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travel. travel to

12 different countries.

write about to the ones

you've never been to. 


fall in love.

fall in hate.

fall in crippling

depression.


drink cheap coffee

live off caffeine

and cafes with 

free wifi. 


question everything and

everyone. never be a 

sellout nor trust a soul

with your words.


be a disappointment.

dispirit everyone and

no one because you'll

never be good enough. 


dream about fantastical

places filled with wonder.

twist them into nightmares

with raging beasts and cruelty. 


never be happy.

rip apart your work.

love something then

loathe it back.


cry about your regrets

to anyone who won't

listen and ignore those

who care.


write about the same 

person ad nauseum so

you become a wrinkle

in time instead. 


find a way to make

everything more dramatic.

be a hypocrite, go against

your beliefs. deny it. 


listen to shitty music. 

claims it's your muse.

your soul. truly abore

it's existence in your privacy. 


do not care too much.

do not care too little.

take others stories as

your own. 


only then shall you 

be thought of as great. 



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Comments: 7

stalkerchick666 [2013-10-21 00:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I love the idea that you have going here. But I don't really like how little good you put in it. Writing is an absolutely wonderful thing but in this you don't make it seem so and your reasoning for doing so is not quite clear. Everything up until "Be a disappointment" is wonderful, just fantastic but after that it just doesn't do justice to writing, or how to be a writer. I think that adding more good to it and a little less negativity would have made this poem much better. Adding a little more visuals would have been great to. I didn't really see what you were trying to paint, and visuals make for better impact. I like the style you wrote in though.

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BookWormMK [2013-12-12 13:14:34 +0000 UTC]

This is a wonderful poem, very well written (but you've got two mistakes: at nauseum when it should be ad nauseum, ahore- not sure what it's supposed to be, but ahore is not an existing word).

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inkstaineddove In reply to BookWormMK [2013-12-13 04:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for pointing those out. I'll fix them right now. 

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sevenofeleven [2013-10-23 22:52:46 +0000 UTC]

"dream about fantastical

places filled with wonder.

twist them into nightmares

with raging beasts and cruelty. "

This is a great part.
Now that I can do.

Cool poem.


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intricately-ordinary [2013-10-20 23:52:47 +0000 UTC]

love this

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inkstaineddove In reply to intricately-ordinary [2013-10-22 01:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God, you don't know how much that means to me coming from you.

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intricately-ordinary In reply to inkstaineddove [2013-10-22 01:31:14 +0000 UTC]

it's fantastic! what I love most is the reality and honesty of it

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