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jenasu — ATG: Raising the Sun ::WIP::
Published: 2011-06-22 07:06:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2396; Favourites: 101; Downloads: 80
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Today's theme: Draw a pony raising/pretending to raise the sun.But I suck at comics, and completely underestimated the time it would take me to do this, so I never got beyond the clean sketch phase. Ah haha.
I generally do not like uploading my unlined sketches, because they are a mess like woah, but I have no idea how long it will take me to get around to actually finishing this. Because I am notoriously terrible at finishing comics.
My Little Pony (c) Hasbo
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D'awwwww.... Celestia must be like a second mother to Twilight.
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Hehe, I like to imagine so. I really hope they give us some episodes that show their relationship more.
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This piece is so very sweet, and I could see it happening in the show. The drawing is very nice. Great job.
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Tears in my eyes here. She turned out strong enough to save both the sun and the moon...
My only critique is that the dialogue in the final panel should be swapped left-right, because I read Celestia's response first.
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Thank You for sharing your work. Sometimes the rough work can show so much more than the final piece. Seeing Twilight flailing about, trying to raise the sun, was adorable.
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this made me shed a single tear of sweet happiness.
Make this complete soon.
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Oh man, thanks so much, that makes me really happy. ;u;
It may take me a bit, but I'm definitely working on it. <3
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Don't worry, I'm definitely planning on doing so. c: It might take me a little while, but it's on the list. <3
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My only recommendation would be to flip the bottom panel so that we'd naturally read Twilight's dialog first.
Other than that this is adorable.
They all have great expressions and poses and you gave Celestia a very large presence.
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Yeah, I didn't really realize how awkward that would come out until after I'd already sketched it. :c I'm unfortunately not very good at comic layouts. But hopefully the final product will read more naturally.
Thanks very much, I really appreciate helpful suggestions. c: <3
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awwww, so lovely and heartwarming (literally, cause sun is risen ^^).
What was Celestias answer?
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Thanks very much. <3
She gave it at the end there; "Perhaps one day, my dear Twilight". It's just that it looks like she's speaking before Twilight, even though that wasn't the intention. I'm very, very bad at comic layouts. XD;;
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are you kidding me? this layout rocks!
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That next to last panel is gorgeous, can't wait to see it lined and colored.
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OOoooooooooooooooooooh my goodness!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fav!
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