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Published: 2019-03-27 13:38:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1436; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 2
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Rival until who knows..Error by Crayon Queen/loverofpiggies
Ink by Myebi/Comyet
Fanart by me
EDIT : fix some mistakes
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Hello from ProjectComment !
Okay! I've been wanting to comment on this piece for a while. Now, I have some time to. I think you did a really good job with this piece! The line work is nice and smooth, and you did a really good job with the shading. I also love the colors on both the characters and in the background. The hands are also fricking excellent--I am so jealous of your hand-iwork.
Puns aside, I think the proportions, while they're largely great, get a little wonky when you get to the character's heads. Their foreheads both feel a little too long; it's especially bad with Error's. I think if you just used a transform tool--or whatever the equivalent is with whatever software you're using--and shrink them down a little, they'd be fine. But, it's not too huge of an issue. That happens all the time.
I will say one thing that kind of gets my attention. The big, white bar in between the two characters also feels a little distracting. Perhaps, instead, you could try a thinner black line next time? In a bigger page, where panels need a bit more separation, this might have looked a lot more natural. Here, with two panels, though, it feels a bit abrupt--especially with how bright that white is.
All criticisms aside, I love the feeling these two panels invoke. This definitely feels like the start to a fight, but it doesn't feel like they're IN the fight yet--if that makes any sense. This feels like a conversation that went very, very wrong. Ink's not wanting to hurt Error since he's, you know, the guardian of the AU's? But, he might have to. And he hates that.
And, a few seconds after this, then they'll exchange blows.
The two panels tell a lot, and that's an amazing skill to have. Nice going, dude! Keep it up.
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Hello!
Thank you for your time observing and commenting this piece. Im so happy.
For the hands, I really appreciate your compliment (you dont have to be jealous though because I believe you can do it too!). I usually take photos of my own hands with similar pose and make them my references for hands XD I used mirror for better result. Well sometimes the result is not as expected so I still have to use my imagination or browse other references (and they have to be skeleton hands LOL).
I also agree with the heads. I fixed them several times but it seems like I still need more practice.
Also for the white line in the middle, I totally agree with you. At first, this piece was supposed to be like comic panels with black and white colors. But suddenly when I accidentally added color, it looked better than expected. Then I changed my plans. It seems like I forgot about the middle black lines. I just created them once then left them without thinking about the result when combined. Also thank you with the suggestions.
I'm glad you understand the main focus of this piece. It is like a deadly encounter for both of them. With Error being so mad, and Ink trying to keep himself sane. And of course, the next few seconds would be their possible fight to the death.
Fun fact, I wanted to make the middle line slope. If you read a Manga, you might have found panels where rivals began to fight and the separator is sloped (I dont know what it's called though XD). That way, the situation would become more intense. But I realized that the drawings are not full (and Im too lazy to draw more since they were finished) and the sloped separator would make half of Error and Ink gone
Anyways, I would keep in mind everything you said, also your suggestions and constructive critics for my future pieces.
Once again, thank you so much for your time.
Keep moving forward and good luck for both of us!
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Yeah, I’m glad you appreciate the criticism 😁
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Error: “DIE!”
And Ink be like: “Do I REALLY have to do this shit?!” XD
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your comment made me LOL so hard XDDDDDDDDD
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I've seen yellow on ink's finger but now it's gone XD
Btw, this is awesome tho!!!
Ink and Error is my favorite!!
And u draw it good!
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LOL someone noticed my mistake XD
Yes, I just fixed it. I noticed them being too bright and Ink's fingers are not made from glass or something, also it made him look like he dirtied his fingers with yellow paint XD
Btw, thank you for the compliment!
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XDDDDD it happened to me too!
I see UvU
An you're very welcome!
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