blocks everybody else. As Gwen runs she hears tons of "Twirps' and muffle screams.
Trapped in dead-end the gang member has a sword and moves in for the kill ready to plunge the sword into Gwen's heart. The nun jumps in front of Gwen taking the blow but it goes in so deep it reaches to the other side and hit's Gwen anyway. The nun is hurt but with one punch knocks the thug out. Gwen is dying in a pile of blood. The nun order's something to save her. Suddenly from the Nun the very Symbiote comes off her body and onto Gwen. The Symbiote heals Gwen up and bonds with her now. The nun would of lived herself if the Symbiote remained on her but wanting to save Gwen's life sacrificed her own.
Gwen is traumatized and begs for the nun to live and to forgive her but the nun dies before she could respond other than telling Gwen to be kind and to be a good person with her second chance in her life. The thug begins to get up not recalling what happened. Gwen enraged becomes monstrous and first wants to kill the thug. Then stops herself knowing that isn't what the nun would want her to do and now she must do better in her second chance at life. Her monstrous form smooths out to a new female form and subconsciously she webs up the thug. Gwen hers the cops coming and wants to gets out of there Gwen then finds herself forced to the wall and her body starts to 'wall crawling' away.
The police/Captain Stacy shows up and sees just before she has fully disappears this new unknown gal climbing on the wall. Reports come in about how all the thugs from many gangs have been found webbed up, unharmed but some bruises, and now being cut down and taken into custody.
Away Gwen questions what is happening and what is on her giving her these powers. Then she hears a voice.
To shorten this again we have a story of Gwen and a Symbiote HOWEVER moving in the opposite directions in their life then what we traditionally see. We have Gwen being a punk and self destructive gal but still and good person at heart then we have the Symbiote who was once 'lost' in darkness but then 'found' in light is instead a purifier and healer. The Symbiote taught and gaining heroic and sanctify by Peter and the nun that raised it. Then motivated by her second chance and both influencing each other Gwen transforms from a self destructive and rebellious punk gal to a gal transforming thanks to the nun and even the Symbiote into a new better person, maturity, and heroism.
Then adding another factor in that the Symbiote loves Peter adds that to Gwen herself making her gaga over him. Her extroverted and super spunk attitude before even bonding to the Symbiote has Gwen moving fast and horny on Peter much to MJ's jealousy. In a annoyance to Gwen the Symbiote influenced by the nun wants Gwen to cover up and stop wearing 'indecent outfits' 
Thus Gwen, Peter, and MJ are again linked as pure usually of many worlds HOWEVER many twists for this world.
Then on another world we find out the/a Symbiote came to this 1960's Earth, landed near Woodstock on top of a bunch of weed, became so high it's normal black and white color scheme became hallucination levels of colors.
Researching nearby a 1960's styled glasses wearing hopeful teen scientist schoolgirl name 'Gwen Jane' teased by bullies as "Brainy Janey" hears about the nearby Woodstock event and wondered how it might be like to be a free spirit hippie. Then from behind (staggering to her) the hallucinogenic multicolor Symbiote plops itself on the gal and not working right fuses with her. Reforming Gwen Jane into a always upbeat, and 'groovy' hippie party gal that wildly dances
Man I was just trying to type what were some influences before I even saw this picture and more ideas (some serous some just wild fun) of the mutiverse happens
"I just wonder, do you consider your story as a separate one to what is on the picture? I mean, in your story Peter don't possess Venom at the moment so probably that is the case. But if you ever would like to write part 2 and include some scenes directly from my arts I will be honored.
Again, thank you for all that."
It was made as a separate one HOWEVER I might be able be able to work in a 2nd part (I have some ideas in my head that could work some that are serous and one that is zany fun). Maybe having three different worlds: The 1st world in your head when you beautifully made this, the 2nd world in my head I wrote in this comment section separate from this, and another world where I can try and work the visuals above of the the pictures into the 2nd world for further events.
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Man, you are truly a factory of high quality stories.
Did you ever consider becoming a comic scriptwriter?
Thank you for sharing your stories here, it was a pleasure to read it. Reverse Venom (as good pal from the beginning) is a great idea! I won't even mention "always-high-hippie" Venom.
In terms of our "worlds", it would be awesome to read some more of your stories based on my work. No pressure though.
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Here comes some more ideas to add to the overall tale I before made and trying to fit into the pictures of Gwen and peter you made plus other inspirations I found that motivated me or this tale of characters.
