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Published: 2010-01-25 00:20:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 877; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Verse 1:As i fall into
the river of dreams i cannot survive
I cant save you and preserve my life
I cast my fears and the engine sighs
Ohhhhh, oh oh ohhhh (the engine sighs)
Ohh a dreamer cursed to live and never see the night
The engine sighs
As i take my leap
i'm not falling it leaves me baffled
rosaries of tears from our travels
our love is a moving castle
Dewdrops are forming on your lips
My soul is thirsty for a kiss
Love Dehydrated I never thought I'd miss
your heart now i'm engulfed in mist
Ohhhhh, oh oh ohhhh(engulfed in mist)
Verse:2
The waves of life
crash down on my soul
The current's erosion is taking its toll
Fate has thrust me into the cold
And now i'm lost
In a forest of malevolent thoughts
The fog has hidden what I've lost
I'm forced to sleep in a mindless trough
I reside in the mangroves of malice
Formed by feelings i cannot salvage
(I)Cut my lips on the broken chalice
I'll never love again.......
Ohh....oh..oh..I'll never love again..........
Verse 3
Let the chains that hold me down
Drag me down to a deeper depth
A lover's requiem, a chimera's death
Release implosions in my chest 0
Seventy-two hours I've
been held captive by purple flowers
Which are carnivorous to cowards
And bloom in December showers
The rotting roots of a bonding tree
Are dying due to despondency
If they can do it why won't we
Just end it all by casting into the sea........
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Comments: 31
You have a naturally poetic side, Jeremy. 
Personally, the first verse set the mood for me, because I feel I can identify...it's difficult to go after your dreams and still put others first in your life. There's a give-and-take.
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Thanks May 
I'm glad that you can identify with part of the poem
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You're welcome. 
Yes, I believe it is.
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Thanks, if you think it did turn out well then I know it did :]
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Nice! So master...any wise words for your pupil?
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Hmm not much for today, except read read read books! best way to expand your vocab :3
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Cool! I just submitted my first deviation on a prompt! Woo hoo!
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Aaah yes, are you proud sensei? Cause if not ima havta take you out.
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of course im proud!
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Noice! So are you working on anything interesting?
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Hmm I am! It'll take a while to do because of school though D:
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Yeah, smae here. I have exams next week and should be studying right now.....woops.
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Go study young grasshoppa! Sensei is watching~
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>=O sensei will discipline thee!
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Just so you know, senseis traditionally wear black and the apprentice wears white
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I know, I was bowing to your superiority!
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*stands atop temple* >
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You have a temple and you never told me!!!
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That is for when you complete your training young one 
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Ahhh...I see! So when will that be?
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I love it! My favorite part:
Let the chains that hold me down
Drag me down to a deeper depth
A lover's requiem, a chimera's death
Release implosions in my chest 0
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