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JCBrokenLight — PMD explorers of space [Part 1]
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Published: 2015-12-04 21:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 6692; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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Note: This is a continuing of a comic I made if you want to know what's going on read it from the start hereAlso this is NOT a game, there is no choices or game play, it's just a story.
I finally did it guys!
I finished the first part of my first Visual Novel of my comic "Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Space"!
It took me a lot of work and time so don't skip it too fast.
I hope you guys like it
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Part 2 --> Never.
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon © Nintendo
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Comments: 103
I know,of what I've see,it takes so much time,but I'm waiting!The story takes me to read all in like 30 minutes!
and you welcome!
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hehe okay thanks :3
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you welcome everytime!It's a nice thing this!it's fun to see!:3
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That was really cool! (yay I finally got onto a computer to see this) That was so very cool.
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well thanks for coming back to see this
I'm glad you think so~
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It was totally worth it! I never knew wuch a thing could be made not by a gaming company type of thing.
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ahaha don't be silly! This is not even close to profit visual novel quality!
but thanks anyways...
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wow it was only one chapter? What could happen in the second one?
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A video link, like on YouTube? K
(I'm one of the people who can't see it :/)
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oh sorry. I didn't forget, I just had some problems uploading heavier vids' for YT from my computer.
I want to make another try soon, also because I want as HQ as possible.
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Okay. Can't wait, but don't feel rushed!
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I've been trying my best to put it up but it'll take me 18 hours with the internet where I live.
I hope I can upload it sometime though if I can come across an internet cafe sometime or I can upload while I sleep at least...
it's a 10 minutes video and not in HD so it shouldn't take this long..
Sorry for the delay.
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No worries, and thanks! We all have real life things to tend to.
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it's not that I don't have time or anything, it just simply takes too long to upload the video with the upload speed here.
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Well, there are better things to do with your time than that lol. Do you know if computer users can see it? I'm on iPad right now.
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I'm a windows user and it works for me. I'm not sure what other people are using. but I know it doesn't work on ipads or phones because they don't have flash player, usually computers have flash player tough
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That was really great! I loved the drawings with Melody falling back into the light. Sad, though...
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Thank you~
I do my best ^^
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Woah, this is absolutely astounding! You did a fantastic job! ^7^
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Thank you very much~
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Don't mention it uv0
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Thank you so much for this, it was really beautiful, you did an amazing job!
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No need to thank me for this ^^
I should thank you for the complement! So thank you!
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NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
NNNNNNNIIIIIIICCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEE
You did a GREAT job on this!
I love the border, the speech, everything here was brilliant!
Excellently done JC!
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Are you making the second part now? If so, how long will it take?
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Jzzz, don't be so impatient, I just came up with one long part that would take me ages to do in pages, but well if this lacked that much you shouldn't look forward to the next part...
It won't be anytime soon though, I have to get some things done before starting the next part... Maybe It'll be up around the time when super mystery dungeon is coming to Europe.. I can't tell for sure..
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I'm not being impatient, I'm just curious as to when the next part is coming, and this part had a good amount of story in it. Don't just jump to conclusions about people just because they asked.
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My apology then.
You just didn't mention anything about this even if there is a quite lot.
I guess I've just been working too much on it. heh heh...
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Hey, when it comes to stories like this, I'm always looking forward to more, regardless of how long I have to wait for the next part. I'm sticking with you to the end!
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Well, thank you then
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This is so awesome and amazing and, again, awesome ... GREAT WORK!
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Thank you very much! I worked hard on it QwQ~
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I know! ;w; /slap
Thank you~
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I'm so happy your novel is finally out Master JC, and I LOVED it so much Q//w//Q!
I know that you've worked very hard on it and, trust me, it simply looks beautiful
Melody noooooooooo!! *cries in a corner*
I still can't believe that Melody's gone... She was one of my favourites, man! QAQ/slap seriously though, that sacrifice, it hit me in the feels... It broke my heart!
And Kathrin! My cutie! Don't be so sad, you're too awesome to be sad *hugs her* (?)
Sparky made me feel sad too... Until he got mean with Dusknoir and Kathrin ahahahah |'D
No, seriously, Sparky, why you so mean?! QAQ
Also I just love how Dusknoir quite much confessed to Grovyle ahahahah ewe (GottaloveallthishiddenActaeon...Ishipthemsohardhgghskfhefhbhfdjb(????)/slap)
Also Dialga, you selfish mean ass, couldn't you be sacrificed instead? You are a powerful legendary, you would have given a lot of power to the world |'D/slap now I know I'm the mean one if I say these things but... I don't care (???)
Again, amazing job Master JC, I'm in love with your story (and you know it very well ahahah X'D)
I can't wait to see the next part
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I'm happy too.. I wish anybody else would be at least 10% as happy as you about it heh... I'll just only make my novel for us two then 
I'm so glad you like it though
Shush Francesca! Don't spoil my novel! X'D
hehe I'm glad it did anyways! >'D
Yea Sparky is dumb, but he's just a kid.. he can't know how awesome Dusknoir is orKathrin ! o^o~
( noneedtostrike..I'mthemainbaseofActeaon..wannamakeanewDAgroupforit?/slap)
Yea he's dumb! but I guess he's importanttyyy!! oAo
Thankies so much!!! Q//~//Q
I'll do my best, and such!!!
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Hehe I'm glad you are Ahahahah it's okay Master JC <3 I personally think everyone really appreciated this, but I guess I'm still the number one fan of your novel eheheh ewe/slap
I don't just like it Master JC, I love it
Ahahahah it's not spoils, people shouldn't read the comments before watching the novel /slap
You broke my heart with that QAQ Ahahahah silly Sparky X'D I hope he will understand that sooner or later (?) o^o'
(AhahahahyeahIguessyou'reright...Let'smakeanewgroupforit!8D(ThoughIdoubtpeoplewilljoinit...Iguessit'llhaveonlymeandyouasmembersahahah/slap)
I don't care, he still deserved to sacrifice more than Melody |'P/slap I don't know, I'm just mean with Dialga for no reason apparently (?)
Master JC you know there's no need to thank me at all
I know you will >//w//<
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You'll always be no 1
eat cookies.
I've been too slow at answering so I better not answer
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Awesome! ^_^
Great work on this
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Nice.
One thing I would recommend is adding a "replay" button at the end.
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I'm not the best at flash coder.. trust me I did try making a reply btn, but it'll freak up my frames. (also making a "previous")
Maybe I'll do it for the next part though.
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Alright.
If you can't figure it out, you could probably ask around (here or elsewhere).
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Thank you~
I just did my best
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