Multiple parts to the ideas I have for 'Fever/Gwen Stacy' so I'm going to separate them by chapter parts. Use the 'find' function (holding down 'ctrl + f') with the coding in the brackets to help assisting in skipping to such chapters. Also finding this picture i.ebayimg.com/images/g/Ch8AAOS… and i.ebayimg.com/images/g/n8YAAOS… of a artist interpretation of 'Gwen and Peter' in his/her own versions I can't help and look at that sexy and confidence Gwen wearing Red, Gold, and Pink and see my own version of Gwen/Fever that I made up (her biomatter Symbiote goo being red and pink mostly thus that outfit for her Human form fitting very well).
Part One: Experimentation with subject Gwen and BBF assistant MJ. (EWGMJ1)
Part Two: A Dastardly Plan. (ADP2)
Part Three: Lets Bare the Burdens Together/A Fervent Debut! (LBBTFD3)
Part Four: Let's Race! (LR4)
Part Five: Horror: Peter's Kidnapping! (HPKN5)
(Will need to get to everything else below as I rush the last Part Five due to a dying battery)
Part Six: Gwen/Peter and more vs the Deadly Doubt. (GPDD6) (This is the one I'm going to try and link the two Gwen/Peter images you made to a story but in this case it's not Carnage/Gwen and Venom/Peter but Fever/Gwen who is one and the same trying to save Peter who is being killed slowly by a new Symbiote weapon named 'Deadly Doubt' made by Doc Ock and other villains out to kill Spider-man in one of the worse ways possible)
Part Seven: We're in this together/Spider-man's newest Symbiote partner. (WTSP7)
Part Eight: MJ gets in on the act. (MJIA8)
Part Nine: 'Family time' at the water park. Peter, MJ, and 'their little girl' Gwen (FTWP9)
Part Ten: Gwen complete again/'Welcome to 'SHIELD University' Fever.' (GCSU10)
Part Eleven: Future Flashfoward. Forevermore. (FFGW11)
Part One: Experimentation with subject Gwen and BBF assistant MJ. (EWGMJ1)
Gwen first worried about being a monster. That her new Symbiote side (despite not really having one anymore but her own conciseness)/bio could take her over and she would eat her best friends (and lovers). Her new biology made it that she didn't need as much sleep as before but still when she did she had nightmares about being a scary monster grabbing Peter and MJ and eating them whole without remorse. She tried to hide her fears but during one of her more incisive nightmares bio biomatter broke apart and spread all over the walls and Peter saw. After confessing her nightmares to her friends MJ and Peter help her though it. Deciding to get expert help Peter was recommended by Johnny Storm a great therapist dedicated to helping 'Supers'. Getting the psychological help she needed one sleep the nightmare table turned and instead Gwen Stacy became the giant and ate the nightmare version of her who tasted like strawberries ( vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/ma… but twist it with a giant Gwen eating a strawberry Symbiote monster that represent her fears) than using the Symbiote powers she went forth and saved the world as MJ and Peter cheered her on. She still did have a great worry about being a monster HOWEVER not as a Symbiote but her human emotional fault side losing control of her emotions and striking even by accident her friends if she gets enraged (like when 616 Pym struck Janet and Peter struck MJ by accident when he lost control of his emotions in the comics). This would be something she would worry forever about but again responded responsibly by sort out ways and meditation to help her keep control of her own self per day.
After some time after going though some steps with her own mental theorist and supported by her therapist her worries changed to curiosity. Gwen had many hobbies and enjoyments and now with these new powers and a spark of creation some of those hobbies just got a super powered boost.
A scientist hopeful she begins to understand it's only scary if one doesn't know what is capable and how it works. She could be dangerous to her friends... or life just got a little more fun!
Gwen begins to experiment and study herself researching and testing like any scientist would do. She wasn't alone in being helped in these new trials and curiosities as MJ offered her services in assisting Gwen becoming her own personal Lab Assistant and camera woman.
Gwen first trying things she saw being done by the villain 'Venom' and that Venom Symbiote. Seeing what she could copy and be capable of and then pushing for the unknowns.
How her new biological works. First aspect she wanted to see if she could do: Shapeshifting. Ideas about the possibilities of new dresses that would of been costly she now can make with ease from her very own biomatter body. At least that was a idea she considered. She didn't know if she could do that. If her human form that used colors outside of her biomatter coloring was a matter of her bio saving a special save slate or she could also access the full color spectrum and density. Time to experiment.
Her first few trial tests didn't pan out like Gwen had hoped. However with MJ's assistance, MJ's own personal knowledge of fashion, and MJ personal support Gwen's the next set of attempts of fashions was a huge success. Starting with the simple then advancing to details and complex fabric imitations and designs and body fittings.
