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Java-Kitty — What's Happening To Me?!

Published: 2014-07-25 02:09:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1800; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 0
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Description My Little Pony - Hasbro
Art / Kitistrasza - Me
Original Sketch - sta.sh/01srm4fef5pi
Stop! You are not allowed to reuse my art or the character shown in anyway!!

NOTE!: Kit isn't bleeding from her eyes.
She ACTUALLY in her changeling form cries red. It's a mixture of her tears and the natural changeling "goo" she secretes from her body. (I.e the subsance that allows changelings to spin cocoons and trap their prey)

Story time! Kitty's gonna take you all on a feels trip!!


Kit woke up that morning feeling a bit under the weather. Her joints hurt and she had a burning headache like someone had lit a fire in her skull.
She shook herself assuming nothing of it and crawled out of bed. Lying around complaining would do her no good, she needed some medicine stat and cleaning up would make her feel better without a doubt too. She slowly trotted over to her bathroom and looked at herself in the mirror. The same old face stared back at her. With her pale pastel pink coat and long and at the current time messy mass of red hair.

She huffed and smiled a bit as she reached for her hair brush. Just as her hoof got to touch the handle another wave of pain hit her making her feel sick. Brushing her hair and getting ready for the day COULD and WOULD wait but this headache demanded her full attention. She opened up the medicine cabinet and found a bottle of aspirin. She sighed in relief and shook out two little tablets and quickly downed them. Almost instantly she felt some of the pain wear off.

Kit looked at the clock as she waited a minute to make sure she could atleast function again. She got migraines alot and they were rather frequent now-a-days since she had started hanging out with a new friend of hers. His name always slipped her mind as did his exact features but the moment she would see him it would always come back to her. Kit never was very good with remembering people. Another thing that seemed to happen more often to her. Just the other day she would stutter at trying to remember her own cat's name.

She jumped as she actually saw the time the clock read. It was almost mid-day and she had only JUST woken up! She had plans to go out with her sister and aunt in an hour! How could she have forgotten? Much less no set an alarm? Or did she sleep through it? Kit's thoughts were hazy and she shook herself as if trying to physically bring herself under control. She couldn't just sit around and worry she had to get ready. Kit grabbed the brush and rushed to her room throwing up her closet door.

Kit looked around for a moment before finding what she was looking for. Her favorite hoodie -a jacket with a hood that was black in color and extra soft!- of course, and the pair of rainbow socks she wore daily. She quickly wiggled into her hoodie and it seemed a bit looser than before. Had she lost weight? And if she had when? She rarely went outside and did little to no exercise. Kit shrugged the thought off as she slipped on her socks like her did everyday. They too seemed a little bit big on her. But not as much as her hoodie. She would have to think about it later. She needed to finish getting ready before her sister came to pick her up.

The young earth pony almost was giddy with excitement. She was to be visiting canterlot with her sister and aunt. There was a huge art festival going on there right now and as an aspiring artist she was so eager to go. They had planned the trip for a long time and she was just so happy to finally be going. Maybe if she was lucky she could even meet some of her artistic idols!

Squeaking with barely held in joy she began to run her favorite brush through her mane. It glided through her mane like a hot knife through butter. Not abnormal for someone like Kit who brushed her mane and tail near constantly. Her mother always warned her when she was little that one day if she kept brushing her hair like she did it would all fall out. So far it hadn't happened so why should she listen to tha---

Kit stared wide eyed at her brush came away. Large clumps of red hair were stuck to the brush. She cleaned it out last night. Or did she? Why was she having such a hard time remembering things? And why did she pull so much hair away? Or was it already there?

She frowned and quickly plucked the clumps of hair out and than ran the brush through her tail. Maybe she had forgotten to clean the brush, yes that had to be it there was no way a simple stroke could of pulled out that much...

Again as she pulled the brush away it was full of masses of red hair. Kit began to panic and grabbed at her tail. No sooner had her hooves touched it the silky hairs began to fall out in massive waves. The earth pony held back a scream as her tail hair began to rapidly break off and form piles on the floor. She snatched at that futilely somehow thinking she could stop it. But the more she touched her hair or tail the more hair would fall out.

She began to cry when a wave of sharp pain hit her almost directly from her forehead. She couldn't help but scream as she felt as if her limbs were on fire. She fell forward clutching her head as she felt as if someone was driving an ice pick into her skull. What was going on? Why was she in so much pain?!

