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InvaderIka β DIGITIAL CREEPYPASTA OC REFERENCE: Ally
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Its a term for the species of the infamous Slenderman.
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I didn't think he had a species
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Your OC is amazing. She can be cute and scary at the same times and you give her detailed information .
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Thank you~!! ;w; glad you like her!!
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Done with the drawing ^^
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By far the greatest Creepypasta OC I have seen on this site.
Most of the characters I have seen are simply "s/he went insane and killed people" or "it is millions of years old and has always been here". I enjoy that you did not make her overpowered and split each ability into two forms but still didn't make her too powerful. The dress, to me at least, is cosplay-worthy. I also enjoy even with some cliches you didn't let them show too much. It's also interesting how the little key is how she stays alive and that's the best part in my opinion. You must have worked very hard to make such a brilliant character. She has a balance of cute and horror to her which is excellent for what she is made it to be. Her weapons go well with her design, as well as how her mentality has stayed in tact with her age of death, since most people say "she is 13 but is like a 40 year old" or something like that.
Bravo! I'm curious, how did you make such an excellent character? I've had some troubles with a Creepypasta of my own lately...
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Aww thank you ;w;
Well, I have a real interest in looking up darker parts of the history- such as how people different from society were treated so brutally, the injustices of the judicial system and just the overall evil in men xDD
I tend to do a lot of research into the horror/creepy- such as history on abandoned places, or those stories untold in history books xD
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Ah, that makes sense! I should do some research myself then xD
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Sure! Will via notes do fine?
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You hardly ever see creepypasta's like this anymore.
I can see where you took your time on the weaknesses and powers, and trying your hardest to make her 'powerful' but not indestructible.
This is an awesome oc that has most likely undergone through intensive research and thinking.
this character shows how much hard work a Creator needs to put into their oc's besides just looking off of others creations.
This character is amazing, and I became a fan whenever I read through her characteristics and abilites.
She is well thought out, and the only things that are...well,as said in the other comments, 'cliche' is the schizophrenia and the dress.
But when i looked through your gallery, I noticed that Ally has other clothes instead of just one outfit, which a ton of other oc's don't have. Well, i'm guessing that she does since it was a quick scan through your gallery....
But also, if you take away the disorder away from her, what do you get? A plain oc that does not have a spicy backstory and personality. This is why Ally has schizophrenia, which so many people object too as i read through this ref's comments.Β
Ally is an awesome character that deserves the attention she has already, possibly even more than that. Ticci Toby is by far the most loved OC in the entire community, right alongside with Sally. But what powers does Toby or Sally have against this character?Β
Now i'm not going against the creators of Toby or Sally, in fact I love the two along with the other oc's i know of, but i'm just saying, Ally is amazingly thought through and is unfairly hated against by all of the other fans of creepypasta. Toby is just a normal human and the only things that make him 'stand out' is his inability to feel pain and his continuous 'ticcing'. Β
Compared to this character, I have to say that someone's rear-end would have gotten kicked.
Ally deserves more love and attention, and I am going to draw a lot of fanart of her soo Β o-o
I am so sorry if this offended anybody, and I am also sorry of this comment sounding like a review. I didn't intentionally meant for it to be this long, thus why i didn't even make it a review >_>'. Apologies to anyone if you needed it....
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Oh my god I am flattered ;w;
Thank you~! Thank you thank you thank you for the long but nice comment ;w;
Im really am glad you enjoy her <3 ;w;
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You're so very welcome ewe
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You should check out her origin story some time. May elaborate more about her.Β
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So who is the mother?uwu
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Oh! Annelie was her mother who technically her foster mother. She was a Nurse who worked at the asylum and was spared due to her actions to Adeline before the girl was murdered. Annelie later dies in action in WWI
Right now I can't lunk a picture of her since I am on my phone.
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Oh okay thanks xwx
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This certainly is a well-rounded character. Everything that makes up her person has a reason and it makes sense. I love this OC of yours! She's very quite although I will say this the mention of a Nightmare form threw me off a bit but I can't judge now can I, since I know little to nothing about Creepypasta's
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Aww thank you. I am really glad you enjoy her and think she isn't overpowered etc.
Makes my day!
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(in 2003 slenderboy meet ally the slenderdoll)
slendy:have fun to know each other and ally he's ur new brother have fun~
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Ally: Beautiful...
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slenderboy:sandwich :3
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GOD I STARTED TO WRITE A REVIEW AND THE COMPUTER DID SOMETHING STUPID. D:<<<<<<<<
FFF
Right. Back to normality. Sorry for late review... going to Berlin tomorrow :\ Also I'm not as expert-y with reviews really. But i'll try my best.
