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jan-michael9500 — I Wake Up in the Morning....
Published: 2008-06-17 05:02:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2052; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 45
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colored version of this work:[link]
panel notes:
i wanted to create panelling that allowed the reader to somewhat rotate clockwise and/or counter clockwise when reading it...
so if you read it starting from the top left panel going to the top right, you still get the same overall story if you would read from the top left panel to the bottom left...
... it was hard ^_^ burnt several hours just thinkin about it...
did it work? ^_^
you feedbacks are greatly appreciated.
thank you in advance.
-DOX
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let me just say that this looks very spiffeh! and i never complain when it comes to spiffeh! i didnt expect it to come out like that but it did! Glee for me! ^_^ weeeee
do you like it?
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Comments: 45
i like the perspectives that you put into this, though the clockwise deal is a bit hard to follow for my taist.
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then try counter clockwise XD ^_^
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nice use of perspectives to express the dizzying, sluggish mood in the morning. . . . good work mike! want more. . heheh
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Kung ako ang buyer mo bibili ako. Oo sure ako.
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waw! 'lamat XD ^_^
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Wonderful comic! The panel compositioning is well done, and I especailly admire the bed wrinkles.
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i love how the folds in the beddings tured out aswell ^_^
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Very well done, in my opinion, I guess Dox isn't really a morning tiger is he? lol,
the only critique I can really think of? Well on the close up pics you've done of Dox, I think it should show more of the 'furry' effect if you know what I mean, from far away, yes it looks like lines, but close up you can see hairs and fur seperately. But that's just my opinion.
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yes, i'm having trouble with pulling that effect on a good way XD
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It's relatively easy to do, it took me like a few days to master, just take like a good close up pic of a tiger, lion, any furry animal, try to copy all details, then simplify it down and tis done.
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comics normally du ^_^
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The panneling works for me. And I just have to saw, that drool shot at the bottom cracks me up.
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Really? How can you not get to love that drool?
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hehehehe your the first one to actually get that part of my inside humor ^_^
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lol souds alot like me..........sept i a wolf ..........
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I think the paneling worked out great. 
Good work!
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Gah I can relate with this--especially from the past few nights of staying up until 5 am x3
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hehehehe ^_^ it happens to most of us late night sleepers XD
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I wanted to say sexy, but i dont want you feeling all weird on me^^
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so comicy.... anyway aside form me liking it... the big letdown is we want more... why not try to make this into one chapter. hehehehe just around 10 pages... and use the plot "man on the road". which would mean no conflict para pas pas ang story ba ..swift heheheheh..
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coolness ~!!! XD i like teh phone hehee
one comment teh text ish small >.<
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yeah i know, gotta work on that XD
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XD ahihi naa pa ni kasunod? XD ahihihi dungagi pah
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I love it!
It looks really cool! I hope this turns into a regular strip?
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