An intense itching pain started in her legs. She subconsciously began to scratch as her forelegs and hindlegs trying to make it go away. She began to tear the fabric of her hoodie and socks to pieces to try and get to the skin underneath and in to much pain to simply rip them off. She felt as if a thousand fire ants were crashing up and down her biting her over and over again. Once the fabric was tore off she without regret scratched at her exposed skin tearing away hooffuls of fur.

Another wave of pain hit her and she once again fell over with a horrific cry. A sharp pain stabbed her through the back and the sound of tearing fabric caught her attention. Turning back she saw two lumps strain against the fabric. Quickly the fabric of her hoodie tore revealing two red-pink translucent wings. Kit stared in dumbstruck horror. What was going on? Why was this happening?!

The pain was now constant and intense as more grotesque changes took place. She wasn't able to focus, her eye sight kept blurring and going black around the edges. She looks down at her hooves trying to steady herself when she saw her skin was sickly pale and in places appeared to be MELTING off...

Kit screamed one last time as she saw this and the pain hit again with full force. She mercifully blacked out...




Luna knocked on the door for the fourth time. Where was Kit? What could be keeping her up?

Impatient the blonde mare looked through her bags and quickly found a key painted bright pink. Luna had promised her sister that she wouldnt use the key to enter her apartment again but she wanted to make sure she was okay. The door opened with a loud creak and Luna carefully walked inside. She looked every which way making sure nothing was changed.

Everything seemed in place from the last time she had visited but something didnt feel right.

As she walked into the living area Kit's large cat Sebastian revealed himself to her. He rubbed his orange self on her violently and made loud crying whining noises as if he was in pain. Luna bent down to pet him but he wouldn't stop making the noise.

"Sebastian is something wrong?" The cat made a particularly loud cry "Where's Kit?"

Without so much as another word the cat ran into the room Luna knew to be the bedroom. Luna looked around the living room one last time before following him.


Luna was almost sick at the sight infront of her.

A strange grey and pink THING covered in blood and matted pieces of fur was sprawled on the ground. Luna took a step back as it slowly rose into a shaky standing position. It locked it's sickly death ridden eyes on her and opened it's blood stained mouth making a buzzing clicking noise.

"C-c-ch-CHANGELING!!" Without another look she bolted from the house.




Kit slowly opened her eyes and looked around. Everything was blurry and she couldn't make out the shapes infront of her. She forced herself to stand and made a strange foreign clicking sound as she grunted in pain.

Something like a shout drew her attention but she couldn't make out what made the sound or what it even said.

Her vision began to clear as she half dragged half limped over to the bathroom. She immediately threw up a strange pink purple gooey substance into her toilet and her eyes widened as she pulled back.

She felt like she was on fire and frozen at the same time. Her head burned violently but the rest of her body shook violently.

Kit reached up to the sink and pulled herself up and allowing herself to look into the mirror.

Her eyes were wide in shock. Her hair was short and full of holes as well as a pale almost sickly pink color. Her coat was non-existant and her skin was a deathly grey. Long translucent wings colored pink extended from the ruins of her hoodie and she lifted an arm to cover her eyes and gagged as she realized it was ridden with large horrific holes. She put her arm down and continued to look in the mirror. At a face so much different than the one she was familiar with. The only thing that seemed unchanged was her eyes. The right a brilliant blue and the left a starling green.

But almost as soon as she thought that the color seemed to bleed out of them and be replaced by soulless pink eyes slit like a cats.

She broke down crying for what seemed like an eternity in that bathroom until she ended up curled up into a ball on the floor. She never wanted to move from this place. She didnt want to ever have to look at herself again. She was a monster...

A monster...


Something cold and hard was placed at the base of her neck. "Get up slowly you disgusting vermin."

Kit's eyes snapped up and she looked up and into the face of an almost enraged guard pony. She went to talk to tell him she did nothing wrong but all that came out was a skittering bug noise.

The guard looked sickened "Filthy disgusting bug...." his face hardened again "I said get up..."

Kit slowly got up and immediately was grabbed from behind by two more guards. She made a hissing screaming noise. And struggled but something sharp was placed against her throat.

The first guard spoke again "QUIET BEAST!" he looked behind him "This is the one?"

