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Published: 2006-11-19 19:19:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description An old deserted cabin along the river...
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Comments: 19

Infernalord [2007-01-05 05:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice background, and the water seems so calm!
A sign of man amongst Nature.

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mmmrobin [2006-12-31 18:15:50 +0000 UTC]

The trees flood this picture and make it great. They add to the old, abandoned, spooky feel since they are dead. However, I think you could've cropped this a bit more, cutting out some of the water and trees. This would add more focus to the cabin, even though the yellow does bring a lot of focus to it.

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sickd3vil [2006-12-26 21:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice composition, love the reflection and texture of the water. Well done

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iamgoatman [2006-12-24 13:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Looks like a very mysterious and creepy place to be and you have captured the feeling quite well. Although because of the large amount of midtones it looks quite busy, but the bright yellow cabin does draw your eyes to the centre which helps. Also the cabin isn't quite centred which gives the shot an uneven composition balance. If you are going to place dominant items near the centre, then they should be dead centred and not slightly off as not to be awkward. None the less i like the drained colours of the trees against the bright cabin and red colours, good job.

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jimroot In reply to iamgoatman [2006-12-24 15:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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Marthep [2006-12-23 23:08:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the colors, and nice capture too.. Great work

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chaotic00 [2006-12-23 22:55:05 +0000 UTC]

I like the way the trees and water are so dull and then there's a sudden splash of colour.

Just wondering is that a fire or just very vivid red plants?

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f-stops [2006-11-24 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Great shot. Only critism is the cabin being so centered. It takes away from the whole scene. Compositionally it is not the best to put the focus right in the middle.

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jimroot In reply to f-stops [2006-11-24 16:06:58 +0000 UTC]

I had a hard time deciding where I wanted the cabin in this shot. The reason I centered it was to show how empty it was all around it... nothing to be seen in any direction.

The more I look at it though I think you are correct it would be better to have it more off to the side.

Thanks for the comment!

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pandracchio [2006-11-24 13:12:25 +0000 UTC]

very nice composition, I left the water not too much in the image, I like that

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iremtural [2006-11-24 06:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Colours are great.

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imed [2006-11-24 05:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Great capture.

I really like how all the colours are dull, but the cabin its self is yellow.

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minniemouse123 [2006-11-24 05:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Love how the lil cabin thing stands out. And the reflections are lovely

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lphybrid18 [2006-11-23 21:20:45 +0000 UTC]

it might look better with a little more contrast, but overall this is a great shot. the reflection in the water is nice and the picture in general is very eerie

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iLikeArt-yo [2006-11-21 01:21:11 +0000 UTC]

very nice shoot... i love how u included the reflection in the water and that its color stands out and draws the eyes tot he middle

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self-replica [2006-11-20 23:23:46 +0000 UTC]

I really love how this cabin stands out and the little red leaves too. Really great capture!

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LAPoor [2006-11-20 22:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is pretty. Very cool mood to it!
;D

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JDiPierro [2006-11-20 13:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Very nice picture. I love the reflection. I must disagree with Eddy, at first I thought that too but the colour of the house definatly makes it the focal point. I think it would also look cool at the very right side of the photo.

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eddy4fizzle [2006-11-20 03:37:30 +0000 UTC]

mm my first impression is that its tooo busy. the subject which im guessing the house is should be a lil more centered..

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