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Published: 2017-06-22 07:26:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 620; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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A little project I've been working on for awhile now. Being in the field training 24/7 has made it very very difficult but it's a start.This is basically an experiment testing out ideas for characters, story telling, and designs maybe it will maybe not. This one focuses on a very small Aeskhari as he tries to hide while gripped by his crippling fear of the dark.
I'd really appreciate as much feedback as possible to know what aspects are working and what isn't.
Please enjoy the first page!
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That's definitely the image that comes to mind looking at him.
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Hopefully everyone else finds him as endearing!
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The thunder scene looks awesomeΒ
Β also the glow of the crystal reflecting in the room gives off a vibe of peace well until the door knocks they that peace shatter Β
Β poor little guy he is really scaredΒ
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Β Thank you! really glad this scene has a sense of mood.
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I literally just want to pick him up and comfort him.
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He's a heavy little kid though.
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Thanks glad you think so.
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I just want to pick him up and cuddle him.
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He's so cute... I could just punch his face.
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It's his fault for being so cute.
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your angles are really good on this it isn't congested or anything just enough going on, but because your doing everything by hand your speech bubbles feel super out of place
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Thank you! diffintely trying to make each angle interesting. though I feel I kinda dropped the ball with later panels being abit less dynamic. oh well.
How do they feel out of place? What do you suggest?
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clashing might be better. they are very in even and inconsistent like most comics. might I sugest using a ruler to keep our edges straightt and then round off the edges where need, keeping the like bubbles though not boxes.
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Β Hmmm... worth a shot. I'm currently trying to keep word balloons out of panels so there is more room to draw the scene. But at the same time this takes up more space on the page. Do you think its a good call?
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best I could say is try and look at other comics for references...Β a lot of comics have varying panel sizes which you seam to be trying to keep them relatively the same size.
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Yeah I've been reading a comic lately called Baltimore. If you like comics I recommend it. It's almost exactly like Aeskharis story with a hero fighting all kinds of horrors except with humans and no dragons.
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