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Published: 2008-04-02 21:54:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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omg, this took so long to do.I know it's not perfect, and I would appreciate any constructive critiques ot make it stronger.
Enjoy~
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Yes!
My teacher told me the perspective was off on a few things, but it seems fine to me. =\
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hehe Some parts look a little off at first but on a second glance it seems fine.. but I don't think I've ever used perspective with anything so I can't really say either way
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That's why I lothe drawing backgrounds. >.0 Everything must be perfect!
But I looked at it again today and saw what she was taking about. *sigh* I just hope I can fix it.
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It looks goood~
As for critique, I'd like to point out that if you made the things far off in the background a bit darker, you would be able to not only make them feel a little further back, you'd also be able to bring more attention to the character in the scene. If the back ground is what you're trying to stress, I suggest trying to make the character a little more lesss noticable. And I think the hair would look a wee bit better if you took a small brush and drew single strands to give it a less clumpy feel. <3
And that's all I have to say. O:
Lovely picture though. <3 I love the buildings and her pose makes me feel happy.
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Thank you!
After working on it for so long, it really helps to get another's opinion. I'll try the changes you've suggested, thank you for taking the time to critique it.
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