Now able to make her own clothes on the fly Gwen's childlike giddiness at what she could wear, sexiness, and fine details soon became free to explore. A very fun and cost efficiency for Gwen (and allowing her to keep up with the latest changing fashions and just for playful competition out do in a second MJ's outfits plus fine detail sexy cosplays). MJ partially joked but also partially was serious in asking Gwen if she could be transformed into a hybrid Symbiote and join the fun with her.
MJ: "Sexy and ready on the fly fashions that would stop all men and even women in their tracks plus always have the right outfit for further roles in the theater ready!"
MJ also sadly mentioned that with these new powers of fashion Gwen could do that meant Gwen didn't need to join her anymore in going shopping for clothes which both Gwen and MJ loved to do. Gwen however told her that won't stop as Gwen might want to go forth and see ideas as she joins MJ on fashion runs plus wound not miss the chance to try new outfits with MJ and have a mock walkway run and each telling each other what was HOT and what was NOT. Just spending time with MJ brought joy to Gwen.
Then came body shifting. Small things like...breast enhancements. Then Gwen wanted to see if she could perfectly mimic her best friend MJ. MJ had a shock of her life when MJ walked into the makeshift lab Gwen and Peter made from a unused garage only to see herself MJ there (Gwen mirrored her form). Gwen soon found however it was harder to body shapeshifter then clothes and Gwen found herself tired quickly when not 'Gwen' or her Symbiote forms. It was possibly because it was harder to control or a case of psychology that if Gwen isn't her 'natural' self (human form, Symbiote biomatter, hero form, or areas in between en) her mind had to work harder to maintain a charade. Gwen decided to not normally use that power as it was a lot more hassle to try vs the effortless clothes shaping.
Then Gwen tested naturally elements such as intensive fire, cold, corrosion, water, and high winds. Could she pop her 'hand' off and control it like 'Thing' from Adams family. How far can she stretch herself? During Gwen's testing in making clothes from her own biomatter on her body while mixing in exeteme weather tests Gwen came to understand that despite the illusion of wear outfits from a outside perspective Gwen was in reality naked as the outfits are really a part of Gwen. Something that Gwen had to take into account as touching her fabric was the same sensations as touching her skin and on hot/mid temp days while Gwen was 'nude' and comfortable everything was fine but on cold days Gwen needed REAL clothes to bundle up even if she raised her own body heat (and by link passions). Thus coat shopping with MJ and the money to buy real heavy winter outfits was still needed.
Then Gwen began seeing about all the things that Peter could do could she do? While doing all her tests Gwen knew Peter would freak out about some...almost all of them. So while she had sort out Peter's help in the areas of testing she knew Peter would see as 'harmless' Gwen's primary 'lab assistant' during her trials and outside perspective was MJ who proved to be immeasurable in helping Gwen feel human again, play with her new powers and curious nature, and help her see what she could do testing the limits and break though.
MJ was also the occasional unsuspecting 'lab rat' for the teasing and naughty enhanced Gwen. One time when MJ was out buying at a farmers market MJ gave Gwen a call. MJ was planing on hitting the clubs that night and ask Gwen if she would join her. A wicked idea came to her and Gwen said she wanted to continue her tests on clothes shapeshifting but might take her up on the offer and have her presence known at the club. MJ wasn't sure if that was a yes or a no.
Gwen hang up and rushed out of her lab. Testing some powers to assist her speed Gwen got to MJ's place before MJ got back. Gwen took out and hide MJ's favorite club outfit and shapeshiftered herself as that outfit placing herself on there hanger. Gwen wanted to see if MJ could feel or know any differences between the real deal and 'brand Gwen'. It was part testing for sure but also Gwen naughty side took hold as Gwen technically desired to have her own body interweaving with MJ's naked body. Her naughty imagination made her chuckle but Gwen became silent when hearing MJ entering the room. MJ took her favorite 'club-wear' never knowing she was grabbing and putting on Gwen. Gwen pressed against MJ's body raise her horniness and arousals but due to her powers MJ began to feel very warm and aroused as well. MJ didn't know why and just fought her raise pleasure off. At the clubs MJ weave and bounced and her body bend and twisted. Gwen mimicking the fabric yet offered more comfort and elastic then even the real outfit hidden away felt every motion.
Being a bit mischievous at random times Gwen gave a naughty squeeze startling and pleasuring unexpectedly MJ in the middle of her dancing. Gwen's own lust raised making in turn MJ very aroused forcing her to go to the restroom to relieve herself.
