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Published: 2003-09-25 21:25:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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As i sit in classi notice around me, that no one is like me
im not subdivided, or mimiced
Yet, i'm still labeled
As i walked down the street
i see dozens of people not like me
none, resembling or imitating me
Yet, i'm still labeled
im labeled everything from
"Fag" to "Goth"
from "Idiot" to "Badass"
from "ass clown" to "cunt maggot"
im not different from you
only in personality, and style
we are both humans, drawn by a passion to live
to find the meaning of life
Yet, im still labeled
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Comments: 7
Good poem. Stupid labelers. *Stabs them all with a spork*
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get out of my head. i swear im gunna hurt you for this one. but it is very very good...eeh.
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"we are both humans, drawn by a passion to live
to find the meaning of life I like those lines a lot. hmm...I noticed though that you need to work on spelling...if you don't mind me saying so <:]....unless you unintentionally misspelled mimicked...and this line "As i walked down the street
i see dozens of people not like me"< i/>..I noticed that the first part was in the past tense, and the second is in the present. Makes it sound jolty.
Good poem though....
(haha...at this point you're probably becoming 'unflattered' at making my watchlist simply because you'll notice I give a lot of critism...not to be picky or anything...I just think it helps..hope you don't mind)
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Everyone wishes they were famous, everyone wishes they could tell...Everyone everywhere can go to hell...-Hum-
Ahe, -cough- anywho...I really like it. -Nod- Its what happens when ye live in a short minded town like this.
Good job, buddy.
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