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Published: 2013-05-06 02:21:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1232; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 11
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Gosh, this page is pretty crowded. In hindsight this might have worked better as a two page spread. Ignoring some unfortunate tangents, F'nor's sword arm is being obscured by Chain Guy in the foreground, which is a big no-no in my book. But since I've already planned future scenes in advance, changing this page into a spread will throw upcoming pages out of whack.I will just redraw F'nor's pose, and also make it into something more taichi-esque, as he is supposed to have a more martial arts style in his fighting.
Page 7 of Tale of Pylea. Updates every Monday. You can also read this comic at my website: [link] It's got proper navigation for an easier browse.
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Very nice! And great use of perspective and the splash of color from his weapon!
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i dont think it looks crowded at all: i like the layout! you're so lucky to have someone to work with too!
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Heh, thanks. For me it's crowded because certain elements are obscured, which I don't like, so a slight redraw will be in order. And having friends that can write helps.
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Looks really nice. Digging your art and shading.
Greay job.
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I love your style, it's something like what I wanted when I was doing greyscale, but alas, I can't even make it look nearly this good. Read up on the site so far, really diggin it.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you like it.
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