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Published: 2014-02-12 17:05:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2213; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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We all understand. We all make mistakes. And you're going to be okay.Β I'll suffer with you if no one else will. I promise. Just so long as I get to see your smile again...Related content
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To help transform a life is a good deed. We need more people with the courage to help others and see the beauty that lies behind the scars. Excellent work.
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With the exception of the change in rhyming scheme at the end, and the couplet in the middle, I did like the overall poem itself. I personally think you've done a decent job with the message of this poem, and I'll let these two details pass. For a start you've written a decent poem and for another you've chosen a readable font and workable background to go with it. Its a balanced work and overall, I'm glad you're doing what you're doing. Keep up the good work Cheers.
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We all need the support and friendship of others. We can achieve our goals if we stay positive and feel confident. Your poem has a strong message. If you self-harm talk to someone who care and can help. An excellent piece of verse.
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Wow, just wow. This is so amazing that I'm speechless.
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Outstanding piece of writing here. Love the way you've presented this and it's such a touching read.
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That's a beautiful poem, and with such meaning
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Thank you, very much.
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i should let my friend read this, she's going through horrible things
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Just tell her it'll be okay. It's the truth.
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Thank you for being such a wonderful person and writing such beautiful things. I don't see myself smiling for a long time though.
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It's my pleasure. Please smile or I'll be forced to to this:
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I'd probably just do that back to you and I'm just not okay, life really doesn't like me this month.Β I kinda feel dead, I can only try. I'd rather just have a hug, hugs makes everything better.
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Happy Late Valentines Day, that was not the best day for me but I would love to hug you :3 Happy Birthday! I'll smile at least once for you today
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This is absolutely beautiful.Β So sweet in meaning and touching with it's strength.Β Wonderfully done!
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You're welcome~Β ^^
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Beautiful! It's sweet and strong, and touching. I have had issues with cutting in the past, and if someone had told me the contents of this poem years ago, things might have gone very differently. This very good on so many levels. I hope it reaches the one you wrote it for!
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I wrote it for nobody in particular. It's just a general feel good poem for everybody~
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Outstanding, I wish I had read this poem a month ago. Thank God I had friends who didn't give up on the person that I once was. It was them that made me the strong man that I am today
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If only friends like that were more common. I'm glad they could help you pull through.
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Yeah, I know right? And thanks
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Faved... That Background is my desktopΒ
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Lol it's a pretty awesome backdrop.
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