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Published: 2007-02-01 06:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1373; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 22
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Not exactly a crowning achievement colorwise, but something long overdue that brings a conclusion to the introduction of issue 3.And now, back to the vixens!
As usual, what is your favorite panel, what is your least favorite panel, what is your favorite/least favorite line of dialogue, and are you a JV fan or simply a passerby?
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Written by Steven Swanson and Nicholas Hardin, all characters © Nick Hardin, Steven Swanson, and Charles "Fox" Champion, Art © Steven Swanson
2004-2006
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Why do you keep asking me to pick my least favorites? I'm just not at the same level of skill as you, so how do I know what sucks?
Anyway, I'd say it's a toss-up between her yelling and the rose for my favorite. The cigarette bomb amuses me, yet the rose is so beautifully detailed.
Favorite dialogue is her yelling at the guards for being so stupid. Least favorite would probably be Dr. Possibly's lines, perhaps because I've said things like that myself. 
It's weird though... I could've sworn I've seen that skunk somewhere before...
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Heehee, that skunk is no coincidence- he's a guest actor! Because Stinken did such a good job as a doctor in "Extinctioners" he's a natural for the part!
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Cool!
*shrugs* Pretty cool you do cameos though. ^.^ Makes me wonder who else might pop up...
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Naw she should have hired Doctor Knowall. I like the rose panel, though I can't figure out why.
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lol. Dr. Possibly. Very funny. Though, I like the bigheaded yelling.
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I get it! Instead of Dr. No, he is Dr. Possibly and he is indecisive! It's a James Bond joke! I get Jokes!
I think this is the first time I've seen you use a anime technique of this magnitude in your comic. I'm talking about the big head in panel 2 of course. You did it very well. I like to see humor in my strips. Panel 2 is also my favorite panel because of this. It is simply well set up and well executed.
Least favorite? That is tough. All the panels are necessary and well planned out. My only complaint may be that in the fourth panel, her last word balloon looks like it is coming more from the doctor than from her though it would be hard to place it nearer her and not obscure panel 2 which as I said before is pure gold.
Favorite dialogue is panels 1 and two as it sets up the joke. I really like the doctor character just because he is a badger and I have not seen you draw one before. I'd like to see more of him.
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Really nice page! All the quotes are neutral, except for the clever last one regarding the half-competence of the skunky scientist! ^_^
The density of spots along her jawline somewhat resemble the sideburns of a 19th century sailor (from bottom-left panel). Maybe a gradual "lightening" up?
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Hurray for Dr. Possibly! Great critique of scientific researchers! Is it a clever play on Dr. No from the Bond movie? Ether way I love the messy genius-hair/emo-combover he's got going in panel 4. Really great color throughout the page. My only criticism (and I have to really try hard to find something for this page) is that the tigress looks slightly masculine in the first panel. I think the stripes give a subconscious facial hair connotation. Perhaps if they were lightened... Also I love how the sky cast purples and pink on the car behind them, nice touch.
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arrr, that's something I was concerned about in her design. I saw that snow leopards have little spots along the sides of their muzzles, but I suppose I should be careful when illustrating them (or perhaps I should just omit them on the females)
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