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Published: 2003-09-22 03:50:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Im sorry
for this pain Ive caused
        I cant swallow
rather it makes me drown

Im sorry
to all those people hurt
   I cannot follow
soon I will reach the painful

If every 16th tear, I shed
  I could take away pain
If every person I hurt
   if my mind goes insane
If all my dreams, dissappear
If all my heart, explodes

Im sorry
for all this pain,Ive caused
   I cant swallow
rather it makes me drown

Rather it makes me.......
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Comments: 4

sugabear [2003-10-19 00:00:28 +0000 UTC]

I agree with them. It would make a great song.

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takniccals [2003-09-22 12:23:51 +0000 UTC]

I can even hear it as a song...-Hums-
Heh..Very nice. -Pat pat- Keep it up, buddy.

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perfectisboring [2003-09-22 11:24:44 +0000 UTC]

missmorbidminded's right; it would make a really great song. I love the flow and the layout. Nice diction as well. The overall theme is very nice.

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missmorbidminded [2003-09-22 04:02:49 +0000 UTC]

that would make an awesome song. good good work. heh.

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