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Introducing... COLOR!

Anyway, there's next to no dialogue here. In fact, this is the "quietest" page dialogue-wise. Fortunately, it is also the busiest artistically.

Depicted here is the busy morning routine required of Rain in order to pass in her presentation. Originally, I wasn't going to do this, but I thought it might be kind of insightful, especially to those readers who are in fact not transgendered. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy the montage; it was the first time I'd ever had to draw a lot of these actions. And thanks to this comic, I wonder if it won't be the last.

You know... I'm starting to think maybe it wasn't a phase after all...

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Comments: 101

flatwoods-cryptid [2022-04-16 02:11:08 +0000 UTC]

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Lord-Enemil [2021-08-28 13:32:24 +0000 UTC]

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WubMeister [2016-12-22 09:37:51 +0000 UTC]

I... hope it goes well.

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grnx00r2 [2016-10-13 15:02:37 +0000 UTC]

...gave us a pitcture of a schoolgirl——then tell us that's a boy...
——FHHHH~I LIKE IT~~

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FSS-Zilla [2015-07-22 18:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Y'know, that routine doesn't seem all that different from a non-transgender highschool girl's.  Just with bra inserts.

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Casylum [2014-10-07 04:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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Harryeagle [2014-09-09 11:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I should have mentioned this a few pages ago, but TV Tropes brought me here. Seems interesting so far.

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Wiinner159 [2014-07-08 05:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or is Rain's home look more like a house then an apartment complex? Or am I just delusional and Rain always lived in a house

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JocelynSamara In reply to Wiinner159 [2014-07-08 11:19:10 +0000 UTC]

It is a house; but their apartment is within the house.  Based on my experiences, I've lived in quite a few apartments that were simply houses.  One family upstairs and the other downstairs, or something like that (in this case, Rain and Fara upstairs, and Kylie and Heather downstairs).  It's seems this is not a very common setup since a lot of readers have been confused by this.  However, it IS a thing, as I've lived in like four apartments like this.  ^_^

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Wiinner159 In reply to JocelynSamara [2014-07-08 17:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay, funny enough I was JUST on the page where Fara mentions it being an apartment when I noticed that someone responded. Now I understand, I had a friend who used to live like that.

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the1smjb [2013-08-05 00:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm finally getting around to saving these comics to my computer so I can slay them nd whatnot (that is, make strip slays, not the world's weirdest videogame XP ), and I noticed how Rain is wearing that towel. It makes perfect sense, I suppose, but still, it's adorable.

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JamieAgathaRose [2013-04-04 15:32:01 +0000 UTC]

It's always a "phase", until it isn't.

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lil-schadenfreud [2012-12-17 20:51:56 +0000 UTC]

aww!

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Freddy-kun [2012-09-17 07:52:13 +0000 UTC]

.... now that I'm going through it all again, I'm suddenly noticing Rain's lack of definable hippage. Her boobs and face may fool people, but I love me some femme hips, so that's just about the first thing I notice on a person (unfortunately). Rain has a man's waist and hips still. not a criticism (though Rain herself might freak out over it) just an observation. lol

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Ryu890 [2012-06-17 05:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever heard of the Akinator? That online genie thing that asks you questions, and tries to arrive at the character you're thinking of?

I did that for the character "Rain Flaharty". It didn't find her, but I added her to the cue of things that the developers look up.


I wasn't sure how to answer the question, "Have you ever seen your character naked?" Why? Because of panel four right here.

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JocelynSamara In reply to Ryu890 [2012-06-17 12:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Rain is in there. You may have just given incorrect answers. When I tried some months ago, I was apparently the 12th person to try it.

(Also, her last name is "Flaherty".)

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Ryu890 In reply to JocelynSamara [2012-06-17 20:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. I tried a few times. Then again, I WAS using the app version....

Well...uh...uhm.....shut...up? *best comeback ever*

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YukiMKitty-chan [2012-05-14 14:13:49 +0000 UTC]

this is totally me<3 love it<3

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Ryu890 [2012-03-19 15:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Dispite all three times I've read through this page, attempting to get through the entire comic in one go, I never noticed the bunny before.

Bunnyyyyyyy!

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LeucisticRaccoon [2011-12-29 05:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Looks like me when I first came out...

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wolf-blazer [2011-10-26 01:29:12 +0000 UTC]

oh shit !
how old are rain?!

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emeraldthechao174 [2011-04-10 11:58:13 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome

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AmmyKaabiiPupupu [2011-02-18 21:00:06 +0000 UTC]

...Do I see a Black Jack manga back there? *has neer read Black Jack, just recognizes black&white spikes*

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Blasphemous-Joy In reply to AmmyKaabiiPupupu [2011-12-24 09:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Nope, it's "Black Wings, Kaminari".

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ivitek [2011-02-13 11:17:30 +0000 UTC]

cool skirt)

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Hipster-kei-rei [2011-02-11 06:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Ryan-rain, i get it XD
that's actually pretty clever!

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Musicallover1234 [2011-02-02 19:39:07 +0000 UTC]

I just realized, does she have a pet bunny?

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JocelynSamara In reply to Musicallover1234 [2011-02-03 13:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she sure does. ^_^

It wasn't originally a planned idea; I just drew it on a whim. But as long as it's there, I'm keeping it.

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Musicallover1234 In reply to JocelynSamara [2011-02-03 18:11:04 +0000 UTC]

So how it seems to fit her personality.

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Pizza-niichan [2011-02-02 18:13:30 +0000 UTC]

2 hours? Geeze, it takes me twenty minutes to get myself ready for school and I wear uniforms.

Interesting..

