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Published: 2006-12-02 21:37:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 272; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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ive tried so many timesto start
to mend and heal
my broken heart
but when i try
the needles dulled
the weak thread breaks
when its pulled
but Lord
each time i was alone
lacking faith
where pain was sown
so God please hear
this heartfelt plea
this wish that Youd
create in me
a new clean heart
as pure as gold
so Your sweet grace
ill have to hold
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Comments: 18
Duality-duo [2006-12-17 21:34:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it sounds really professional! This one is definetely your best one!
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Java-java In reply to Duality-duo [2006-12-19 03:57:01 +0000 UTC]
it sounds professional? O_o
sweeet.
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INspired-Angel [2006-12-03 06:02:24 +0000 UTC]
the poem!
SO true!
'Create in me a clean heart, O God. And renew a right spirit within me...'
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Java-java In reply to INspired-Angel [2006-12-07 02:09:19 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you! love that verse
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RandomK [2006-12-03 03:09:50 +0000 UTC]
cool. I bet it'll look even neater with the art.. haha
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Java-java In reply to RandomK [2006-12-07 02:08:13 +0000 UTC]
thnx! yeah, i wish i could show you guys the art, but *points dramatically to empty spot where scanner SHOULD be*
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RandomK In reply to Java-java [2006-12-07 04:34:54 +0000 UTC]
i know that all too well....
My scanner stinketh too.
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friendkeep [2006-12-03 02:09:58 +0000 UTC]
I love it,
a poem indeed,
as if the words were meant for each other.
Scanner Challenged,
Hahaaa.
Oh,
and it was weird at first,
but I like the new way to submit better than the old.
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Java-java In reply to friendkeep [2006-12-07 02:07:11 +0000 UTC]
aww shucks
thnx!
yet i'm still sure your poems rock harder than mine! lol
The new format does seem more effecient, but it doesn't really work on my computer, (my computer deserves a good kicking) so it was only by luck that i got this poem in
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friendkeep In reply to Java-java [2006-12-07 03:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Well,
I don't know about that,
that's almost like say that Genesis is more important that Revelations,
you know.
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Java-java In reply to friendkeep [2006-12-07 23:57:24 +0000 UTC]
okay okay I get your point mr.humble
BOTH our poems rock
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friendkeep In reply to Java-java [2006-12-08 05:39:10 +0000 UTC]
I thought you'd feel that way.
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