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Published: 2003-09-22 03:50:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Im sorryfor this pain Ive caused
I cant swallow
rather it makes me drown
Im sorry
to all those people hurt
I cannot follow
soon I will reach the painful
If every 16th tear, I shed
I could take away pain
If every person I hurt
if my mind goes insane
If all my dreams, dissappear
If all my heart, explodes
Im sorry
for all this pain,Ive caused
I cant swallow
rather it makes me drown
Rather it makes me.......
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Comments: 4
takniccals [2003-09-22 12:23:51 +0000 UTC]
I can even hear it as a song...-Hums-
Heh..Very nice. -Pat pat- Keep it up, buddy.
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perfectisboring [2003-09-22 11:24:44 +0000 UTC]
missmorbidminded's right; it would make a really great song. I love the flow and the layout. Nice diction as well. The overall theme is very nice.
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missmorbidminded [2003-09-22 04:02:49 +0000 UTC]
that would make an awesome song. good good work. heh.
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