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Description On the outskirts of the village not far away were the ruins of a village near the mountains, what used to be small huts were now more than rubble, except for a few that still had walls. Because of how narrow they were, we assumed that some kind of tribe of creatures larger than the inhabitants of our town lived in this place.

We went to a building that was not as destroyed as the rest, we carefully entered to the bottom where there was a smashed desk, and behind it what we came to look for.

"Well at least it's still here, Tricket do you think you can open it?"
"I hope so, my father has taught me to open some locks, but if this is still closed it is because they could not open it"
"Or they couldn't find the safe"
"I doubt it, but I'm going to try ... ehm, if you have the screwdriver, right?"
"Yes, here you go, I just hope my dad doesn't need it"
"Ok, I only got 6 lockpicks, I don't think I'm that good at picking locks but let's see ..."
For almost an hour I was trying to force the lock of the safe, I had already broken 3 of the 6 picks and I was starting to get frustrated. "Agh, it's the third time I've broken and I barely managed to turn it around a bit."
"At least you tried, if you want we can go back now"
"Not yet, at least I'll try until I run out of picks" Take the screwdriver, another pick and try again. "(Between his teeth) I managed to turn it around a bit, so if I move it around here maybe…" [Crack] "What was that?" I dropped both objects when I heard the sound.
"Wasn't the pick breaking again?"
We started to check what made the sound, there was nothing near us, then we checked the safe and we got a big surprise, he had succeeded "I don't believe it!"
"Wow, I knew you would make it, what are you waiting for, open it, open it !!"
When we opened the safe, we found another smaller and rectangular box, like a metal briefcase covered with dust and enzyme from it, there were some torn papers. "Hmm, another box?"
"Let me see ..." Dominic dusted the box to take a look at it "I don't believe it !!, this is it? ..."
"What is it??..."

He opened the box carefully, inside was a complete set of tools “Wow, these are H&H tools. I saw it in one of the ‘Dean's electronic components’ books, with this you can do a lot of things. I already want to see the faces of our parents when they see what we get "
"How lucky you saw the box the last time we came here, but I really hope they don't punish us for coming here, remember that they warned us to come to this place ... even though there isn't even anything dangerous around here"
"Haha, uhm good since we're here ... and if we keep exploring the area, maybe we'll find something else"
"Dominic ... Ok why not?"

After my first achievement, we both decided to keep exploring the place. For a long time, behind the ruins near the mountains we find something quite strange, a cave. The strange thing about the cave was that a light was shining inside it and the most certain thing is that there was something there, although it could be dangerous, my curiosity forced me to investigate whatever was there.

"Wow, that looks scary."
"What makes a light in a cave, without a doubt there must be something or someone there you don't think, I wonder ..."
"Wait a minute, what do you think you're doing? You will not be thinking about ... "
"I want to know where the light comes from, we could probably find something interesting down there"
"And if there is a monster hidden in the depths of the cave"
"Well if you want, wait here, I'll see what's down there"
"What ?! ... I'm not crazy ... ehm ... Tricket wait for me !!"

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As the title says, this is a fragment of the prologue of a story that I did a long time ago, currently it has the prologue and 4 complete chapters. The chapters are in Spanish so I have to use the translator, in case something does not fit xD
I did not remember that I had made this story ;w;
 I hope it has attracted your attention and you like it ^w^

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The-Bronypendium [2021-11-24 18:08:01 +0000 UTC]

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