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inspirational-dreams — Choosing Paths
Published: 2008-01-15 02:29:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1811; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 94
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I'd like to thank ~MrWoland for granting me permission to use his background photo 'The Room' [link] . Please feel free to comment his picture via the link.**Please view in full size
The text says:
We loved to party
with any substance
within our reach.
Sometimes we’d
leave in states of mind
that could have been
our last goodbyes.
Still alive, with a thirst to quench
you’re still stealing money
to fill your stash.
I guess you’ve yet to realize
you choose your own path.
Critique as always is welcomed
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Comments: 21
I love this piece. The poem is great, something that really makes you think... well, it left me thinking about a bunch of things, anyway.
The one thing I'd say though, is that maybe you could've used a different font to put the text on the picture, something to make it look a bit more serious; maybe play around with different colours instead of making the words plain black. There's plenty of room on the upper part of the picture, perhaps it would've looked better if written there.
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Incredible. Worded as truthfully as can be...
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I hung out with people who never learned that lesson... 
Awesome writing.
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Its amazing all the topics your poetry covers and not just this poem. They are all really good to.
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This is a very powerful message indeed. I love the photo you chose to go with it.
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isn't it sad when you grow and realize you can't enlighten those who need it themselves? ive been there, thanks for putting it so beautifully.
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Amazing combo! I love the pic with the text, they match very well
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plain astounding. lovely poem and the image complements it perfectly.
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Thanks... but I didn't take the picture, so you should tell ~MrWoland that 
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Sometimes we’d
leave in states of mind
that could have been
our last goodbyes
love it
xx
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oh my .
jeezus woman, your writing gets me everytime.
definetly a 
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Very powerful, love the background too.
-Goes to fave original picture also.-
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Awesome
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No problem!
I feel as if I'm being a bit of a burden with all of these comments.
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not at all!
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