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Published: 2012-01-29 18:07:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 11628; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 162
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Practice run. Trying to familiarize myself more with what I'll be working with.I actually see improvement. But there's still some things that need some work (My Emboar and make Reshiram less cute). But I'm kind of happy. Lineart has proven to be the easy part, while coloring is the pain. It's the reverse with simple drawings. This is probably because the backgrounds are all made on the computer...
Also some changes in the art style..a bit more detail. :T
May continue this test run tomorrow. We need to know why Hilda is asking such a weird question and why Hilbert wants to get his butt burned.
Feedback on improvements and suggestions is highly appreciated. The aim is to create the best comic we can possibly make.
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Comments: 90
Aquanity505 [2012-01-29 19:35:35 +0000 UTC]
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I think it looks great! I like the way you made reshiram talk! You are very inspiring with this comic! The fire you made it is like real fire. Hilda and hilbert looks great I wish that the caricters you made were even more great and i don't mean they look bad but there great! The backgrounds you made are looking good! Well if you are going to make part two I would likke to say great! So keep up the good work, never give up, and I hope you will make more art soon and one more thing have a good day!
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-09 03:54:31 +0000 UTC]
i love your profile pic!
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-11 02:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It's a popular one. LOTS of people have it. My friend hates it. XD
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-11 17:47:09 +0000 UTC]
how can you hate that! ^^
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-12 17:39:45 +0000 UTC]
WHAT?! HOW CAN YOU HATE N?!
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-12 23:17:10 +0000 UTC]
She thinks he's a creeper.
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-14 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
well tell her at least he's a cute creeper^^
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-14 03:33:49 +0000 UTC]
I just told her now. Like five seconds ago.
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-14 04:17:08 +0000 UTC]
hahahaha what did she say?
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-15 03:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God. For a second I thought we were having a conversation about the shooting in Connecticut and I thought you were laughing about it and I got mad for about three nanoseconds. Oops. XD
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-15 04:32:06 +0000 UTC]
no way! my family lit candles for that!
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-15 04:35:48 +0000 UTC]
I cried my eyes out. I was devastated.
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-15 13:06:44 +0000 UTC]
oh no my finger got smashed in a car door!
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-15 19:44:33 +0000 UTC]
yeah it really hurt! now my middle finger is all cut up and gross! I had to take my finger out while it was still closed because they wouldn't unlock the door
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-15 21:41:22 +0000 UTC]
tell me about it sorry if i grossed you out
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-15 23:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Nah. I have a VERY strong stomach for things like that.
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-16 00:39:39 +0000 UTC]
that's good phew for a minute i thought i might have accidently scared you off^^
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IamaCutie In reply to AnimeOtaku8888 [2012-12-16 03:58:14 +0000 UTC]
*looks at icon* OMFG IS THAT JACK FROST?!?!?!
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AnimeOtaku8888 In reply to IamaCutie [2012-12-16 04:25:32 +0000 UTC]
hecks yeah! i love him!
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CelticIrishgirl [2012-08-10 20:38:11 +0000 UTC]
I dont know what's funny, but w/ the Reshiram 1 I keep giggling... O.O;
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Astral-Wingz [2012-07-08 21:48:57 +0000 UTC]
Maybe it's because Reshiram is all smiley & also it's mouth needs to be a bit shorter, it's too extended. Overall this is great!
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Tearsofanelvenrose [2012-05-03 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]
This looks like an epic tale in the making!
=3
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Ninplanet123 [2012-02-01 23:32:31 +0000 UTC]
I sustain it: Hilbert looks better with Samurott...
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himanuts In reply to Ninplanet123 [2012-02-01 23:43:48 +0000 UTC]
My preferance for Hilbert with Emboar may sky rocket since Black apparently just evolved his in the manga. xD
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DiceAura273 [2012-02-01 15:48:11 +0000 UTC]
This looks pretty cool! I dont get why evreyone says Reshiram looks cute. I think it looks normal... maybe Im just seeing things weird...
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torchickn [2012-01-30 20:34:22 +0000 UTC]
This looks amazing, can't wait to read more! Reshiram can be cute at times, regardless he's still awesome.
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Reaper145 [2012-01-30 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]
This looks really good! I love the way you draw White.
(Reshiram IS cute but... he's cute regardless, even officially (just also badass looking, it's a paradox))
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Yo-YoKirby [2012-01-29 23:17:32 +0000 UTC]
I like the coloring! The background is also good.
and...I love the expression on Reshiram's face. And Touya too. Keep up the good work!
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