At the empty restroom Gwen shocked MJ as MJ's outfit unexpectedly flew itself off her body and reformed into a human form of Gwen. Gwen had a bit of a laugh and MJ was annoyed with Gwen. MJ now was naked in the club and peeved. However to thank MJ for Gwen's 'test' (and fun... mostly joking fun...) Gwen remembered that super costly club outfit MJ drooled over but couldn't buy and shapeshifted herself on MJ's body. Spinning MJ around making it all like a transformation from a fairytale MJ was soon wearing a perfectly body fitting and comfortable outfit she greatly desired but never thought she would be able to afford. MJ was the 'belle of the ball' (even though she already was) partying with Gwen on her as her new outfit.
When MJ got back to her place Gwen jumped off MJ and returned to her human form. Gwen showed where she hide the authentic outfit and was planning to leave. However MJ was now naked and her body sweated. Thanks to Gwen's naughtiness and powers MJ was in heat. Gwen's own enhanced lust kicked in affecting her as well seeing MJ desiring her. MJ pointed out to the now confused Gwen as MJ move in on her that Gwen's own 'clothes' was melting off her reacting to her subconsciousness desires for MJ. MJ demanded payment for being Gwen's lab rat and kissed her. The two spent a lot of the time testing Gwen's enhanced and even new erogenous zones...for science and discovery...of course.
Part Two: A Dastardly Plan. (ADP2)
Meanwhile as Gwen was empowering and learning all these new skills and abilities the evil villains Doctor Octopus, Jackal, and (some emotions/psychic villain) was making their latest creation and plans to doom Spider-Man. A new weapon meant to kill Spider-man in one of the worst possible ways.
Doc Ock had worked with (Emotion Villain) before and discovered that Spider-Man for all his quips was actually full of guilt and doubt. The Jackal had gained a small sample of the being known as the 'Venom Symbiote' and for the Jackal it's genetics was a fascinating. Working with Doc Ock who assisted/took over the project Ock felt that he could improve upon and make a new creature from the DNA samples Jackal had but a creature tailored just to mentally and emotionally kill the infuriating Spider-man.
Successful in making a creature to their liking from the last samples they call their weapon/Symbiote the "Deadly Doubt". Now that their creature was ready a trap and a secured space was needed to lure Spider-man. A perfect time and opportunity make sure none of his friends would be able to save him. That moment came shortly when many heroes of the Earth had to leave the planet when some great threat of the cosmos was uncovered.
It was the latest crisis event for the Universe. Some powerful aliens was attacking the galaxy destroying everything in their wake. So of course the heroes of Earth was summoned to help defeating the latest threat. Spider-man wasn't one of them. He was told that the streets themselves would be open to crime and many super villains seeing an opportunity to make a strike while many of the heroes of Earth left to go into space. Spider-man was asked to team up with a group of fellow 'street' heroes known as the 'Defenders' and also keep an eye on many younger heroes who's mentors were going to be away. Another reason Spider-man wasn't selected was because some of the heroes just found him aggravating always joking and quipping to there own annoyance and only a very select few heroes was amused by his attics such as the human torch.
Disappointed by feeling disrespected yet Peter didn't argue. The streets still needed heroes plus he wanted to stay. He was already aggravated and worried sick as it was and that his mind would be elsewhere. It was all due to Gwen.
Gwen felt ready to help carried the load and make her own official superhero debut. She wanted to join him on his patrols and Peter wanted her to stay safe.
She seemed to have taken to his Uncle Ben's famous motto he often repeated to himself.
Part Three: Lets Bare the Burdens Together/A Fervent Debut! (LBBTFD3)
Gwen: "'With great power comes great responsibility.'"
Peter: "No Gwen. That wasn't what my Uncle Ben actually said. He really said "With great power MUST ALSO come great responsibility". It really responsibility even before great power by anyone. 'Responsibility' itself is a 'great power'. Gwen, You are my joy, love, and importantly responsibility. I have great power but I would be weak as thin crack glass if you were gone from my life. I must kept anything bad from happening to you my princess. I know being Spider-man brings great danger. I know the risks and will to take them conserving myself. But the dangers to you makes me want to stop being..."
Gwen: "DON'T YOU DARE FINSH THAT SENTENCE! I know your Spider-man and Peter and I accepted and love both. Being a daughter of a Police Captain I felt the worries for a person I love following his duty that must be done to save others. A duty the world needs. But I know how it would of emotional hurt my father if he didn't try to do all that he could do to save others. He was a hero and I will forever be proud of him. But in the past all I could do was provide emotional support and yet worry unable to do anything else. Now things have changed. I'm a 'super' now. I can do things even you can't do. I now have the opportunities to not just give emotional but also be at the forefront of everything. We can work together and bare the burdens together. I can see what will become and the outcomes if we decide to stop.
