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Description "I don't understand what you hope to accomplish with your behavior. It does not matter if Neji-nisan returns alive or not. Your son will be branded with the curse seal in a few days time. You cannot stop the Hyuga from following tradition."

Tenten sighed but smiled at the younger woman patiently.

"Neji and Hinata-sama promised that no more children from the branch family would be branded. I would appreciate it if you would not scare my son with such talk."

Hanabi looked stunned at the woman's words and her audacity to speak to her that way. Cat-like eyes narrowed at the brown-haired kunoichi sitting calmly at the edge of the roof with her child in her lap.

"Neji-nisan is a member of the branch family and as a result of marrying you,can do nothing to change his son's fate. And Hinata is too weak to take her place as the Heir of the family. So she also is unable to spare him this pain. The sooner you accept that and teach your son his place the better it will be for him, and maybe you as well. Now cease this juvenile behavior and stop shaming our family."

Tenten's son looked up at his mother, confusion and fear in his eyes. In response, Tenten smoothed his hair down and smiled at him as if his aunt had not spoken so coldly before.

"Hanabi-san is so silly, isn't she? In spite of possessing the byakugan, she is so incredibly blind to many things. Isn't that funny?"

Hanabi's teeth clenched.

"Byakugan!" She lunged towards the other end of the roof, intent on causing lethal damage to the woman's back.

A second later, Hanabi's body stilled just in time to feel the tap of a pole at her throat. Her eyes widened slightly.

A pole? No, a staff! When...when did she call forth her weapon? Hanabi's stunned eyes took in the extended tanned arm pointing the staff at her throat and keeping Hanabi's hands a safe distance away from them.

"Do not take me lightly, Hanabi." Tenten's dark eyes gained a special light as she spoke. "I have been the sparring partner of THE Hyuga Genius for over a decade." the corner of her mouth tilted then.

"There is nothing you can do that I have not seen done ten times better."

Hanabi glared at Tenten as her body trembled with fury.

"I see now that it is impossible to converse with a fool like you who is nothing in this family. I look forward to the day you will be put in your place kunoichi." she hissed.

Tenten suddenly grinned, not moving her staff.

"And I look forward to the day Hinata-sama grows a backbown and spanks her little sister as she should have many years ago."

"You overgrown bitch! You will respect me or I will--!"

"Uh ah! I would appreciate it if you would not swear in front of my son, Hanabi."

"Your son..." Hanabi's lip curled as she looked down at the small trembling wide-eyed child who could only cling to his mother's clothes as he tried to hide himself from his furious aunt's sight. "...will not escape the curse seal. He will answer to ME as soon as he turns four in a few days time...if not sooner. NOTHING will stop that."

Tenten's gaze remained steady on Hanabi's face and only a slight tightening of her fingers on her son's shoulders indicated a reaction.

Hanabi almost smiled in triumph for provoking anger in her cousin's wife, until Tenten spoke quietly.

"As you have said once before. I am nothing." she smiled. "And I will stop you."



*yawns* Done on a whim. Have been wanting to draw this scene in my head for some time. I should've written it down when I thought it up because the dialogue was much better with more banter than this. But alas, due to flu keeping me down, I never got to. So there ya go, grown up Tenten and child...who I still have not thought up a name for. I'm thinking something to do with the heavens or dragons or I dunno, something closer to his mom than his father. We'll see. Poor kid. It's a wonder he doesn't end up traumatized by the end of all this.

Btw, Hanabi is an antagonist mostly cuz of her upbringing and pressure from her family. She does care for Hinata and Neji deep down inside, but she does not believe in Hinata and she hates Tenten for various reasons. So she is unable to connect with her sister and her cousin and actually envies the close relationship Hinata and Neji have. Currently both are away from the village, with Neji reportedly attacked. Leaving Tenten and her son to deal with scheming Hyuga and a bitter, worried Hanabi.


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Comments: 93

Bearprints [2015-05-07 19:52:26 +0000 UTC]

this is so awesome! GO Tenten!!!!!!!

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BluuMaskedBandette10 [2015-04-16 00:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaawws! Neji junior! 

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Parry-xP [2013-12-01 18:16:13 +0000 UTC]

wow! this is amazing!!!!!

