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Published: 2015-04-16 12:03:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 640; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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More GW (im such a looser), a short practice for storytelling. Only the one page tho im afraid, wanted to test my consistency for sequential art.Related content
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Hm.. overall I think it look good, nice texture and such
Something I think might would be better is if you draw some "moving lines" on the last panel so the readers can see how the hammer goes from the air towards the floor.
The effects you drawn on the floor where cool btw ^^
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Hey thanks, I see what you mean the last panel especially looks very static, would probably help in the second to last as well. I hadnt thought of that so thanks.
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