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Description Another page from my graphic novel.
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Comments: 5

Eterea86 [2011-03-30 14:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Sorry but the hand looks bad

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jgurley In reply to Eterea86 [2011-04-03 16:24:21 +0000 UTC]

It totally does, doesn't it? I used professional divers as a reference for this frame, and their hands are often turned backward at the wrist. But: Eleanor probably isn't a professional diver, and realism should be trumped by believability, I think. I completely agree with you.

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The-Golden-Knight [2011-03-29 18:42:54 +0000 UTC]

At the bottom page, her legs look almost as if they're merging together into one; so be careful of that.

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EveryPhantasy [2011-03-29 16:12:57 +0000 UTC]

its very beautyfull, and i love the colors, but in the last panel her legs are melted together. it ruins the effect a little bit.

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Aamarka [2011-03-29 11:15:25 +0000 UTC]

I love your style and love the story!

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