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Published: 2007-03-08 18:56:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1369; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 30
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I had a lot of fun with this page, or at least the first half... I'll confess that the second half's quality drops dramatically, possibly because I illustrated the two halves on different days, five days apart.Despite this, I steel myself for your criticism! Bring it on!
As usual, let me know what your favorite panel is, what your least favorite panel is, and what your favorite dialogue is.
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Written by Steven Swanson and Nicholas Hardin, all characters © Nicholas Hardin, Steven Swanson, and Charles "Fox" Champion, Art © Steven Swanson
2004-2006
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Comments: 12
Again, commenting late. 
Favorite panel: Not sure if I can pick one. Nothing really seems to stand out, though I Sapphire's tennis outfit is nice. Probably best go with that.
Least favorite panel: Eh, tie between the second and third panel. Not much happening there in either of 'em. Then again, this page is quite the contrast with the last couple. Seems a bit blah, but perhaps that's because I'm comparing it with Topaz's room. 
Favorite line: Not really sure, though the hippie line is amusing. X3 Ya just know many of those guys picked up a few things along the way...
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Best panel: last one, great expression. Least fav: next to last, something just doesn't look right. "Riding with hippies" LOL that was funny.
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I didn't know Onyx was a doctor! We are really finding out a lot more about the girl's personal pursuits this time.
Favorite panel is number two. Just a well crafted panel with a lot of depth.
Least favorite? the fifth panel. saphire looks a little strange. almost compressed.
I like Onyx's brogue even though I think it was recently intensified.
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hmm... this has got to be either the best (or worse) HMO plan ever
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I like the second to last panel. The look on Mendoza's face is priceless. Wow, now that's what I call a mean streak. Remind me not to get on Onyx's bad side.
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heh, mussle splints and hippie bugs...
Jade seems like the type that would give a convincing medical diagnosis and never let on that she was making it all up.
Favorate line: "Don't talk back te me in that tone!"
classic.
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but it's not Jade, it's Onyx...
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Though a bit less exciting as usual (intensive care units are naturally bland in appearance), there's quite a good amount of enjoyable Vixen talk! ^_^
Mendoza's gonna miss a lotta fun for a while!
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Wow, you put this one up early!
(I STILL think Onyx looks great in that outfit, heh)
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