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I'm not sure what the Imperial Consortium called them, but we got to calling them Surts, after the Norse myth about the giant with the flaming sword. For a long time, we thought the Impies created them, and that was damn depressing. But later we heard that they were actually created millions of years ago by some long-gone race. The Impies just found them and their empaths figured out how to control them.I don't think I've ever faced anything that frightening. Over two stories tall, armed with a pulse laser cannon and a tri-barrelled rail gun that fires shells the size of tank rounds...in bursts. Armor so thick that you could forget small arms, they'd only make them mad. And in the other hand...that sword. We still don't know how it works, but the blade itself stays about the same temperature as lava under pressure with no apparent working parts.
Well...the "real" ones anyway. The Impies started making knockoffs once they figured out enough of the technology to get it right, but you could tell those from the real deal. They weren't as cunning or devious...and they didn't have that rage that the real Surts had. But the dead giveaway was the horns. Whatever the Surts used to be, I think they had big organic racks of horns, and their creators left them on. The ones the Impies make have metal horns and don't look as random. Also, their swords are covered in plasma fields, nothing like the real Surt weapons. I guess they don't know how they work either.
You know, even to this day, people still find those things, buried in ancient ruins on dead worlds. Some are even stupid enough to turn them on. Then the Colonial Marines have to come in and save their asses.
So where was I? Oh yeah. The battle for Getter Avenue.
Well, it wasn't so much of a battle really, though it was hell.
The Imps had pushed us all the way back into the southeast quadrant of the city. We had called in air support, but there was a whole platoon of Surts moving through the buildings, and they can lay down anti-aircraft fire that could cut through any air support while using the buildings as cover. Those things are wicked urban combat units; way more useful than a tank. But we figured that if we took out the leader, we could disorganize the rest of them.
The sarge and I hid up on a balcony on Getter, just as the leader came by, pursuing some poor platoon that walked right into the thing in Seward Square. Man, they got cut to ribbons. We only had two rockets left for the sarge's launcher, but she figured that if she could get a clean shot into that gun arm, we'd be home free. Mostly.
It came into view and, I swear, the sarge stands right up against the rail, sights and takes a deep breath as the thing stopped and turned towards her. I'd have never been so calm.
I couldn't help but look up and check. Real horns. Damn. She never looked at it, though, even as that sword went up. She simply let out that breath, took aim, and fired. And then all hell broke loose..." -- Cpl. Jesse Westenhouse, B Company, Dagda Third Dragoons.
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sevenofeleven [2010-10-09 16:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Interviewer: So! What happened next?
Cpl. Jesse Westenhouse: Well, we died of course!
Cpl. Jesse Westenhouse: Ha! ha!
Cpl. Jesse Westenhouse: Ok, this is what happened next...
Looks great.
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Misfit-KotLD [2010-10-07 12:20:49 +0000 UTC]
Why do I get the feeling this story ends with a posthumous Colonial Medal of Honor being awarded?
Also, I can see you using the textures of Jeff's swords on the authentic Surts' swords too.
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ILJackson In reply to Misfit-KotLD [2010-10-07 12:50:31 +0000 UTC]
well, you know at least one of them got away.
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Misfit-KotLD In reply to ILJackson [2010-10-07 15:08:57 +0000 UTC]
Or the interviewer is a necromancer.
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AshRandom [2010-10-07 10:47:34 +0000 UTC]
With the deer antlers - I can't decide if this is badass or just completely fucking ridiculous....
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Misfit-KotLD In reply to AshRandom [2010-10-07 12:21:43 +0000 UTC]
It's so badass it can wear deer horns and still be badass.
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ILJackson In reply to Misfit-KotLD [2010-10-09 03:16:17 +0000 UTC]
For some reason the original picture of the "thornhead" demon disturbed me when Rifts first came out. I'm not sure why. But since then, antlers always made a demonic creature more wierd and more scary to me. Go figure.
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Misfit-KotLD In reply to ILJackson [2010-10-09 11:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Because horns belong on deer, which belong in venison stew?
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ILJackson In reply to Misfit-KotLD [2010-10-09 12:17:10 +0000 UTC]
..yes, and they should also not be able to eat you.
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Misfit-KotLD In reply to ILJackson [2010-10-09 22:07:18 +0000 UTC]
Not to mention all those creepy stuffed buck heads with their trophy racks?
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storm-bunny [2010-10-07 07:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Hectic Wouldn't want to walk into one of those things. The question is though, did she manage to destroy it. I'm guessing since the Cpl. lived to tell the story that she did ?
Any case... Nice composition. There's a nice flow between the three characters: the Cpl. is looking at the sarge, who is looking at the Surt who is looking towards the Cpl. (even though not directly at him, his gaze still lead the eye to the Cpl.), leading the eye in a nice circular motion... very well done
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Blades-123 [2010-10-07 06:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Your use of focus really does make the Colossus feel huge. Excellent stuff.
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