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Description "I don't understand what you hope to accomplish with your behavior. It does not matter if Neji-nisan returns alive or not. Your son will be branded with the curse seal in a few days time. You cannot stop the Hyuga from following tradition."

Tenten sighed but smiled at the younger woman patiently.

"Neji and Hinata-sama promised that no more children from the branch family would be branded. I would appreciate it if you would not scare my son with such talk."

Hanabi looked stunned at the woman's words and her audacity to speak to her that way. Cat-like eyes narrowed at the brown-haired kunoichi sitting calmly at the edge of the roof with her child in her lap.

"Neji-nisan is a member of the branch family and as a result of marrying you,can do nothing to change his son's fate. And Hinata is too weak to take her place as the Heir of the family. So she also is unable to spare him this pain. The sooner you accept that and teach your son his place the better it will be for him, and maybe you as well. Now cease this juvenile behavior and stop shaming our family."

Tenten's son looked up at his mother, confusion and fear in his eyes. In response, Tenten smoothed his hair down and smiled at him as if his aunt had not spoken so coldly before.

"Hanabi-san is so silly, isn't she? In spite of possessing the byakugan, she is so incredibly blind to many things. Isn't that funny?"

Hanabi's teeth clenched.

"Byakugan!" She lunged towards the other end of the roof, intent on causing lethal damage to the woman's back.

A second later, Hanabi's body stilled just in time to feel the tap of a pole at her throat. Her eyes widened slightly.

A pole? No, a staff! When...when did she call forth her weapon? Hanabi's stunned eyes took in the extended tanned arm pointing the staff at her throat and keeping Hanabi's hands a safe distance away from them.

"Do not take me lightly, Hanabi." Tenten's dark eyes gained a special light as she spoke. "I have been the sparring partner of THE Hyuga Genius for over a decade." the corner of her mouth tilted then.

"There is nothing you can do that I have not seen done ten times better."

Hanabi glared at Tenten as her body trembled with fury.

"I see now that it is impossible to converse with a fool like you who is nothing in this family. I look forward to the day you will be put in your place kunoichi." she hissed.

Tenten suddenly grinned, not moving her staff.

"And I look forward to the day Hinata-sama grows a backbown and spanks her little sister as she should have many years ago."

"You overgrown bitch! You will respect me or I will--!"

"Uh ah! I would appreciate it if you would not swear in front of my son, Hanabi."

"Your son..." Hanabi's lip curled as she looked down at the small trembling wide-eyed child who could only cling to his mother's clothes as he tried to hide himself from his furious aunt's sight. "...will not escape the curse seal. He will answer to ME as soon as he turns four in a few days time...if not sooner. NOTHING will stop that."

Tenten's gaze remained steady on Hanabi's face and only a slight tightening of her fingers on her son's shoulders indicated a reaction.

Hanabi almost smiled in triumph for provoking anger in her cousin's wife, until Tenten spoke quietly.

"As you have said once before. I am nothing." she smiled. "And I will stop you."



*yawns* Done on a whim. Have been wanting to draw this scene in my head for some time. I should've written it down when I thought it up because the dialogue was much better with more banter than this. But alas, due to flu keeping me down, I never got to. So there ya go, grown up Tenten and child...who I still have not thought up a name for. I'm thinking something to do with the heavens or dragons or I dunno, something closer to his mom than his father. We'll see. Poor kid. It's a wonder he doesn't end up traumatized by the end of all this.

Btw, Hanabi is an antagonist mostly cuz of her upbringing and pressure from her family. She does care for Hinata and Neji deep down inside, but she does not believe in Hinata and she hates Tenten for various reasons. So she is unable to connect with her sister and her cousin and actually envies the close relationship Hinata and Neji have. Currently both are away from the village, with Neji reportedly attacked. Leaving Tenten and her son to deal with scheming Hyuga and a bitter, worried Hanabi.


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Comments: 93

becra1 [2010-02-14 19:39:53 +0000 UTC]

awesome story!! i really like how dramatic it was. the picture is really awesome to!

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jbramx2 In reply to becra1 [2010-02-18 04:29:20 +0000 UTC]

*beams* thank you! ^o^

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becra1 In reply to jbramx2 [2010-02-19 19:49:07 +0000 UTC]

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ReiaJade [2010-02-12 02:36:55 +0000 UTC]

hey i like the pic neji and tenten son looks soooo cute but i wonder are you going to finish the story i thought it was pretty interesting i would love for you to continue it

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jbramx2 In reply to ReiaJade [2010-02-18 04:30:56 +0000 UTC]

hee, thank you! I'd love to but I barely have anytime to do it...(not to mention artist/writer's block...)

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ReiaJade In reply to jbramx2 [2010-02-22 16:56:30 +0000 UTC]

awww i understand it really sounds like a good story

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Toboe-LoneWolf [2010-01-23 05:08:44 +0000 UTC]

I really like the story that comes with this. I do hope you continue it!

