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Published: 2010-02-02 00:36:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 457; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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This is the end of all you'll know...bonfires of books are like coffins and skulls
Swarms to fake hope as moths to iridescent bulbs
Shattered glass, burning ballots
The homely people are the country's callous...so
..Market me to children
For they are my future;
The tobacco in the pipe of losers
Steadfast promises lie in crumpled paper
Machine-gun speeches complete the caper...which doesn't
Stimulate all we'll know
Are we just empty shells
In virtual hell?
Thrust your arms North
Bloody landscapes illuminate the dark
with the cries of the innocent
There'll be an end to all you'll know...
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Comments: 28
iamniquey [2010-05-02 21:04:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow This is excellently done. I love the form. It really adds to the mood. Great job, man!
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sox-hop [2010-02-15 02:06:26 +0000 UTC]
there is so much i could say after reading this, but the problem is i just dont know how to form the words at this point. i'm speechless
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StrawberryRunner [2010-02-09 12:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Very well done sensei...a very deep and apt reflection on modern times.
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foggyday [2010-02-04 17:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Immediately, I thought of what the world is going through when I read "burning ballots" (so many people have gotten hurt or died trying to vote and have their voices heard) and "Steadfast promises lie in crumpled paper/
Machine-gun speeches complete the caper" (the promises of politicians, people's hopes dying, and the presence of violence all over the world). The line: "..Market me to children/For they are my future" seems to accurately portray what will happen, too.
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jeremyjosh In reply to foggyday [2010-02-04 21:07:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! I'm amazed that you're so exactly right
Then again by now should I really be suprised?
Thanks for the comment though;it's good to know someone's on the same page with me
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foggyday In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-02-05 23:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Man, we are really connected. I don't know what to say about that, actually...
You're very welcome, Jeremy.
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jeremyjosh In reply to foggyday [2010-02-05 23:35:28 +0000 UTC]
We are aren't we? . I don't know what to say either other than we understand each other lol
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foggyday In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-02-06 21:06:24 +0000 UTC]
You're right, and it's really cool.
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jeremyjosh In reply to HolleyParadox [2010-02-03 02:17:36 +0000 UTC]
is that good whoa or a bad whoa? D:
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HolleyParadox In reply to jeremyjosh [2010-02-03 02:18:49 +0000 UTC]
that is a profound whoa.
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jeremyjosh In reply to Sanxandre [2010-06-20 13:52:50 +0000 UTC]
i now see this D: thanks b
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