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Published: 2003-08-14 03:45:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description I'm hypathetical
I wander day by day, kinda pathietical
Some say, I left the good behind
went in search for the lost
I went to hide, what couldnt find

Forever, and ever
gently dreaming
Forever and ever
stalking, breathing

I'm catatonic
Alone i sleep, a plague, bubonic
died for the cause
the cause is dead

Forever and ever
gently dreaming
forever and ever
catatonic, sleeping
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Comments: 2

sugabear [2003-10-19 00:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done

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alicatylon [2003-08-14 04:11:26 +0000 UTC]

its good, but i'd elimiate a line form the first stanza, particuarly the last line. I don't feel its necessary. ither than that, cool stuff.

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