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Missing you
is forsaking
the cooler side of the pillow
for the side that remembers
the impression of your cheek
and the soft smell of your hair.
It's reveling
in the butterfly thrill
of your gentle embrace,
but aching to close
the Rubin-vase distance
that separates us.
It's the difference between
the sound of your silver Corolla
as you pull to a stop
in my cul-de-sac
and the way it sounds
when you leave.
It's weaving "I love you"
into every word,
every touch,
every song,
short of actually saying it.
But the thing is,
I don't know
how much longer I can go
without saying it.
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Comments: 33
DragonFairy88 [2015-06-29 12:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Genuinely beautiful and relatable: you are exceptionally talented, my dear!
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hopeburnsblue In reply to DragonFairy88 [2015-06-30 00:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you, Chiara.
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DragonFairy88 In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-07-06 10:37:29 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, sweetie!
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D-A-Skelly [2015-04-06 09:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Love expressed through gentle images, nice one Mel
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haphazardmelody [2015-03-30 22:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Yes....baby steps are good and yet so frustrating at the same time. I've been there.
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AlgeriArts [2015-03-26 13:50:52 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful, and yet very easy to relate to. Thanks for bringing your mastery of words into our lives
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hopeburnsblue In reply to AlgeriArts [2015-03-26 15:37:23 +0000 UTC]
Aww, and thank you for this very sweet encouragement.
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2015-03-24 23:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful, both the words and the emotions behind them.
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comatose-comet [2015-03-22 15:53:15 +0000 UTC]
this is gorgeous and those line-breaks add such beautiful pause for thought throughout - every word seems carefully selected and there is nothing unnecessary or surplus here. amazing work
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shep4life [2015-03-22 01:15:16 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely adore this! The first stanza is divine
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shep4life In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-03-22 18:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Of course Mel! You make me smile
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shep4life In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-03-22 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Mission accomplished!
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d-e-l-e-t-e-d In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-03-21 22:57:30 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
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Kay-March [2015-03-21 22:26:05 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful. I love specially the 1st stanza, it stands as a poem by itself.
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Kay-March In reply to hopeburnsblue [2015-03-22 13:38:36 +0000 UTC]
You're always very welcome, truly!
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