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Published: 2005-09-20 12:58:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 810; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 80
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Sorry this took so long, folks, but until the 27th, I'm officially without internet at home, which slows things down.As usual, what are your favorite & least favorite panels, and what's your favorite line of dialogue?
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Much much belated (as I've been away from DA) But the opening shot is the best. As for the worst? Nothing sticks out in my mind.
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Oh...oh the car....
too bad the sticks of dynamite don't say DINE-O-MYTE! Or however the heck that guy used to say it..
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I wouldn't know what to say about what, but DANG!
How do you do so much coloring XDDD gotta be the first panel for colouring glory 
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Da bomb and kaboom..... the lovely smell of the smoke and explosive.
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Here's my feedback.
I love the first panel with its remarkable perspective, cityscape architecture, and the dusk-hour setting. A very nice Shelby Mustang, too. ^^
Another great panel is the fourth, where the vixens superimpose the boxed frame. I love how they position their guns, even if they aren't the best of shots!
Least favorite? I don't know a least favorite. You comic is too wonderful for any visible mistakes!
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Favorite panel: The first one. You do great establishing shots and backgrounds.
Least Favoite: 2nd. Not bad but It could have been more exciting from another angle like from the opposite side of the door. Don't take offense, I have to pick one as my least fave.
Favorite line of dialogue: The fourth. I like the little exchange between sapphire and emerald.
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I'm glad you like the first shot. I was afraid that I made lots of mistakes, both architecturally and just general sloppiness with the inking. Plus, I'm not really used to working with monochrome colors, so I had to think about making the buildings contrast without using day-glo colors.
As for the second panel, it was sort of designed to be dull in order to force readers to move through it quickly. This is experimental, since I heard that readers spend less time on small panels than large ones.
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Interesting. I guess I just really wanted to see Emerald kicking the door in from the other side because it was impressive that she could do so.
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