The world will still have dangers. Evil will hurt and kill others. Even if we don't change forward to stop them we live in a world always facing apocalypse and dangers. Worse is we will see the destruction and lives lost and know one killing truth: 'We could of done something, we did nothing, we were selfish'. We will die and carry those truths till the end of time. Peter... we will make faults. But if we strive for out base best for the world and others then what a glorious life even if short to live. You and my dad are heroes. This life is a difficult and strenuous beyond imagination. But if we work together won't the odds of victory and us both surviving improve? WE are partners. We work to help carry the loads of each other. Even if I do die know that my spirit would be proud knowing you are doing your best to help others".
Gwen smiled and shifted her normal outfit she was wearing into a princess one. "Besides...If I am a princess in your eyes does not a princess have a duty to protect the kingdom and her subjects my consort? Plus I'm a princess that is well..." Gwen changes from a princess outfit to Ms Incredible cosplay and begins to zip herself around Peter smiling. "...flexible..." Shift shaping to look like a 'She-hulk Gwen' flexing. "...strong...". Shift shaping once more back to her regular human form but with a blade for a arm she plunges it right in her 'heart' terrifying Peter. "And no sword can cut my heart."
Peter: "You really are enjoying this aren't you? The shift shaping and giving me a fright"
Gwen laughed and made a smile that melted Peter;s heart. Gwen: "Absolutely hee hee!"
Gwen then became a little sad but lifted her head with a calm smile. She moved towards Peter like an angel and held him close. "But you gone when I know I can help you. I just can't I... I want to fight and help you save this city. The people. I see you bear so much. How it hurts you. Together. Let's us do this all together."
Gwen's words seemed to resonate to Peter and he thought hard about it. Yet still in the end Peter denied.
"I'm sorry Gwen."
As Peter web swinged away he shout back "Maybe when you can keep up with me showing that you have gained enough practice with your powers I'll be more comfortable..."
Gwen was miffed. She just displayed as far as she was concern enough mastery of her new powers. But then Gwen smiled. "Keep up... is that a challenge?" Gwen began to shapeshift into a new form she wanted to display to Peter. Her new exclusive Gwen Stacy Symboite 'Fever' form.
As Peter began his patrol Peter heard a THRIPH not coming from his own web shooters. Looking back he saw blurring past him another female form. Web swinging herself high in the air her stilolorte lighted by the full moon she somersaulted past one tower and landed perfectly on the roof of the next with her back facing Spider-man. Peter/Spider-Man landed nearby. Peter: : "Gwen?!"
Back still facing Peter she took in the atmosphere. Arms now pose at her sides she boastful proclaimed to Peter. Gwen: "Actually in this form to keep my own secret identity hidden I'm not simple 'school girl' 'Gwen Stacy'. Call me..." She turn around lit by the full moon sparking in spender glory speaking in a air of confidence "FEVER! A virus to evil but the epidemic for good!" Gwen/Fever than shock her head. "OK I need to work on a better tagline then that. So Cheesy!"
Peter was speechless but Gwen wasn't.
'Fever': "Do you like it? Looking cool, sexy, and colorfully stylish? MJ helped with the designs." Gwen twisted and posed for a bit letting Peter see all parts of her.
Peter held his head in his hands. Peter: "MJ... of course she would be also a part of this. Gwen...I mean 'Fever'.... this isn't something that you can just...."
Fever: "You were about to head to your favorite spot with that one gargoyle right? Well you said if I can keep up with you then I could join you right? Race ya! READY, SET, & GO!"
Part Four: Let's Race! (LR4)
Fever ran to the edge of the roof and jumped down. 'Fever' felt the wind against her body and face and she discover how she loved it so. Then from her own biomatter she fire her own 'Web Line' and swung high. "WOOOO YOOOOO"
Spider-Man: "GWEN!?! ACK! DANG IT! Love ya but geeze." But While Peter was concerned a part of him smiled at her conferdence and enjoyment. Plus Peter wasn't going to let Gwen win without a fight. Time to see if Gwen could walk the walk against his experience/mastery.
Running and firing his own web line Peter quickly used his mastery to pass Gwen. Spider-man: "Checkpoints are 70th and 5th, 32 and 3rd, and 42 and Madison, and lastly 'Frank' the Gargoyle the finish line."
Fever: You're on!
The two swung and flip like dancing together in the air as they raced. The two couldn't deny it. They were having the time of their lives over New York and connected like never before. No longer did two lives have to separated. Peter and Spider-man were always one and the same but the lives always conflicted before. Now that wasn't the case. Love swung in the air and the two had so much fun racing yet sharing this experience together.