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jbramx2 In reply to Toboe-LoneWolf [2010-02-18 04:41:18 +0000 UTC]

I hope I can! Thank you!

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TheFireRose77 [2010-01-22 00:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Do me a favor pleez? Draw and write how Neji would react, I think she should start planning her funeral for even trying to hurt Tenten!

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jbramx2 In reply to TheFireRose77 [2010-02-18 04:53:26 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm...you bring up a good point, I realized I never even thought to involve Neji's reaction to Hanabi's behavior. Heh, you made me think! Honestly, now that I thought of it and how he is in my story...He'd be more mad at the Main House than at Hanabi because he knows that she's just a product of their messed up brainwashing/upbringing. He still sees her as a little girl (probably always will) who is just lashing out because she doesn't know any better. His reaction when he finally returns home is of shock and disappointment more than anything. All his anger is directed at the elders who have been manipulating Hanabi. Neji is practically a psychologist with the way he uses his byakugan to analyze people just by their body language (remember the Chunin exams?), for example. Hanabi's an antagonist and misguided, but she's not evil and Neji absolutely understands that.

Besides, the reason I never thought to involve Neji is because Glorious Tenten-sama can totally handle Hanabi on her own. She doesn't need no man defending her! lol! Even when she's down, Tenten still pops up with a few tricks up her sleeve that leave Hanabi quite stunned. Not to mention it inevitably falls on Hinata to put Hanabi in her place and open her eyes to it all. (but yes, Tenten does help along and does get the last laugh on Hanabi...keke...)

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TheFireRose77 In reply to jbramx2 [2010-02-18 21:52:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah but just think about what would happen when neji finds out she attempted to hurt his wife AND child can you say mass murder anyone?

I'm thinking that Hinata, Lee, and a few others wold help as well!!!

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Kiminator-Mark-XII [2009-12-05 03:24:09 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Sooo great! I love Tenten's expression! And her little boy is soo adorable! Great job, and I loved the story too!

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jbramx2 In reply to Kiminator-Mark-XII [2009-12-06 07:32:22 +0000 UTC]

hee! Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :3

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Kiminator-Mark-XII In reply to jbramx2 [2009-12-12 13:12:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! It's really a beautiful pic!!!!

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Creativesm75 In reply to ??? [2009-11-27 03:02:06 +0000 UTC]

cool

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jbramx2 In reply to Creativesm75 [2009-11-27 04:58:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you! ^^

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DarkRebelGirl14 In reply to ??? [2009-11-22 23:12:46 +0000 UTC]

go TenTen !!!!!! Protect your Child!!!

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jbramx2 In reply to DarkRebelGirl14 [2009-11-27 05:05:45 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!

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DarkRebelGirl14 In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-28 14:33:55 +0000 UTC]

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fmorgana [2009-11-20 23:18:40 +0000 UTC]

amazing!
and quite an intense story, i love how you gave Tenten great credit, she's an awesome character and definitely needs more love

badass tenten is amazing!

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jbramx2 In reply to fmorgana [2009-11-27 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]

YES. I vow to make everyone love tenten and ask for MOAR of her. Oooh! nejiten club! Sweet!

Badass Tenten should be a must in all fanfics/fanarts. I mean look who she has to put up with. Thanks btw! Yay for fellow Tenten fans.

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fmorgana In reply to jbramx2 [2010-01-26 18:05:20 +0000 UTC]

*nod* tenten definitely needs more love!
(watch the group! if you haven't already! we're having a contest!)

ohyes, she should be. She has a lot of potential to be badass with all her weapons and her overall awesomeness
you're very welcome! i'm always glad to meet fellow tenten fans

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drummerchick13 In reply to ??? [2009-11-18 05:38:37 +0000 UTC]

amazing!

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jbramx2 In reply to drummerchick13 [2009-11-18 11:59:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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drummerchick13 In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-19 04:05:13 +0000 UTC]

np!

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m3ru [2009-11-18 01:05:20 +0000 UTC]

God FINALLY TenTen is awesome! I have been waiting for this.

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jbramx2 In reply to m3ru [2009-11-18 11:59:32 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I know what you mean. Not enough awesome Tenten out there. I have been wanting to draw a badass Tenten for the longest time and last night I finally did it. So I'm very happy to contribute.

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capriangel In reply to ??? [2009-11-18 00:32:20 +0000 UTC]

intense, incredibly well-written story. i was clinging to each word and loving it. lol. and i havent' read any fanfiction in a while. hope to see more. great picture to go along with the story. i love how your drew tenten's eyes that show how protective she is of her son.

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jbramx2 In reply to capriangel [2009-11-18 11:57:16 +0000 UTC]

aww, i'm thrilled to hear that! (my writing has suffered a lot in the past three years...T-T) Hee, I like Tenten's eyes, I hoped to do them justice here cuz I think they're very pretty. Yes, Tenten's a fierce lioness when it comes to protecting her baby...but she also doesn't want to scare him any more than he already is, so she remains calm and smiling...which is pretty easy for her I think.

