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Uploading this now to encourage myself to actually write the script. When will I start? Probably not any time soon with my final mid yearly next week but we'll see. Still got a ton of world building research to do but I've got the main story written down.
Not sure if I like the end product, it's a little busy but I'd like to know what you guys think. Will probably get changed in the future.
So yeah, advice greatly appreciated.
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ChatLunatique [2016-05-01 12:25:52 +0000 UTC]
I think a few wires at the bottom (viewer's) right, could be removed to clean up the overall composition a bit, without losing the gritty urban gang-land ruins feel. Really a great cover as is though! It really gives a feel for the story to follow..., unless the story is about rainbows and happiness, but... given the title.... Thumbs up!
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JatoWhitz In reply to ChatLunatique [2016-05-01 12:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, that helps. Something about this cover has been bothering me (well, several things) and you're right about the wires.
It's actually a feel good slice of life about a down on his luck butcher who takes in two dogs that turn his life around, get him closer to his love interest and help with his business
Haha just kidding.
Thanks so much for the help!
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ChatLunatique In reply to JatoWhitz [2016-05-01 12:36:14 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure. Looking forward to reading more.
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OokamiAikouka [2016-04-24 17:02:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm really digging this cover page. Like, it looks like it would make an awesome poster.
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JatoWhitz In reply to OokamiAikouka [2016-04-25 05:25:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! If the comic gets popular enough I might even offer this up for print, who knows? x3
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OokamiAikouka In reply to JatoWhitz [2016-05-01 18:08:09 +0000 UTC]
That would be great if the comic got popular!
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JatoWhitz In reply to Strayay [2016-04-17 03:26:34 +0000 UTC]
That's a lot of hype. I'm not sure if I'm fit for this responsibility.
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