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jeremy3 β Everfree part 53en
Published: 2016-11-07 16:40:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 6243; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 39
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As usual, if you find english mystake, please tell my, I will make the change as soon as I can.withe the help of fictiontolife.deviantart.com/ for the corrections
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Trying to sneak away has to be better than waiting for it to find you, at least. I doubt it has anything better to do than burn every bush around it until it finds you, so you're not going to be able to wait it out.
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Oh, Sweetie... You could speak as quietly as Fluttershy.
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Cardboard box, the cardboard boxΒ always works.
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Ah played enough Assassin's Creed to know how ta be quiet. That's how ah be sneakin off with Pinkie's cupcakes.... >8)
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One challenge, moving silently while carrying Apple Bloom is going to be a problem...
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They gonna need to roll particularly high in the perception roll!
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Yep time to roll your sneak role girls, also you have some minuses cause you have to carry somepony. Still really nicely done, can't wait for the next page.
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Thank you.
I Just have text Buble's and first translation to do.
Next part, next Monday.π
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Edits:
Panel one - Im sorry for this mess
Panel three - I did the job and was proud of myself.
Panel five - bushes
Panel six - Im not really sure what who you meant by 'them' but if you are talking about sweetie and scootaloo it should be "If it notices us"
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Thanks you, I'LL made the change tomorrow morning.
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Aw, thank you so much, that mean a lot for me.
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