Thank you again for your comment!

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kyra009 In reply to ??? [2009-11-17 22:41:22 +0000 UTC]

amazing Job ~ I really liked that story you wrote with it too C:

.. I think we all know who would win if Tenten and Hanabi were to fight XDD

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jbramx2 In reply to kyra009 [2009-11-18 11:54:09 +0000 UTC]

hee! I hadn't planned to post the story until I colored this, but I figured to do it now before i forget it all.

lol, most of all, I just really wanted to write down the line where Tenten tells Hanabi that she can take anything Hanabi throws at her cuz she's seen it all before with Neji and better. kk...

Ya know, in the story in my head, I hadn't really planned on making them fight, since Hinata's the main character of the story and therefore is Hanabi's main opponent...but it seems the story has run away from me as a result of writing this down.

NOW I wanna see Tenten kick Hanabi's ass.

Hm...going to have to rethink the story now that Tenten's sworn to stop Hanabi.

lol, seriously! Originally, when I first thought up this scene Tenten didn't respond to her at the end like that. This was going to be the last time Hanabi and Tenten interacted, but now I want them to interact more...oh noes, the story's evolving! These characters have a mind of their own!

Anyhoo, thank you so much! glad you liked it!

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kyra009 In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-19 23:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Thats a good Idea, I usually am the same way and forget Every good story idea I have !!!!

I think if you ever plan on making a fanfic with this, I would absolutely LOVE to read it

XDD So would I >3!! Tenten vs Hanabi, Tenten being the one to Pwn hanabi >D!! !!!!!!

Not that i have anything against Hanabi, but I have always imagined her to be just like you wrote. Snotty to people who are hyuuga or higher ranked D
;w; GO TENTEN~ PROTECT YOUR ADORABLE CHILD WITH NEJI FROM THE CURSE MARKK~

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jbramx2 In reply to kyra009 [2009-11-23 09:48:06 +0000 UTC]

lol, I found a good quote today that I shall now apply to myself.

"Good ideas are a funny thing. They don't work until you do."

XD I think its time for me to get my butt in gear and continue this comic/story venture of mine.

ha ha ha! Today I was thinking of how Tenten manages to pwn her. *cackles* But yes, I guess the thing that gets the most on hanabi's nerves is how Tenten has little regard for the Hyugas and doesn't fear them...whereas Hanabi does to some degree, but she'd never admit it. Tenten's a free spirit (and none of the Hyugas are, thanks to their bloodline limit).

YES! SHE WILL! SOMEHOW.

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IsisConstantine [2009-11-17 19:08:29 +0000 UTC]

she looks awesome!

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jbramx2 In reply to IsisConstantine [2009-11-18 12:01:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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IsisConstantine In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-19 20:57:07 +0000 UTC]

welcomes

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innocent-rebel In reply to ??? [2009-11-17 18:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Very intense story. I loved it. I like the idea of Hanabi being antagonistic as well. I can see that she would turn out that way when she got older if Hinata didn't gain some more self confidence. Great job on the composition of the artwork too. The perspective is spot on and you did a great job of showing Tenten's fierce yet calm expression. Boy that girl has muscles! But they don't look bulky or anything. Just right. She has a really cute son. Great job!

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jbramx2 In reply to innocent-rebel [2009-11-18 11:39:53 +0000 UTC]

yay! Agreed. In my story Hinata does come back and prove everyone wrong. XD omigosh! I really need to use reference pictures next time I attempt this. lol, keeping perspective accurate using human bodies is hard! but yay! expressions are more fun to do, so I'm glad it worked out.

ANd yesh! Tenten seems like a very healthy girl (next to Temari) and considering all the throwing/jumping she does and those huge scrolls she eventually carries, it makes sense that she's going to be super fit on the muscular side.

hee, thank you again! the kid actually gave me some trouble, mostly cuz of his clothes and hair. It was a weird position to draw him in...But yay! Very happy you liked!

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innocent-rebel In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-18 17:10:02 +0000 UTC]

That is awesome!! Hinata kicking butt is something the world needs more of!! lol. Well I thought you did a great job with this one. Have you ever looked up any stock photos?

Yep. ^_^ I think drawn realisticly all the girls and guys would have some serious muscles! But you did a great job of showing that without making it look overly bulky or anything.

You're welcome. ^_^ I really like this piece. little kids can be a pain to draw that's for sure! Loved this picture!

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Lady-Buffy In reply to ??? [2009-11-17 14:06:38 +0000 UTC]

i like this work and the story that you wrote tenten is amazing

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jbramx2 In reply to Lady-Buffy [2009-11-18 11:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! She is, I hope I do her justice.

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Lady-Buffy In reply to jbramx2 [2009-11-18 12:49:39 +0000 UTC]

you do you do

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