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Published: 2003-08-19 04:57:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Its not like i havent noticed you beforeIts not like i havent tried to talk to you
you walk right by me
"hi how your are doing today"
is what i would say
its not that this poem is crap
CUZ IT IS
i cant write
its a shame
i even try to
WHy do you even read my stuff
when you know its wrong
its not even GOOD at all!
turn back time
dont read this poem at all
your eyes will burn
because i cant write worth CRAP!
AND YOU KNOW IT!!
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Comments: 6
perfectisboring [2003-08-19 18:01:03 +0000 UTC]
*hugs and kisses* I think you're a great writer. ^^ If keep telling yourself that you suck, then you'll suck. Try and look at your work through the eyes of the reader, not the creator. I try to tell you that you're awesome, but you won't believe me until you believe in yourself. (I know it sounds corny, but it's the truth ) Keep on writing, 'cause you know it's what you love to do, and you'll soon see what everyone else sees. Love you. *hugs*
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Ingested-Truth [2003-08-19 05:02:32 +0000 UTC]
*nods* yep...and i cant write...read the other stuff
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missmorbidminded [2003-08-19 05:02:07 +0000 UTC]
i dont think your a bad writter!!! and im not blind, obviously cause i couldnt be typing this if i was. so HA i win!!!
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