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Jose-Ramiro — Mahr, Bleet and Minerva
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Published: 2011-05-02 05:18:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 14410; Favourites: 130; Downloads: 109
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A little beach comic starring Mahr and Bleet, guest starring Minerva Mink, with Alvin Seville and Brittany Miller in cameos.Related content
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Alvin- B-but... *Brittany leaves* Oh... my... *growls* This is all Bleet's fault! If he had acted like a normal guy in front of Minerva, Brittany would have seen I acted like anyone else, and not be that angry!
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- So Alvin,do you think that if Bleet would had drool of heat in front Minerva,behaving badly like you and the others guys,all would be okay?
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Alvin- Of course! That way, Brittany would realize that I didn't do anything unusual, and would be more forgiving; maybe just giving me a slap and that's all.
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- Alvin my dude,you shouldn´t blame other people by you own flaws! 
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Alvin- Uh... what do you mean?
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- Well the main was that many people don´t believe that Marh really love Bleet,because she´s wolfette and he,a sheep.The main mistake is that she are only wainting a good chance to eat him!
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Alvin- And that's not what she wants?
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- No way!And please,don´t talk this foolish near her,or she will use you like a punching bag!
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Alvin- No, thanks; I already got beaten once today.
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- Well Alvin,I wanting say that you shouldn´t say bad things about Bleet and his relationship with Marh!
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Alvin- I just hope Mahr didn't hear me.
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- Relax dude,she are away from here!Now Alvin,if I were you I´d find Britanny again,to ask by her forgive.And please,try improve your self-control!
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Alvin- Okay. *limping* Nnnngh... but my whole body hurts a lot right now.
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- I always have some heal potions with me.Please,hold this soft drinks for a while.
While Alvin hold the soft drink bottles,I catch a little wood case.From it,I pic a tiny bottle with a blue liquid inside.I say to Alvin:
- Drink it,and the pain will gone!
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Alvin gets healed almost immediately.
Alvin- Hey, much better!
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- Yeah!This magic heal potions are really great! 
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Alvin- Uh... most of the things she likes are VERY expensive.
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- Well,every girl like receive flowers,plush toys,and similar things.
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Alvin- Brittany was so angry, I'll need to buy her the whole flower shop.
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- Well,by chance she have some favourite plush toy´s kind?
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Alvin *sighs* No. Brittany is the 'material girl' from her sisters; Jeanette would be happy with a plush toy, and Eleanor would be fine with chocolates, but Brittany likes flowers and expensive things.
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- Alvin,your situation is hard! 
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Mahr- If she really cares about him, Brittany will appreciate an honest apology. *grins* It would be good, however, if Alvin promises her something, like, doing her chores for some time.
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- Well Alvin,you listen the marh oppinion!To me,sounds like a good idea!
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Alvin- Mmmm... offering a deal in exchange of forgiveness.. Yes, I can do that.
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- I will cheering by your success,Alvin!
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Alvin- Okay... but, can you look for Brittany for me? I'm a bit scared about this... what if she's still angry, and punches me the moment I appear?
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- No problem,Alvin.However before this,I need hand over this soft drinks to my girlfriend,Valerie and tell to her that I will late a little more to back.
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I back sometime later,and I say to Alvin:
- Now,let´s face the beast!
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They go looking for Brittany. They find her about to leave the beach.
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- Hy,Britanny!Alvin wanna talk with you!
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Brittany *frowns* If he's not apologizing, I'm out of here.
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- Well my dear,was exactly to apologise that he are here!
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Alvin- Yes... Brittany, I know I didn't do the right thing back there... look, this is hard for me, but... I wanna apologize for hurting your feelings and not respecting you.
Brittany notices he's now on his knees, begging for her forgiveness.
Britanny- I don't know. This isn't the first time.
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- C´mom Britanny!Don´t do this situation even worse!
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Brittany- But what if he finds a girl he thinks is 'sexier' than me, and dumps me on the spot? *groans* Luckily Minerva didn't even turn to see him, because she's not interested in Alvin, but if a pretty girl actually gives him permission...
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- Britanny,this is paranoia! 
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Alvin- And... Brit, I promise I'll do all your chores for a month if you forgive me!
Brittany- Mmmm... three months.
Alvin - Three? *pause and sighs* Okay, three.
Brittany- And since I'm taking self-defense lessons, you'll be my sparring partner for a whole year.
Alvin gulps in fear but nods.
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- Sparring partner by a whole year? 
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Brittany- It's a test for him. If he can stand being my sparring partner for a year, and not walk away or quit, it will be proof he actually cares about me.
Alvin- B-but you'll not hit me full force when we spar, right?
Brittany- You'll be wearing some protection, if you want. After all, I don't wanna kill you on Round One.
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- Britanny,this isn´t a good way to calm down Alvin...
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Brittany- Fine, I'll not go full force. Deal?
Alvin- Uh... okay, deal. *they shake hands* So, I'm forgiven?
Brittany- Mmmm... we'll have a sparring match next week; if after that you still think you can stand a whole year and be a loyal boyfriend, yes, I'll forgive you.
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"Britanny should have demand a shorter time to Alvin!Oh,my!This girl take hard!" - say I to myself,before talk:
- So,the problem is solved,I presume!
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Brittany *nods* Yes, it is. *whispering at him so Alvin doesn't hear* Actually, if he does good on his promise, it will be a shorter time; but I wanna see if he really compromises. *normal voice* Now, I'm leaving. *to Alvin* See you in two days so you can start doing my chores, and hope you're ready next week.
Once Brittany leaves, Alvin gets panicked.
Alvin- She's gonna destroy me... even if going soft on me, she's still too strong! *pause and grin* Hey, I got it; you guys can train me!
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- Hey Alvin,keep the cool!I think that Britanny can change her mind on the future,no hit so hard as you´re imagine,and forgive you before of the time that she fix!
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Alvin - I know, but I need to be, at least, a decent spar for her, so I can take it for the time she decides.
Mahr- Okay... guess I can give you some pointers.
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- You´re a good girl Marh! 
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Through the whole week, Mahr helps with Alvin's training; he becomes a bit better, but he's still not nearly as good as Brittany.
The day of the 'sparring match', Alvin arrives early, wearing his protective gear already (including a helmet and a vest).
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- I think that after your training with Marh,you´re better that before!C´mom Alvin!Show more trust in yourself!
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