Both were still however competitive and didn't give much of a inch as 'scientists' and now as 'supers'. Getting close to the third checkpoint Peter decided to have complete focus on distancing himself from Gwen by the time he reached the finish line. Doing so would allow him to not just be boastful and playfully quip Gwen but show how despite her impressive control and skills she still had a lot to learn and convince her to get better before taking on this dangers lifestyle and duties. Pushing himself he zip faster and faster in the air taking as many chances between narrow buildings along the path. But even with his impressive speed he could hear Gwen was nearby. Then Peter heard one last loud 'THRIWP' from 'Fever' then no more. Peter no longer hearing Gwen's own 'THRIPS' made him a bit prideful. That she was now getting or is now to tired and Peter just had to much experience.
Peter knew unlike his own webbing which was not really generated from his body but a outside bracelets shooters and cartages Gwen WAS using her own biomass that made up her 'webbing'. Much like a person who lost some blood Gwen would find herself overexerted and tired soon with enough loss of her own biomass unable to generated natural replacement biomass from her own biology fast enough to replace the one's she shot out. Thus forcing her to slow down and lose the race.
As he got halfway to his end goal one of Spider-man's villains Doc Ock saw him passing swiftly by with a hidden camera. "Time to alert the others. Spider-man is alone and in range. Phase one of the master plan and Spider-man's end is about to begin!" Doc Ock pressed a button on his control panels.
Peter was feeling good about himself and had a string of liners ready to quip Gwen. However as soon as Peter saw the finish goal gargoyle Peter became frightened as his imagination shifted.
'What if Gwen being so stubborn tried to keep up despite what her body needed and not stopping was unable to a make a strong enough or long enough web line and Gwen fell from the heights they were racing above!'
Peter got to the gargoyle roof but instead of touching it making him the victor Peter turned around hoping to see Gwen/Fever in the distance. He didn't see her. His mind visioned Gwen scream from a huge fall and splattering against the payment bellow. Would she live now as a hybrid at such a fall? It was a question he didn't want to be tested.
Peter extended his arm out ready to head back when he heard felt something come off his back and a sound behind him like a 'plop' and a familiar laugh.
Turning around he looked down at the source seeing a red and pink gooey substance now heading to the gargoyle. Getting close the substance rose up forming on the top half first a female smiling humanoid form. Then the face and hair becoming more detailed and shifting colors till Peter could see Gwen Stacy's human smiling face while her chest and hips areas was still forming and her legs just goo making look like a one of those 'Slimegirls' pictures on DeviantArt.
Getting one inch from 'Frank' Gwen turned to Peter with a coy look. "Oh Peter...". Gwen leaned down pressing her breasts against the Gargoyle. "I win! Woo! Who's the best? This gal!"
Peter: "Gwen? Did you 'hitch' a ride on me?! That's cheating!"
Gwen however was now the prideful one and twisted her little finger at him with a haughty look on her face. Gwen: "Na uh. No rules against it Peter. Besides around the third checkpoint I was getting tired and then came to understand that was your goal to begin with. Making me use tons of my own biomass to weaken me. But I worked smarter not harder Peter. With one last push I was able to latch on and become apart of your suit making you piggybacking me to the finish goal." Gwen playful stuck out her toung at him. "So a deals a deal than Spider-man?" Gwen lower half still a bunch of goo extended and stretched out hovering over Peter and Gwen leaned forward at Peter with a motion of superiority but also distraction as Gwen made sure some cleavage was seen to lighten Peter's mood.
Peter however wasn't feeling chipper at all. Peter: "You don't know how terrified I just was. I was imaging you fall to your doom and all because of me! I imaged you splaying the sidewalks from your impact and dying!"
Gwen saw how serous Peter was and understood maybe she should of let Peter know she was fine instead of hiding. She raised up her arms and went back to her lower half reforming as a whole human girl again.
Gwen: "Sorry to frighten you like that. But you really don't have to worry about that."
Peter became alerted by how casual and breezy Gwen said that to him. Peter: "Why not?"
Gwen: "Well... I kind of recently tested what distance I would have to fall till reforming or actual injury became a problem by... bungee without a bungee testing...Oh...boy..." Gwen as speaking it realized how BAAAADDDD that sounded. It was one of many tests she really didn't want Peter discovering. "D'oh!"
Peter was furious. Peter: "GWWWWWEEEEENNNN!!!" Peter's yell made Gwen take her 'coat' and cover over her face and scrunch up. This wasn't going well at all.
Peter didn't have any time to have another word though. A explosion went off a mile from where Peter and Gwen was alerting them both. Soon a fire and smoke followed.
Peter: "There could be people in that building! The fire department might not get to them in time! I got to go. We'll talk later about this."
As Peter put on his mask and went to the edge of the roof Gwen followed behind him. Gwen shifted to her Fever form. Fever: "Wait Peter! Let me help you!" Gwen/Fever moved forward ready to shoot a 'web line' but found herself starting to feel a bit more hollow then prepared for.