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neko-chan123456 [2013-07-15 13:49:45 +0000 UTC]

i realize that you need an antagonist in the story and hanabi is the most obvious but it bugs me sometimes that in every hinata or neji fanfic hanabi is a spoiled brat or something like that,i mean i can understand living in her upbringing that she would most likely be brainwashed by her family but im not buying it cause hinata seems to be just fine she is the sweetest person in the show even with her being a hyuuga so what does that tell you...but if i had to guess from what little ive seen of hanabi in the anime and the videogames i can tell she is very polite but if i had to pick out characteristics for her i would make her essentric and friendly with a good sense of humor,i think she would be more refreshing character especially being in her family and it would give us a chance to see the motherly side of hinata since she would take good care of her childish sisster.....but regardless of what i think of hanabi's character i think you made and interesting story and wonderful art work you are really talented good job.

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GaelicMystic In reply to neko-chan123456 [2013-11-20 07:11:31 +0000 UTC]

I've actually read quite a few with Hinata drawing the wrath of her Father and the Elders onto herself to protect her sister from them.  I can see Hanabi acting like that as a child, she is the 'favored' daughter after all, especially when compared to her older sister, but a decade in the future?  Nuh uh.  Not unless she was completely taken out of the influence of her sister and later her cousin (after he got is ass beat by Naruto), plus their friends...  and at least half her classmates in the Academy...  or just children her age in general...  basically not unless she was cut off from the influence of anyone less than 20 years her senior with traditionalist ideals.

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QKstealthmode [2012-05-02 00:27:58 +0000 UTC]

her son is so adorable! big squishy hug!

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DattebayoNL [2011-11-23 18:55:38 +0000 UTC]

mwa ha

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ScreamingShadowz [2011-08-31 05:19:31 +0000 UTC]

i really like this and the story goes withit very well tenten is a great mother )

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VirginNympho [2011-08-22 19:45:51 +0000 UTC]

yes! maternal kunoichi WIN!!!!

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Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-08-01 04:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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ShinobiTessa [2011-07-19 10:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Freakin' awesome! Cute kid too. Have you thought of a name yet? I lurve NejiTen btw xD
Anyhow, I was reading your little story and I was like "Dayumn! Hanabi needs to be slapped! What's wrong with her?" Maybe she could y'know, go on a date with Konohamaru or someone else, loosen up a bit xD
Once again, I think this is a wonderful drawing. *Coughs* It's much better than that I could do, the only thing I can draw is stick figures, and they look dead most of the time so yeah... *Scratches her neck in embarrasment*
Bye, ShinobiTessa.

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wildcatt [2011-07-09 15:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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jbramx2 In reply to wildcatt [2011-07-18 22:37:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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FlamingSnowpaw [2011-05-04 19:06:19 +0000 UTC]

I want more of that story!

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jbramx2 In reply to FlamingSnowpaw [2011-07-18 22:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Me too! I wish I could finish it. I just know that at some point Hanabi gains control of the Hyuga clan thanks to the elders pressuring her, and attempts to mark Tenten's child, which of course means BATTLE between Tenten and Hanabi, and unfortunately Hanabi does get the best of Tenten, but thankfully Hinata & Neji arrive to save the day. However, Neji is subdued thanks to his curse mark, and Hinata is almost on the brink of losing when Tenten (beaten but still conscious) sets off a booby trap she had placed long ago all over the Hyuga property that basically evens the field between Hinata and Hanabi. Now Hinata is able to take out a can of whup ass and bring Hanabi to her knees. She is victorious over Hanabi and proceeds to subdue her father and the elders, finally taking her place as the Head of the Hyuga. Tenten's child is spared the mark and Hinata changes the law to ensure no more Hyugas are marked. Hanabi realizes she was wrong about everything and begs forgiveness from everyone. Hinata & Neji forgive her cuz they love her and Tenten forgives her cuz she pities her but ensures her that if Hanabi ever steps out of line, she will personally rip her eyes out. Everyone lives happily ever after. BOOYAH. the end.

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villafj [2011-04-14 03:02:38 +0000 UTC]

The art on its own is amazing, the story just adds more to it. Great job.

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jbramx2 In reply to villafj [2011-07-18 22:48:43 +0000 UTC]

hee! Thank you! I love stories. :3

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Naniofthehiddenmist [2011-03-04 14:49:55 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing go tenten

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jbramx2 In reply to Naniofthehiddenmist [2011-03-06 22:50:32 +0000 UTC]

YES! I need to draw more of her...