Luna stepped forward and she seemed in tears "Yes..." she looked at Kit with disgust "the thing must of taken the place of my sister....how long do you think she's been gone sir?"

He shrugs and gives her a hug "I couldn't tell you but your lucky it didn't hurt you." he glares at Kit "Now we will make sure this monstrosity can never hurt anyone again. Take it to the dungeons."

The two other guards nodded and began to drag Kit away.

No later had they made it outside...Kit already forgot who those ponies were...




The end....for now...




Luna belongs to Solarsaris
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Comments: 93

Java-Kitty In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Because I can?
And it makes me feel good that I can make people have emotions?

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wwizzard In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:56:04 +0000 UTC]

it was a very well written story. thank you for the feels.

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Java-Kitty In reply to wwizzard [2014-07-25 04:56:55 +0000 UTC]

You is welcome

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wwizzard In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:59:15 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Java-Kitty In reply to wwizzard [2014-07-25 04:59:46 +0000 UTC]

I normally dont consider myself a good writer so to know people have the feels is good for my ego XD

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wwizzard In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:00:45 +0000 UTC]

^u^

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Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 03:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh my!

Really don't have much to add...

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Java-Kitty In reply to Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 04:31:34 +0000 UTC]

I hath editted in a story now.

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Nobodyspatzy In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:55:04 +0000 UTC]

... I don't know what else to say. I am frankly at a loss.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 04:57:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry X_X

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Nobodyspatzy In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:11:53 +0000 UTC]

No... Really down. Not you.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 05:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Wait what?

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Nobodyspatzy In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, not typing correctly.

I meant it isn't you. I like the story, just lack the words to say anything.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 05:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh alright
I do alot of feels stuff though...I'm very grimdarkish.

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Nobodyspatzy In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:50:10 +0000 UTC]

I know ... Probably shouldn't have read it... I feel sad.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Nobodyspatzy [2014-07-25 05:54:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry..

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Nobodyspatzy In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 06:22:01 +0000 UTC]

You have nothing to be sorry for! C:

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scifidude47 In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 03:29:25 +0000 UTC]

STOP.

MAKING ME.

WANT TO.

CRY.

BOO D:

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Java-Kitty In reply to scifidude47 [2014-07-25 04:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Never.

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scifidude47 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:38:50 +0000 UTC]

why boo.

why.

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Java-Kitty In reply to scifidude47 [2014-07-25 04:39:47 +0000 UTC]

It's fun?

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scifidude47 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:48:41 +0000 UTC]

nein. 

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]

I did something similar, while yours looks really cool.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 03:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Wait what?

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 03:04:22 +0000 UTC]

I mean that I did something similar a little while ago ^^ tori-the-eevee1234.deviantart.…

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 04:21:27 +0000 UTC]

But mine has more feels >: D

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:27:55 +0000 UTC]

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 04:30:34 +0000 UTC]

I just added the story.
I bet its more feels like.

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Have you read mine?

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

I didn't see the story part link it again XD

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:22:20 +0000 UTC]

tori-the-eevee1234.deviantart.…

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 05:25:50 +0000 UTC]

I have feels but not as much as I did while writing this.
Because Kit was a normal person her whole life until she made a mistake in trusting someone.

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 05:34:45 +0000 UTC]

And Wackadoodle, as I'll be calling the ponysona I used, was forced to live under a disguise for her whole life. Even around the few ponies who knew that she was a half changeling. If she let it down for even a second she risked being captured or killed. So they're pretty even, I'd say.

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Java-Kitty In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2014-07-25 05:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Alright you have me there.

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amorvaldez96 In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 02:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Im a bit curiou! A story would be awesome

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Java-Kitty In reply to amorvaldez96 [2014-07-25 03:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Im going to start writing it now

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amorvaldez96 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaaay! I cant wait to read it!

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Java-Kitty In reply to amorvaldez96 [2014-07-25 04:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Its up now.

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amorvaldez96 In reply to Java-Kitty [2014-07-25 04:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay ill give it a read

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Java-Kitty In reply to amorvaldez96 [2014-07-25 04:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Warning: Feels.

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Sheltie-X In reply to ??? [2014-07-25 02:10:52 +0000 UTC]

I for one would love a story. It's amazing o3o

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Java-Kitty In reply to Sheltie-X [2014-07-25 02:11:44 +0000 UTC]

I plan on it soon.
Just not right now I have stuff to do XD

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