I love her appearance. She has an element of creepy and the colours used actually tone in well. I love how her hair isn't coloured black but the bright and most noticed colour is her blue eyes which give a sense of innocence though she isn't really innocent.
Her weapons match up well to her name and so does her weaknesses. Fire can be very fatal to dolls though I've never tried it before. Also the fact her arms can come off if she isn't careful. That would be more creepy if she threw something and her arm came off with it. Oops.
I like how she acts ten because she died at that age. I hate seeing mature Creepypasta's... sort of why Squiddy is a bit mad at seeing mature people half the time (he's my 'pasta by the way).
Also contributing to the fact she acts ten years old she has a doll which she would hate to be taken away. I know I would.
Do I like her Schizophrenia? Well even though there could be MILLIONS of 'pasta's out there with a condition I feel that Ally really does need this. Due to her personality being 10 years old she would find it hard to cope with this and get all violent over it 
And I like the fact she is sweet. I don't usually see that in a 'pasta if I'm honest. I usually see 'gets mad at anything, shouts at tree's' etc.
Also I've liked this OC for some time. I just really didn't know what to say without sounding odd... o.O
And I'm sure you've put a lot of work into Ally ^^ My Squiddy needs some more work done at the moment which makes me cry slightly (not literally).
Anyway good work and hope to see more!
- Edison.
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xD Thank you ;w;
I'm glad she is a well rounded character despite the cliches apparent xD
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No problem!
and you should be
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Please listen to this.
Do not give her schizophrenia, and do not use it as a reason for why she is so violent. Schizophrenia does not cause people to be violent, and saying that it does is so incredibly offensive to those who already have to put up with it. It is a serious mental illness and is damaging to people's lives, and to say that it will make someone's "mind and soul be torn apart" is just so offensive. It should not be used as a cheap gimmick to make a character more interesting. Please, please, change this, because although I am certain you didn't know and didn't mean to be offensive, it's still damaging to those with that illness. Thank you.
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I'm afraid I didn't intend to make it seem why she is violent. She was never violent to begin with, as I mentioned in her backstory, she never was violent, passive and only suffering what she was born with and dealing with an alcoholic father. Now, I have done my research, Plenty of it.
She has it for a reason, and Ally suffers through it daily. I live with actual people who have schizophrenia and learned from them.
Who made you the creator of my OC? I don't see them. Who asked you to judge a book by its cover? Not me.
Now if you excuse me, I didn't mean to make it offensive plus I know how serious it is. But I do not like when people straight up tell me how to change my OC. I created her like this for a reason and I am not in the mood for oversensitive people about matters like this.
Thank you.
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I actually have schizophrenia. May I ask what makes you such an expert on these matters?
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I never said I was an expert, nor do I expect anyone to take me as such. I understand the creator's reasoning for doing so, but I do like reading about OCs, and because of this I have seen far, far too many people use mental illnesses as a cheap way to make their character more interesting, special, or a reasoning behind why they kill others, and I feared this was the case, as it usually is.
While I'm not an expert on mental illnesses, this does make me fairly experienced in the traits that others use when creating characters such as these, and that was the foundation for my judgement.
I am aware I am not the creator, but in my opinion, if someone asks for criticism they should be willing to take it. A simple, "I know about this, I have my reasons for it" would have sufficed. That is what criticism is; it is saying what someone else would change about the character or the work itself. You may not want to take it, and you are perfectly within your rights not to, but to insist that no matter what, the other person is wrong is pure foolishness and will lead to plateauing when it comes to writing.
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We're did you find the digital charecter maker? (I think that's what it is) And do you know of any websites were I could make an OC?
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Digital character maker? Oh you mean the reference blank sheet?
Its here: starbunnies.deviantart.com/artβ¦
Websites? Not that I know of...
But my friend has a wonderful series that can help making an OC:
shacklesoul.deviantart.com/galβ¦
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Thank you so much!
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Aw, you flatter me.Β
Also, if you're reading this BloodyHeart18, don't get intimidated by reference sheets. It might look like a lot of work but you only have to cover the essentials if you want to. After all, creepypasta is supposed to be enjoyable for the creator too.
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Thanks ShackleSoul I was started to debate about wether or not I should make my OC public but you reminded me that writing anything even an OC is supposed to be fun! So thank you! Your comment means a lot. 
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No problem. I wish you good luck in writing for your OC.
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xD
I been spreading the word of your guides. Just earlier in a join.me, I recommended them to a person who wanted to create their own first CP OC~
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That's great of you. That's what the guides are for, after all. I don't want newcomers to feel swamped with pressure or get the impression their own ideas are inadequate.
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