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dolphin64575 [2010-12-03 05:02:25 +0000 UTC]

very cute! love the bedhead! YOU CAN DO IT, RAIN!
one teensy critique: that's not how you put a bra on you fasten it in front then swivel it around. Nearly impossible to fasten in back.

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kidotrar In reply to dolphin64575 [2010-12-03 16:30:52 +0000 UTC]

I've always fastened it in the back, that's how my mom taught me. I think it depends how you learn.

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JocelynSamara In reply to dolphin64575 [2010-12-03 05:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! "Bedhead Rain" was fun to draw. I probably won't have nearly enough chances to work with that look. ^_^

As for the bra, yeah, I know.
I originally meant to draw it just as you describe, but I couldn't make that look right for the life of me. After the eleven-thousandth attempt (give or take), I finally just tried to have her go about it the other way. And then I'm happy with the result on the first try. Go figure.

So, it might not be the ideal method for putting on a bra (I can do it like that, but why would when there's a MUCH easier method), but I guess it looks good in that it's clearly identifiable as to what she's doing.

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kidotrar In reply to JocelynSamara [2010-12-03 16:31:01 +0000 UTC]

I've always fastened it in the back, that's how my mom taught me. I think it depends how you learn.

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dolphin64575 In reply to JocelynSamara [2010-12-03 05:18:50 +0000 UTC]

yeah, there's that XD and we can pretend that maybe she's taking it off for some reason

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superdeformedchibi In reply to dolphin64575 [2010-12-03 17:34:50 +0000 UTC]

That's too funny! I've worn a bra for 20yrs and I've never actually thought about how I put it on and take it off, but you're exactly right! In situations where I need to put it on by clapsing it in the back I have never been able to do it quickly or correctly by myself. But I have zero problem taking it off that way (especially when I had roommate in college and needed to houdini the bra off while keeping a shirt on!)

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dolphin64575 In reply to superdeformedchibi [2010-12-04 04:51:38 +0000 UTC]

i only think about it b/c my mom got me training bras and didn't explain how to put them on

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JocelynSamara In reply to dolphin64575 [2010-12-03 05:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Maybe one of the straps was all tangled, and there's just no way she was going to deal with that all day. Hence, she takes it off to adjust it and put it back on. Perfect. ^_^

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Princess-Kay [2010-12-03 04:35:33 +0000 UTC]

You LIKE updating, don't you?

Admit it!

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JocelynSamara In reply to Princess-Kay [2010-12-03 04:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Of course! ^_^
I've always loved updating!

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Princess-Kay In reply to JocelynSamara [2010-12-03 04:52:11 +0000 UTC]

*Gasps* so forward! So audacious! So... Lynny?

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shadowlord19 [2010-12-03 03:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! can't wait for the next page.

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JocelynSamara In reply to shadowlord19 [2010-12-03 03:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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UsagiKnight [2010-12-03 00:34:44 +0000 UTC]

I hope you can do this to Rain being the lad of a webcomic is not an easy thing. Especially for someone in your position.

I can admit it is busy, but to make a good impression you need time. It isn't just throw on jeans and a big T and rush out the door when you get to high school. But it does say a lot about routine for Rain as well. About her feeding Puddle, how she keeps her padding in a secure case, the care taken to her hair and how she keeps what I guess is Vol. 1 of Kaminari close to her bed like a bible. In some way, it is a really an illuminating moment to show that she really holding hopes to be a girl in every sense of the word.

I'm not even going to argue about the anatomy and preportions and the physicality of the objects in the panels considering that condensing your images into smaller panels is much more daunting than expected. Trust me, I made that sad attempt myself and so far you are doing better than me. The color may be bland when ccompared to the previously seen art in your gallery, but again, its still a learning experience and I don't know when the first pages were sketched.

All in all, you have made your point in introducing Rain to us and I'm sure we all look forward to seeing where we are taken next into her journey for acceptence.

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JocelynSamara In reply to UsagiKnight [2010-12-03 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]

I love your keen eye sometimes. I worried some people might look at this page and just think, "So, it's just a montage of the tedium you have to do to prepare for school?" But you can actually learn a lot about her character from this page, even through these seemingly monotonous tasks.

The art in this comic is overall a little downgraded from my usual works (I sincerely hope that's not a deal breaker or anything). I don't shade because it's too time-consuming, when I need to put these out in relatively quick succession, and many pages are frankly devoid of any real background (because I suck at backgrounds). But it's all for keeping up with time constraints and keeping everything looking as consistent as possible. As with most any comic, the art is very likely to improve as it goes as I'll simply get more comfortable with what I can and can't do.

Anywho, thank you for the comment, and of course, for reading the comic so far. ^_^

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kidotrar In reply to JocelynSamara [2010-12-03 16:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Besides, if you look at the first page of ANY webcomic, you can always see how the artist's style changed over time, often to be a lot better or worse.

I think my favorite reference for this is Questionable Content.

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Same guy, seven years later.

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UsagiKnight In reply to JocelynSamara [2010-12-03 11:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, as I said before, I never hold back an honest review when I believe its for the best.


And don't worry, comics are hard on me too, but I'm sure they will be better in time just like yours. My dad always tells me that we have no where to go but up, our ability to create becoming greater with each idea. He really is an inspiration outside of art.


and I will always read it silly.

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Nami214 [2010-12-02 23:22:40 +0000 UTC]

just for curiosity is she living with her parents at home and did they take to this when they first found out

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JocelynSamara In reply to Nami214 [2010-12-03 02:59:52 +0000 UTC]

What I can tell you for now is that she is currently living with her aunt only. Where the rest of her family is, is something I'll be revealing some time later.

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DivineValley [2010-12-02 23:08:05 +0000 UTC]

BUNNY! Lol sorry. Shes adorable!!!

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