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Published: 2004-11-01 22:18:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 10
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DarkenedI lie in bed
dreaming of my fake invitations
thinking of my false ambitions
Shattered
the sun seeks through the window shades
revealing all my truths
this purity stings
Forgiven
I wish I could forget
concentrate on the past tense
relationship broken
Deprivation
agitate all my enemys
make myself atone
cutting it to an end
Turned Against
I was brave enough
Reclaimed the mind, I suffered
Save myself a cure
Lying again
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Comments: 15
FistfulOfSand [2004-12-24 00:58:04 +0000 UTC]
Wish there was some punctuation to guide me along.
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Ingested-Truth In reply to FistfulOfSand [2004-12-24 01:03:54 +0000 UTC]
punctuation....schmuckuation *crosses arms and pouts*
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felixishomicidal [2004-11-02 04:03:01 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty. It makes me feel sad. I love it. I'm glad to see you submitting again.
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missmorbidminded [2004-11-02 03:48:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh Ash I'm so glad your some what back! I love your poetry! And this one counts. lol.
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TheInvisibleFriend [2004-11-02 02:52:05 +0000 UTC]
could this be? A "nu" side of ashton? Well done as for the expressing of thyself. It was... quaint. But not bad X_X;
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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-11-02 00:21:07 +0000 UTC]
This purity stings.
Awesome line, man. Makes the whole thing so much better.
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darknessupon [2004-11-01 23:39:16 +0000 UTC]
fast rythem i felt from it and read.
I am happy your posting something, great job too.
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