The race did take much out of her. Worse she was up all night doing tests on herself and making up even more in her notepad. While she didn't need the normal 9 hours of sleep anymore she still needed at least 2 hours per day. Plus while she was running experiments and playing catch up of the University work she was behind on she skipped eating and didn't even take one of her daily pills so engrossed on other things (MJ usually set a timer and hidden notes for Gwen to help her remember sleep,eating, and pill taking, as Gwen often gets lost in her experimenting world and MJ playing momma bear to her). Theses poor choices resulted in her having now hit with a wave of exhaustion.
Peter: "Sorry Gwen but now even your own body is telling you that isn't a good idea. I've handled many fire rescues before so I'll be fine. You however it would be best if you shifted back to your human form, go back home, take some pills and/or food and get some rest. You'll recover in no time. Tomorrow we will have a talk about all of this."
Peter replaced his web fluid capsule, got off two testing shots, and then shot out a web line and headed to the fire.
Gwen knew Peter was right as she was tired. Gwen knew she had to be more careful and take much better care of herself. Needing less sleep didn't mean NO sleep. Gwen also noted she would need to practice how to conserve her biomass better so such exhaustions won't pop up in future Fever outings/patrols. Maybe instead of web lines that she would lose biomass other methods of sky traveling could be drawn up.
As 'Fever' shifted backed to 'Gwen Stacy' Gwen felt something on her 'coat'. It was one of Peter's spider trackers that Gwen would not of known or felt if it wasn't for the fact her 'coat' is equally her own biology. One of his two 'testing' web fluid shots masked him also shooting a tracker on her.
"Dang it Peter!"
Gwen took the elevator down and walked outside. She saw the smoke and against what Peter might of wanted or her own body was dictating she ran to the fire where Peter was already at. The two just naturally wanted to protect the other against their better judgments.
Part Five: Horror: Peter's Kidnapping! (HPKN5)
When Gwen got near the site she saw something horrible. Spider-man was knocked out and was being held in some tube being flown off by a Spider-Slayer. The fire was a trap aimed at Spider-man and he fell right into it. If that wasn't bad enough Peter wasn't the only being in the tube. Encasing slowly Peter appeared to be another symboite in the tube with him!
Gwen shifted back to Fever and followed after hoping to catch up to the flying machine. She got close enough to see that the tube had air holes big enough allowing for air to get in allowing Peter to breathe. However wanted him wanted Peter alive.
Gwen felt herself getting weaker making Gwen panic. Taking the tracker she flung it and by a miracle it was able to fit in one of the air holes and cling onto an exposed part of Peter.
This was a wise choice as again a wave of exhaustion hit her hard. Trying to fired a long web line to the machine her shot just missed and Fever found herself falling.
Most would be freighter by the fall but her eyes followed Peter seeing him being taken away. She reach out calling for Peter till finally... "SPLAT"
Gwen felt herself spread out having impacted from a far greater distance and her biomatter spread out farther then her past tests. She felt parts of her biomass lost from her conciseness but still linked to much of the goo. Gathering herself up she felt ready to faint. Lost of biomass and psychology terrified for Peter made Gwen unable to properly function. Gwen knew if she tried to reform from 'Symbiote goo' form to her human form she might just pass out from her spent energy.
Instead as goo Gwen traveled in shadows and cringed onto a passing taxi heading over the bridge to Queens.
The distance of her place, Peter's place, and MJ 's place MJ's was closer where the taxi stopped. Getting to MJ's place and outside her door Gwen reformed to her human form a knocked on the door. When MJ opened the door in her nightgown Gwen wasn't able to hear what MJ was saying and fainted in her arms.
When Gwen awoke two hours later from her slumber Gwen felt much as her energy back as her biomatter also reformed. She was very hunger however.
Gwen made herself some coffee which she swore to lay off after seeing how hyper active caffeine now made her after her change but Gwen knew she had a long day ahead of her. MJ woke up hearing Gwen pigging out to what she had in her refrigerator. MJ fortunately had a huge turkey given to her precooked from Aunt Anne. MJ saw that Gwen shook up and ate hastily. Gwen told MJ that Peter was captured and in great danger. Gwen needed to get to Peter's place where he had a machine that would lock onto the tracker Gwen flung on him.
Both went to Peter's apartment. They didn't know where Peter hid his machine and they were regretful they never asked. The two made the palace look like a twister hit the place looking for anything that looked promising. Finally looking in his closest in a corner stuck where light normally didn't reach was a laptop the two never seen before. Opening it up it was password locked but the hint of 'who are the three gals in my life who is most important to me (in alphabetical order and no spaces, aberrations, and caps)?'