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kamiry [2011-01-14 01:49:13 +0000 UTC]

There NEEDS to be more!!

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jbramx2 In reply to kamiry [2011-03-06 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Agreed!

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AppleAlchemy [2011-01-04 22:13:18 +0000 UTC]

*A* I love this so much!!! You make her look like such a bad-ass mamabear in this! <3

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jbramx2 In reply to AppleAlchemy [2011-01-11 04:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee, I tried. Thanks!

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Chutneyispower [2011-01-04 18:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Fear TenTen's mother-bear wrath!

Rawr.

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jbramx2 In reply to Chutneyispower [2011-01-11 04:11:48 +0000 UTC]

I no rite?!

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SayuJany [2011-01-03 11:58:49 +0000 UTC]

BadASS!

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jbramx2 In reply to SayuJany [2011-01-11 04:11:35 +0000 UTC]

hee, thanks! she gotta be.

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SayuJany In reply to jbramx2 [2011-01-12 00:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Heck she's gotta!

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Neguru [2011-01-03 04:47:01 +0000 UTC]

YESH, Tenten's badass mode!! >

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jbramx2 In reply to Neguru [2011-01-11 04:11:18 +0000 UTC]

I love her badass mode.

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00BlacKBerrY00 [2011-01-02 13:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Poor Tenten...I always imagined that this would happen if they would have a child.

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jbramx2 In reply to 00BlacKBerrY00 [2011-01-11 04:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Yup, but she's a strong gal, (she had to be to keep up with her team), so she can handle it.

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00BlacKBerrY00 In reply to jbramx2 [2011-01-11 07:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you're right

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kitt0hokage [2011-01-02 06:55:25 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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jbramx2 In reply to kitt0hokage [2011-01-11 04:12:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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wolflover99 [2011-01-02 04:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Hanabi is a bitch!! xD
Hahaha touching story!! ^^
Love the drawing! ^^

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jbramx2 In reply to wolflover99 [2011-01-02 05:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Squee! Thank you! Hanabi's very misguided, unfortunately.

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wolflover99 In reply to jbramx2 [2011-01-03 04:08:37 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure! X)
Hahaha i know! XD

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anti-hiatus [2010-10-16 04:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Never expected a story to come along with it.
I was pleasantly pleased to find out : OMFG, this is NejiTen, or they wouldn't have gotten married and have a little kiddie, who's adorable, except that he looks like he's gonna pee his pants soon. oAo;;

Nicely done, I really like it. ;D

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jbramx2 In reply to anti-hiatus [2010-10-21 05:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Squee! Thank you! (Well, he is only a few days away from 4 and the Hyuga are friggin scary.) lol I'm glad you like!

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Lacy-chan11 [2010-08-04 21:15:46 +0000 UTC]

oh really good i really think you should do a story and put it up!!

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jbramx2 In reply to Lacy-chan11 [2010-09-23 05:07:16 +0000 UTC]

hee, I'd love to, but I almost have no time to sit down and write it all, not to mention there are so many parts that aren't figured out. This is pretty much at the end of my story.

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Lacy-chan11 In reply to jbramx2 [2010-09-24 01:24:31 +0000 UTC]

awww so sad lol good job anyways!

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SuperHyugaYoshi-chan [2010-05-14 20:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey, this is really great? Is this like, a part of a series or something?

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jbramx2 In reply to SuperHyugaYoshi-chan [2010-05-16 06:53:54 +0000 UTC]

um, it was something I thought up while I was drawing up my gaahina doujinshi. Thank you!

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writingISmyART [2010-03-06 04:18:04 +0000 UTC]

You should totally color this, I bet it would be great.
Most TenTen fanart really plays up what a tomboy she is. It's nice to find a picture of her being fierce and womanly at the same time.

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jbramx2 In reply to writingISmyART [2010-03-06 06:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Hee! Thank you! I never noticed that, but yea I did want her looking womanly and strong.

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writingISmyART In reply to jbramx2 [2010-03-06 16:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.
And you should definitely color it.

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albertxlailaxx [2010-02-15 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

TENTEN IS KICKARSE >8D

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jbramx2 In reply to albertxlailaxx [2010-02-18 04:29:50 +0000 UTC]

YES! even if we don't always see it!

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