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==END OF ACT 1==Cover: [link]
Pages 01-02: [link]
Pages 03-05: [link]
Pages 06-07: [link]
Pages 08-09: [link]
Pages 10-11: [link]
Pages 12-13: [link]
Pages 14-15: [link]
Pages 16-17: [link]
Pages 18-19: [link]
Pages 20-21: [link]
Pages 22-23: [link]
Pages 24-25: [link]
Pages 26-28: You're here.
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STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT - ACT 2
Cover: [link]
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It's a vampire story and for the moment werewolves are not involved, however in this comic univrse they do exist.
Thanks for reading it!
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love love love love love love love love this comic,thats the best short vampire story i read so far, you are amazing
and i also love vampires and your style is very cool.tha cute skinny boy reminds me of edward from full metal alchemist
keep up your story !!!!
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lol, Thanks, really, thank you so much for your comment and for reading my story.
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its my pleasure
i loved this story
and ed is kinda hot
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haha, thank you, he'll appreciate that.
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FFFFF YOU'VE GOT ME HOOKED!!! Thank you for creating such a spellbinding comic, I love the artwork and the storytelling very much! What drew me to this comic was the fact it involves vampires, which I'm really into atm 
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thanks a lot, specially comming from you.
lol, That was exactly how I got to your galery, congrats btw, your drawing style is gorgeous.
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Haah awesome! x-D Thank you 
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ouch! getting his head smashed in a wall looks like it hurts.
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hey muy buen cΓ³mic pero te tengo una pregunta las sombras la haces tradicional con photoshop o que puedes responderme por favor;D
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hola. Muchas gracias. ^^
todo el trabajo de "toning" o sombreado lo hago en programas digitales (como photoshop). Se puede hacer en tradicional (con aguada por ejemplo) pero se presta mucho para errores, en cambio en digital si no te gusta como va, lo deshaces y listo.
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o muchas gracias
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de nada. cuando tengas dudas, pregunta nomas.
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this is awesome 
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the first mistake is when Alastair says " The street open ups" This should be " The street is opening up."
Hmmm, this one is difficult. It sounds very awkward to read this sentence, though it is still correct if you chose to leave it. Maybe it would sound better as, " The end of the street!" Or " The street ends just ahead!"
The other sentence that I wanted to mention was the one where Alastair thinks to himself... " The smell gets stronger." This sentence is correct, however it would sound better like this...
" The smell is getting stronger."
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What about: "I can see the end of the street now!" Des this looks better?
I like the last sentence too.
Wow, I can see there were lots of mistakes. :S
I really appreciate all the help and I think it gets worse in the following pages, specially cause I changed and added lots of dialogs.
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lol, sure! That new sentence looks fine! The spelling is good too! Great job!
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Thank you so much for reading it, I hope you like the next act.
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Aww, you just have to follow the link: [link]
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...did they die? *kinda confused...
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which pages are you refereeing to?
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ah, ok. it's an open end, meaning: you can imagine what happens next in case you never continue to read the story. Now if you ask me, they do not die.
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sorry not much of a writer more of a reader! ^^
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Next part is online: [link]
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Mon Dieu! me encanta la historia!!! te atrapa y ademas tiene de todo!!!
Seguire leyendola, de verdad me esta gustando mucho, y no puedo esperar a ver mas!!!
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QuΓ© bueno q sea capaz de mantener el interΓ©s! ^^
Muchas gracias por leer y comentar!
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De nada! seguire leyendo, porq esta muy buena!
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AWESOME! I love the last panel! 
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A really top notch first issue.
And, once again, your commanding use of perspective is somethin' else.
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Thank you so much, really.
I think different angles help a lot to express some ideas, they're the best.
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Ah!! Realmente me gustΓ³! ^^ LeerΓ© el resto maΓ±ana (creo XD) Es un muy buen manga!! Felicidades! -aplausos- n.n
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Muchas gracias por pasarte a leerlo y me alegro de que te guste!
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Thanks, I'm happy to know you enjoyed it so far.
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*nodnod*
canΒ΄t wait for the next pages in ch3/4 ;O;
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