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HyperChronic โ Well look at you...
Published: 2012-07-25 17:07:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 2844; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 0
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HA, my mom saw this accidentally last light, so I guess it's an early gift (YUS).She absolutely loved it and I got pissed. I don't want to know what's good about it, I want to know what's BAD about it.
ARTIST OPINION
I wish I used yellow as the background (or maybe a light blue), but she wanted pink in her picture, so LET THERE BE PINK!
The leaves and the petals LOOK ABSOLUTELY ATROCIOUS. Especially the background leaves.
The butterfly... don't get me started...
RANT OVER
Anyways, since professionals surround me, tell me what's bad about it. No need for compliments (since there is nothing to compliment), let the complaints roll in.
I don't know why I'm in this mood again... nothing happened recently... ?
Art(C) =HyperChronic
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Comments: 86
"Well look at you..." by HyperChronik,
Is a really beautiful and nice colored artwork of a butterfly on beautiful flowers with a loveley background.
I love the way you did the details on the butterfly, on the leaves, on the flowers, everything.
The choice of colors are really nice.
Your drawingstyle is so awesome and I can not find any words to say how good this is. The little shading on the wing of the butterfly looks so great.
I really really love your artwork of a really beautiful butterfly sitting on flowers.
Nice done my friend and I hope you keep this awesome work up.
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love the way you did this heaps of detail well done
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what's bad? WHAT'S BAD?!
you had to give it too your mom!?
meh get this too sometimes
nicely done
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This looks pretty good. The butterfly sticks out most in my eyes.
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Do you want the bad sides? Well, too much pink in the background and too much empty space. Had you cut just above the butterfly, then colored the background with paler shades of pink, it would have been better for the focus.
(but it's still good as it is)
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the let there be pink had me snickering for a while
what ? yes my taste in humor is weird why ?
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very nice, the colors are very beautiful
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Really nice work
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yes nicely done. the empty space works well, simple yet elegant
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wow so beautiful! Nice work! love the pastel / soft colours a lot!
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Very beautiful! I love the soft colors you chose.
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Nice job making everything soft, but not taking away from the sharpness of the image!
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Amazing details and beautiful colors... I loved it.
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wow it is beautiful and somehow so soft. I love it
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I think the way you did the flowers pushes more subject onto the butterfly, which is what you want anyway. the only thing I dont like about the picture isnt the color in the background its just the flatness of it, it needs some contrasting or shadowed colors and shapes in it so its not so flat, other than that you did a nice job on this.
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So nice!!!!!!! i'ts beautiful, I really like it
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work hard and keep practice more...u will do a lot better bro....
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very nice drawing, I think the pink bg is fine, it's not a bad contrast with blue, I just would suggest you to get some nice difference pink tones for the pencils, so you can reach more variances
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Yada yada yada. Stop ranting. It looks really good, and I won't take a no for an answer.
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so beautiful! I think you should darken those non-detailed background petals though : ) the flower won't read as flat then!
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beautiful and soft colors!
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I'm sorry....I have that problem....The pencils couldn't blend that good...
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I like the butterfly, but the liefs.. they could be better..
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No no its nice 
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Thanks... nevermind...I'm just wasting your time.
Have a nice evening!
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Very good Picture
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Dont be so hard on yourself, you have a really good drawing here, if you want to improve it, i would say where are the shadows? You have to think, where the shadows would fall depends on where your light source is coming from. There would definitely be shadows under the flowers where they meet the leaves and also you can add shadow underneath the butterfly. Leaving it as it is would be good as well because you have a lot of great detail, if you add some shadow in then this is a WIP drawing. Good luck!
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I wanted to add more shadow, but... I didn't do it. 
Thanks for the "compliments"...
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No problem, like i said it is a great drawing as is!
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I agree with this.
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i think it's great! a more detailed background would have been better but personally i like it
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I agree on the background.
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Whoa, you're WAY too hard on yourself. Personally, I think this is a great picture. Good job!!
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Heeheehee, you sure are hard on yourself, aren't you?
The biggest thing I think you could have done to make this was a slightly more detailed background. Or at least made a gradient of some sort. A faded out background of other plant life would have been really cool too.
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