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Hyena27 — Elements RS Prologue Pg-5
Published: 2012-07-24 18:38:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1914; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 32
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So many panels, this one took a lot longer than the previous pages. So Seth is being sentenced to exile. I had fun with the perspective of the last panel. Hopefully it looks ok:3 I used my dog a referanceXD A treat and a camera can go a long way.Special thanks to *ARVEN92 for helping me with the speech bubble position in the last panel
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well first and foremost i like the way seth speaks so far, maybe u should intermtantly do a page or two on him fo rhis side of the story, still like the auras etc. maybe u could try not drawing the nose bridge so sharply as is shown in panel 3 and 4, it draws attention away from the intensity of their intense stares, otherwise keep it up, i really want to see more and i still think it's very unique and creative. Also congrats on the official website, always a good thing to have for pople who aren't able to fallow through Devinant
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Thank you. I was thinking about that. The thing is I'm showing you this now and it will come up everyone and awhile through the series, but you will never know the true story until that last book.
Thanks. Oh I see what you mean about the nose bridge. Thanks
Thank you! Other comics have them so i thought why not make one too
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just an idea lol, u can still show shading etc. otherwise it might look unatural, so experiment a bit before deciding
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I see what you mean Thanks
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The next page should be out next week
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OMG I'm really really sorry for commenting so late ;;
Once again, this page looks gorgeous
Hoho! Do I spy Seth having feelings for Devin?
The only thing I would consider revising is the placement of the speechbubbles in last panel, as I istinctively read the highest one first, while I assume the one on the left had to be read before it?
In my opinion, the bubble on the left should be higher than the one on the right, because our eyes are drawn to read from left to right, from top to bottom. Imagine a square or rectangular panel. Well, the direction of our reading is represented by an arrow starting from the upper left corner, then going all the way across and ending in the bottom right corner. You should consider placing speech bubbles along this line, and your dialogues will be read the correct way by the readers of the comic^^
Other than that, I think the page is amazing! No other mistakes at all
Keep creating my friend! Never stop
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Oh it's fin, don't wory about it. Thanks doe always leaving comments
Thank you! i'm glad to hear that I am improving.
Somebody caught that? I didn't say anything...:3
I see what you mean. I wasn't really sure where to place that speech bubble. Thanks for the suggestion I'll have to play around with that later
Thanks! Don't worry I won't as long as you don't!
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Aww it's okay, truly^^
And I'm so happy I hekoed you^^
Haha, I sure won't!
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almost August
Looks awesome! : D I love your comic so far! ^^
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