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Hyena27 — Elements Comic Test Page
Published: 2012-04-21 05:13:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1801; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 17
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So this is a test/promo comic page for Elements featuring Devin, Wolf Goddess of the Elements and Conrad, Great Horned Owl God of Destiny. So I'm pretty happy with how this turned out. Let me know what you think of the white borders and whether they are too thick. This was my first attempt at a Great Horned Owl. They are in there home among the starts. All Gods and Goddesses live in space watching over their world.Devin and Conrad are outlined by there reytlity (blue and gray). It's somewhat like a glow.
So I'm not pleased with the last panel, her neck is too long and my anatomy is a bit off.
Please let me know how I can improve. Constructive criticism is encouraged.
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Thanks! Yes IO need to practice my bird wings.
Thanks thats a great referance!
ahh I see what you mean. Looking at bat wings is a goodidea. i also draw dragon-like wings so bat wings will help. Oh I see.
No its ok thank you!
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Her wings have a bit too many feathers but other than that this looks great!
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Oh ok. I need to work on feathers
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Practice by looking at the shape of birds wings- and you'll be good to go! You have my full support!
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Ok
Your icon is awesome
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thank you -u- yours too! If you ever need help- don't hesitate to ask :3
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You have progressed! I really like the white borders! The colors look a lot bolder too!! You did a great job on the owl!! The only advice I can give about the wolf anatomy is practice, practice, practice! Using references really help!! Imagine the body as shapes like circles, rectangles, triangles, etc. Draw these as your base, then work off of that, instead of trying to just go by memory and freestyle.
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Thank you! I've been practicing^^ Thanks! I sure will practice! Thanks for the advice^^
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