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Published: 2012-03-10 01:23:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 317; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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she bent, over, spine bowed; kinkedto ensure, to see
the ground she walked upon
could support her
tree
long, the rise, a trunk, arms
open; terpsichorean
the sky she longed for
above one risky, gamboling
leaf
structure, sound; not crisp
the streets, the tweets
avian songs and flights
so swift, though light-like falling
feather
sweet, smooth; soundless
strong enough to die
she repeats, the bending from
sky, to ground beneath, to sky
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Comments: 6
xxxgenderideals [2013-01-08 02:26:31 +0000 UTC]
Excellent use of language, particularly the repetition of the letter s in the last stanza.
It makes this poem seem both saccharine and sinister. Well done.
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nighttimebeautiful [2012-06-13 18:31:05 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of my current favourite-word-ever, frondescence.
and this poem, just as sharp and lovely as all our favorite words.
(im glad to see you back )
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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to nighttimebeautiful [2012-10-24 21:46:15 +0000 UTC]
many thanks.
i was back, then i wasn't, and now i am... for now.
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