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Here is page eight of Chapter 1. I thought I'd try different perspectives to make it a little more interesting.
I do not own this story. It is originally by Stephenie Meyer. I only draw the artwork.
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good angles and perspectives to add some diversoty.
the two frames with half faces is a little too intense for that part of the story though i find, it looks like they are pissed at eachother. was that intended?
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Well, I was trying to make it seem as though they were having more of a face-off with their questions, quickly testing the other to see how quick a response they would give...if that makes any sense at all to you. lol.
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yeah that makes more sense. good work then because it did give off the feeling of a confrontation, i wasn't sure if that was what you were going for but being as it is, great!
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Thanks. I'm glad you understood what I wrote. I was kinda confusing myself. lol.
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I haven't read Twilight since... I'm not much for romance. But I can tell it's a really well-written book, since you're so dedicated to making this manga that's based off of it!
And so far, you're doing really well!
You're good at the angles... I could never pull that off
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Really? I'm good at angles? Thanks! That means a lot!
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You succeeded! I love it, it's awesome. I'm rereading parts of Twilight right now ^_^
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I love the different perspectives and angles.
It's awesome.
You did a nice job on their expressions, etc.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Makes me happy!
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