MJ: "'gwenmaryjane' but who is the third?"
As soon as MJ finished speaking Peter's land-line rung. On the Caller ID it showed that his Aunt May was calling.
MJ picked up the phone and talked to a worried Aunt May who couldn't get in touch with Peter over his cell phone. As MJ made up an excuse to calm the worrying Aunt down Gwen typed in the password 'gwenmaryjanemay'. Gwen was in.
Clicking a few programs and typing some coding Gwen found the tracker program.
Gwen saw a map of the Tri state as it homed in to where Peter was being held. The tracker got his location before the spider tracker went dead in some abandoned warehouse in New Jersey.
Gwen swung out.
Part Six: Gwen/Peter and more vs the Deadly Doubt. (GPDD6)
(Plot: Having collected samples of Spider-man Jackal allows the next phase of the plot to begin. They could just out right kill him. But they want him to suffer first.
Gwen races to get to Peter as the Deadly Doubt wears Peter's faith in himself down and uses his memories against him destroying his will to live allowing the Doubt to destroy him. Will Gwen's love and faith in Peter be enough to burn away the Doubt from Peter and help Peter regain the support and conference inside? Will the Doubt consume Peter and wipe away Gwen who won't let go. Who else will come to their aid?)
Part Seven: We're in this together/Spider-man's newest Symbiote partner. (WTSP7)
(Plot: Peter has been saved but his powers have been weakened temporarily by the Doubt Symbiote and Gwen lives but majority of her biomass has been destroyed (or scooped up by the Jackal) leaving her unable to have her Human or Fever hero forms. Gwen will need to feed on Peter to regain faster her lost biomass plus subconsciously burn away the Doubt particles in his blood steam that weaken him. For both to regain they must work together and just as they been taken unexpectedly into Space for a 'Secret War')
Part Eight: MJ gets in on the act. (MJIA8)
(Plot: Peter and Gwen are back on Earth. Peter is back at full power and doesn't need Gwen as his 'suit'. But Gwen hasn't fully regain enough of her biomass for a Human or Fever form. Doctor Reed does a check up on her and gives two options:
One: He states she needs some X chromosomes as Peter supplied a part of her necessary speed regrowth from his powers but being female the other gender could support giving other parts of the missing DNA and feeding.
Two: Gwen can just be patient and just wait as it will naturally happen.
MJ has been such a necessary lifeline for Gwen and Peter covering for them missing school and family but Gwen knows MJ can only do so much for them. Gwen wants her fever and human forms back pronto. MJ wants unlimited outfits and for once swing in the air like Gwen and Peter does. Gwen and MJ: BFFs Girl Power!)
Part Nine: 'Family time' at the water park. Peter, MJ, and 'their little girl' Gwen (FTWP9)
(Plot: Gwen thinks she has gained enough biomass to have her human form back again. She is right...sort of. Well there is a special at the New Jersey water park 'Action Park' aimed at families. Meet 'the Parkers': Peter, MJ, and their 8 year old 'DAUGHTER' Gwen. Of course some rude unintended 'guest' just has to pop up based on the 'family's' luck.)
Part Ten: Gwen complete again/'Welcome to 'SHIELD University' Fever.' (GCSU10)
(Plot: From 8 to 13 to her natural age in days Gwen has fully recovered. But the worse of the worse has come to pass for Gwen. Having missed so many classes Gwen has been expelled from ESU! However when one door closes another opens.
SHIELD under the direction of Agent Coulson recognizes that many young and even adult heroes with Secret Identities have a common problem with having a education that fits their chaotic schedules. Even if you are known person with powers such as Inhumans or Mutants could find themselves treated like a outcast and not offered proper eduction needed to make a certain living.
Now 'Principal/Professor Coulson' with SHIELD funding has opened up a hidden University for such heroes. One where heroes can come as their hero or human identities (their choice) and cater to the chaotic schedule while been taught by some of the most talented Agents, knowledgeable heroes, and educators he knows or he found to have the skills for.
It's a Open House tour for Fever and Spider-man.)
Part Eleven: Future Flashfoward. Forevermore. (FFGW11)
(Plot: When Gwen became a hybrid species what did that mean for her aging and life expectancy? The girl who once was known for her death in the Multiverse had become the Girl alive forevermore? Peer into the future.)
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Complete the transformation or do more venom transformation ! I love to see it
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Hey, thank you for a kind comment! I'll do my best to deliver another part soon!
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Awesome; I'd love to see a continuation of this where Peter becomes Venom ^^
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We all need to be patient! There is a chance we will see what's next!
Thank you for your comment!
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I hope you still like it!
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