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Published: 2010-02-21 16:33:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description Facing glares from the people
A Deer in the headlights of judgement

Even though it is unjust what they do
I play the Saint Sebastian for fools

Recompense is the way to freedom
Or so I thought? Life is a drought.

Whether mine eyes are open or closed
I exist...

In a place so distant from everyone I've known
To make everyone happy I would need a clone..

But that's the hysteric. I am generic.

My mind's eye is both a labyrinth and a haven...

Destroy the runner or burn the raven?
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Comments: 30

StrawberryRunner [2010-03-06 20:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Thats really cool! Deep....where doyou come up with this stuff!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-06 22:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ...I have no idea..it just pops into my head

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-09 12:03:46 +0000 UTC]

cool....i wish i was like that!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-10 09:59:05 +0000 UTC]

it has its downsides, lol

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-16 12:06:16 +0000 UTC]

I think i get that sometimes..you always think of stuff so you dont know where to start or where to go, then you get a new idea or get bored with the old one and you move on or saty restlessly with the old concept while all the while thimkimg of the new one so you grow to dislike both leaving your brain completely frazzeled.....mabey??

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-16 13:08:55 +0000 UTC]

You pretty much got it there..you've improved, young grasshoppa!

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-17 12:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...sorry if i sounded a bit psychotic!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-17 12:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Na you didnt

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-17 12:59:42 +0000 UTC]

look at this!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-17 13:10:34 +0000 UTC]

i can't top that lolol

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-17 17:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Its people running away from your awesome senseiness! Or....

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-18 02:52:09 +0000 UTC]

you're too funny lol!

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-23 12:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Or am I! Perhaps my apt witticisms are in fact a cover for the heart wrenching depression that plagues my every waking moment and haunts my every dream.....

Nah just kidding! Who says i cant be a poet!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-23 20:53:46 +0000 UTC]

good one xD

You already are a poet!

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-28 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Salutations sensei! I feed off your praise, it is all that sustains me!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-03-30 05:00:35 +0000 UTC]

That and pork ramen! 'Tis good for you!

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-03-30 11:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Like naruto! His favourite thing is Ramen.....Ive never actually had it, Ramen is in short supply where I live...what with it being Ireland and all...hehehehehe...its snowing/raining here now.

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-04-02 17:06:23 +0000 UTC]

It's scarce here too :<..the restaurant ramen that is. I heard Irish food is amazing :Q___

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-04-02 18:18:23 +0000 UTC]

We dont really have a nationel food as it were...unless its potatoes?

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-04-03 15:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Really? Hmm there should be one =o

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-04-11 20:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm...ICE CREAM!

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-04-13 00:12:09 +0000 UTC]

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-04-13 10:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap...you just blew my mind....

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jeremyjosh In reply to StrawberryRunner [2010-04-29 03:52:26 +0000 UTC]

C:

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StrawberryRunner In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-05-05 17:58:52 +0000 UTC]

XD

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foggyday [2010-02-22 03:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Maybe because reality gets abstract at times and is difficult to understand. What we may think is one thing, may just mean something completely different. Yet, we never know until we take a closer look.

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jeremyjosh In reply to foggyday [2010-02-22 20:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Well said Your Sageyness!

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foggyday In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-02-24 07:30:24 +0000 UTC]

You always make me chuckle when you mention that.

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jeremyjosh In reply to foggyday [2010-02-24 20:50:39 +0000 UTC]

That's a good thng chuckle away!

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foggyday In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-02-25 18:22:10 +0000 UTC]

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